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Birds Eye View, The Mynd's I 2

What The Mind's Eye Sees
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I've been around since the beginning of Time
Back when the only sound was the meeting of minds
The Universe was so quiet then you could hear an atom divide
We are all the stuff of stars and our life is divine
Define existence ...
What's it's purpose?
I've might of missed it
So I'll recycle thru this system
'til I righteously get it
Decisive decisions
Vices and vengeance
If Karma's a bitch
Than Life is a temptress
The Phoenix has risen from the ash of the victims
In a flash or an instant your life can be finished
So live with conviction and fuck all the critics
That try'n convince ya that science is proof ...
That God is a fiction
A figment of sorts
Distorted to trick ya
The Pope is a hoax ... the pagans are Christians
The joke is that most ... won't even admit it
Their skulls are like holes with no common sense in it
The logic of dimwits, if God is a Ghost, the Father & Infant
Let's follow linguistics that makes the religion so polytheistic
This topic's offensive! I'm sorry, I'll switch it. Apologies given!
A Congress of misfits
That gets so dismissive
If mentioned the privilege
Afforded to those in control of the system
Just combed the statistics for rates of convictions
'The Land of the Free' with the greatest percentage
Of citizens sentenced to labor and prison
The Natives evicted and stripped of their land
For white picket fences ... the Pilgrims demand
The Zionists reign leaves blood in the sand
The cure for the virus contained in a strand of cannibis plants
Illegal to own but poisonous brands are as common as colds
The problem is most just sit in their homes
And talk about change but never revolt
The votes they cast seldomly go
To elected officials upholding the oaths
They solemnly swore as ethical code
The Law of the Land is etched in stone:
"An eye for an eye and bones for bones"
The One Eyed Man is the king of the blind
When nomadic clans give freedom for lines
Borders and States and names on the map
In the vastness of Space we're a rash on the ass
Of God
Just ask ...
What he thinks of our Earth
The things we build to kill and hurt
We soil the water and flood the dirt
With nuclear waste and trash ...
We've cursed ...
Our very existence and all of its worth
Engaging in ignorance ignoring the words
Of intelligent minds that warned of the worst!!!
*Rebirth*

Define existence ...
What's it's purpose?
I've might of missed it
So I'll recycle thru this system
'til I righteously get it
Decisive decisions
Vices and vengeance
If Karma's a bitch
Than Life is a temptress
The Phoenix has risen from the ash of the victims
In a flash or an instant your life can be finished

^^Nice...

Their skulls are like holes with no common sense in it
The logic of dimwits, if God is a Ghost, the Father & Infant
Let's follow linguistics that makes the religion so polytheistic
This topic's offensive! I'm sorry, I'll switch it. Apologies given!
A Congress of misfits
That gets so dismissive
If mentioned the privilege
Afforded to those in control of the system
Just combed the statistics for rates of convictions

^^Woah!

Dope bro...I havn't read content like this in a while, probably since the last Vulgar verse I peeped tbh...& that was eons back, y'all need to collab (if your not him already lol).This was just straight up raw truth delivered awesomely...When I read joints like this I'm always expectin' some corny thing to pop up, or flow forced like multies be there just for the sake of a multie bein' there for flow...not here though, this was fire SELF.

Dope shit, stay upwards homie.

& enter the 1-2 league bro...you have multiple rip you apart bars, apparently you only need one to dominate there ;)

Thanks bro. I appreciate that. I'll hit your joint up in a bit.

Words to live life by.... Should hang as portraits on the wall... Art in its refinement.

first half is dope you really went in with the rhyming and cadence.
Vices and vengeance
If Karma's a bitch
Than Life is a temptress
The Phoenix has risen from the ash of the victims
In a flash or an instant your life can be finished
So live with conviction and fuck all the critics
That try'n convince ya that science is proof ...
That God is a fiction
A figment of sorts
Distorted to trick ya
The Pope is a hoax ... the pagans are Christians
The joke is that most ... won't even admit it
Their skulls are like holes with no common sense in it
The logic of dimwits, if God is a Ghost, the Father & Infant
Let's follow linguistics that makes the religion so polytheistic
This topic's offensive! I'm sorry, I'll switch it. Apologies given!

After this line it kind of jumped around with the subject matter and gripes of those who hold power or the way things are. It felt a little bit preachy and didn't rhyme as sick as the first part.

Solid, I read every word