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What The Mind's Eye Sees
![]() I've been around since the beginning of Time Back when the only sound was the meeting of minds The Universe was so quiet then you could hear an atom divide We are all the stuff of stars and our life is divine Define existence ... What's it's purpose? I've might of missed it So I'll recycle thru this system 'til I righteously get it Decisive decisions Vices and vengeance If Karma's a bitch Than Life is a temptress The Phoenix has risen from the ash of the victims In a flash or an instant your life can be finished So live with conviction and fuck all the critics That try'n convince ya that science is proof ... That God is a fiction A figment of sorts Distorted to trick ya The Pope is a hoax ... the pagans are Christians The joke is that most ... won't even admit it Their skulls are like holes with no common sense in it The logic of dimwits, if God is a Ghost, the Father & Infant Let's follow linguistics that makes the religion so polytheistic This topic's offensive! I'm sorry, I'll switch it. Apologies given! A Congress of misfits That gets so dismissive If mentioned the privilege Afforded to those in control of the system Just combed the statistics for rates of convictions 'The Land of the Free' with the greatest percentage Of citizens sentenced to labor and prison The Natives evicted and stripped of their land For white picket fences ... the Pilgrims demand The Zionists reign leaves blood in the sand The cure for the virus contained in a strand of cannibis plants Illegal to own but poisonous brands are as common as colds The problem is most just sit in their homes And talk about change but never revolt The votes they cast seldomly go To elected officials upholding the oaths They solemnly swore as ethical code The Law of the Land is etched in stone: "An eye for an eye and bones for bones" The One Eyed Man is the king of the blind When nomadic clans give freedom for lines Borders and States and names on the map In the vastness of Space we're a rash on the ass Of God Just ask ... What he thinks of our Earth The things we build to kill and hurt We soil the water and flood the dirt With nuclear waste and trash ... We've cursed ... Our very existence and all of its worth Engaging in ignorance ignoring the words Of intelligent minds that warned of the worst!!! *Rebirth*
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Define existence ...
What's it's purpose? I've might of missed it So I'll recycle thru this system 'til I righteously get it Decisive decisions Vices and vengeance If Karma's a bitch Than Life is a temptress The Phoenix has risen from the ash of the victims In a flash or an instant your life can be finished ^^Nice... Their skulls are like holes with no common sense in it The logic of dimwits, if God is a Ghost, the Father & Infant Let's follow linguistics that makes the religion so polytheistic This topic's offensive! I'm sorry, I'll switch it. Apologies given! A Congress of misfits That gets so dismissive If mentioned the privilege Afforded to those in control of the system Just combed the statistics for rates of convictions ^^Woah! Dope bro...I havn't read content like this in a while, probably since the last Vulgar verse I peeped tbh...& that was eons back, y'all need to collab (if your not him already lol).This was just straight up raw truth delivered awesomely...When I read joints like this I'm always expectin' some corny thing to pop up, or flow forced like multies be there just for the sake of a multie bein' there for flow...not here though, this was fire SELF. Dope shit, stay upwards homie. & enter the 1-2 league bro...you have multiple rip you apart bars, apparently you only need one to dominate there ;) |
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Thanks bro. I appreciate that. I'll hit your joint up in a bit.
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Words to live life by.... Should hang as portraits on the wall... Art in its refinement.
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first half is dope you really went in with the rhyming and cadence.
Vices and vengeance If Karma's a bitch Than Life is a temptress The Phoenix has risen from the ash of the victims In a flash or an instant your life can be finished So live with conviction and fuck all the critics That try'n convince ya that science is proof ... That God is a fiction A figment of sorts Distorted to trick ya The Pope is a hoax ... the pagans are Christians The joke is that most ... won't even admit it Their skulls are like holes with no common sense in it The logic of dimwits, if God is a Ghost, the Father & Infant Let's follow linguistics that makes the religion so polytheistic This topic's offensive! I'm sorry, I'll switch it. Apologies given! After this line it kind of jumped around with the subject matter and gripes of those who hold power or the way things are. It felt a little bit preachy and didn't rhyme as sick as the first part. |
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Solid, I read every word
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