It's Time To Disappear...

Exis · 02-06-2019, 08:46 AM

Ayo...

I'm an emcee who's tripped in his head,
Tailored flows have me rippin' your threads
Spittin' in red
You'll get burned sicker than VD,
You tried to piss & you bled
I emit vital fires,
That shower in spirals higher than powder in vials
Leave your face shattered in piles,
Slice & leave your matter in tiles
Grip your bladder & smile,
It's a sadistic message that you get from my smith & wesson
Where every inch'll get tested,
So let me strip the flesh off you chest
& slap this bitch in question all amidst the confusion & ruin,
I'm totally schoolin' these fools & suspendin' the truants
A bomb tickin' & movin' 'til I stick your lungs in my freezer
Right next to the coolant,
I erected this status of rap
You'll get ejected from life by a gat
That's all hazardous
Crap will be sadder than,
When Jesus of Nazareth
Got slapped up & battered bitch,
I'll have your frame completely fuckin' nailed here kid.

Geno · 02-06-2019, 09:34 AM

My end game was
"Grip your bladder and smile"

Word?

Exis · 02-07-2019, 05:52 AM

Dawg joke?...

PancakeBrah · 02-07-2019, 11:36 PM

For someone who always harps on bars over bullshit and whatever else you talk about you're really dumb. This is, like, a Cam'Ron verse without the charisma or talent. I look forward to your next Open Mic.

Exis · 02-09-2019, 07:47 AM

Please lol...

I emit vital fires,
That shower in spirals higher than powder in vials
Leave your face shattered in piles,
Slice & leave your matter in tiles

That destroys anythin' you've ever written...& this was my last verse here, hence the title dumb fuck.

PancakeBrah · 02-10-2019, 03:42 PM

None of that makes any sense.

How high does powder in vials shower, exactly?

How do you slice matter into tiles?

Idk. You probably do. That shit is better than I writing words.

PancakeBrah · 02-10-2019, 03:42 PM

Why is the fire vital?

Exis · 02-19-2019, 10:36 PM

I'll tell you what doesn't make sense, bitch...Your a fat long haired European hermit that thinks he's the greatest lyricist to grace a forum...You sit behind a screen givin' critique to others that are better than you!? Idiot, go fuck another glow stick you dense untalented maggot...

02-06-2019, 08:46 AM	#1
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	It's Time To Disappear... Ayo... I'm an emcee who's tripped in his head, Tailored flows have me rippin' your threads Spittin' in red You'll get burned sicker than VD, You tried to piss & you bled I emit vital fires, That shower in spirals higher than powder in vials Leave your face shattered in piles, Slice & leave your matter in tiles Grip your bladder & smile, It's a sadistic message that you get from my smith & wesson Where every inch'll get tested, So let me strip the flesh off you chest & slap this bitch in question all amidst the confusion & ruin, I'm totally schoolin' these fools & suspendin' the truants A bomb tickin' & movin' 'til I stick your lungs in my freezer Right next to the coolant, I erected this status of rap You'll get ejected from life by a gat That's all hazardous Crap will be sadder than, When Jesus of Nazareth Got slapped up & battered bitch, I'll have your frame completely fuckin' nailed here kid.

02-06-2019, 09:34 AM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	My end game was "Grip your bladder and smile" Word? __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

02-07-2019, 11:36 PM	#4
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	For someone who always harps on bars over bullshit and whatever else you talk about you're really dumb. This is, like, a Cam'Ron verse without the charisma or talent. I look forward to your next Open Mic. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

02-10-2019, 03:42 PM	#6
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	None of that makes any sense. How high does powder in vials shower, exactly? How do you slice matter into tiles? Idk. You probably do. That shit is better than I writing words. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

02-10-2019, 03:42 PM	#7
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Why is the fire vital? __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

02-07-2019, 05:52 AM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Dawg joke?...

02-09-2019, 07:47 AM	#5
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Please lol... I emit vital fires, That shower in spirals higher than powder in vials Leave your face shattered in piles, Slice & leave your matter in tiles That destroys anythin' you've ever written...& this was my last verse here, hence the title dumb fuck.

02-19-2019, 10:36 PM	#8
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I'll tell you what doesn't make sense, bitch...Your a fat long haired European hermit that thinks he's the greatest lyricist to grace a forum...You sit behind a screen givin' critique to others that are better than you!? Idiot, go fuck another glow stick you dense untalented maggot...