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Exis 02-06-2019 08:46 AM

It's Time To Disappear...
 
Ayo...

I'm an emcee who's tripped in his head,
Tailored flows have me rippin' your threads
Spittin' in red
You'll get burned sicker than VD,
You tried to piss & you bled
I emit vital fires,
That shower in spirals higher than powder in vials
Leave your face shattered in piles,
Slice & leave your matter in tiles
Grip your bladder & smile,
It's a sadistic message that you get from my smith & wesson
Where every inch'll get tested,
So let me strip the flesh off you chest
& slap this bitch in question all amidst the confusion & ruin,
I'm totally schoolin' these fools & suspendin' the truants
A bomb tickin' & movin' 'til I stick your lungs in my freezer
Right next to the coolant,
I erected this status of rap
You'll get ejected from life by a gat
That's all hazardous
Crap will be sadder than,
When Jesus of Nazareth
Got slapped up & battered bitch,
I'll have your frame completely fuckin' nailed here kid.

Geno 02-06-2019 09:34 AM

My end game was
"Grip your bladder and smile"

Word?

Exis 02-07-2019 05:52 AM

Dawg joke?...

PancakeBrah 02-07-2019 11:36 PM

For someone who always harps on bars over bullshit and whatever else you talk about you're really dumb. This is, like, a Cam'Ron verse without the charisma or talent. I look forward to your next Open Mic.

Exis 02-09-2019 07:47 AM

Please lol...

I emit vital fires,
That shower in spirals higher than powder in vials
Leave your face shattered in piles,
Slice & leave your matter in tiles

That destroys anythin' you've ever written...& this was my last verse here, hence the title dumb fuck.

PancakeBrah 02-10-2019 03:42 PM

None of that makes any sense.

How high does powder in vials shower, exactly?

How do you slice matter into tiles?

Idk. You probably do. That shit is better than I writing words.

PancakeBrah 02-10-2019 03:42 PM

Why is the fire vital?

Exis 02-19-2019 10:36 PM

I'll tell you what doesn't make sense, bitch...Your a fat long haired European hermit that thinks he's the greatest lyricist to grace a forum...You sit behind a screen givin' critique to others that are better than you!? Idiot, go fuck another glow stick you dense untalented maggot...


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