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Wutzit Tewya · 05-12-2018, 08:53 PM

Watch my head spinnin in circles. I could text until I'm purple in the flesh. The next to serve you vultures death. I'll flex and hurtchu. Take a step and I'll disperse you through the vents. My breath'll burn you til there's nothin left but steam. I'm drippin sweat. I'll fuckin murk you. My intent: to better serve you what is meant to end ya curfew. You ain't home in bed by ten. You at the place they drove the hearse to. Who you rehearse to musta gassed you up. And now I mustard gas you. Rut Row Raggy..I think I might have to unmask you. Gh-Gh-Gh-Gh-ghost. Think I'm bout to make a toast. Glasses clinkin. Let me bring in tonight's honorary roast. I ain't most. I ain't any. I'm not even fucking here. Lemme whisper zero decibels to make it loud and clear. . . .

ACTIVATE SELF · 05-12-2018, 09:28 PM

Smooth drop my dude. Flowed like h20. That last line was fire. I enjoyed this. Keep scribing.

Aero · 05-12-2018, 09:54 PM

Awful.

Geno · 05-13-2018, 07:11 AM

Lol. Content and structure were both wiers. Flowed well though. Glad to have you around.

05-12-2018, 08:53 PM	#1
Wutzit Tewya Junior Member Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 12 Rep Power: 0	Freewrite Watch my head spinnin in circles. I could text until I'm purple in the flesh. The next to serve you vultures death. I'll flex and hurtchu. Take a step and I'll disperse you through the vents. My breath'll burn you til there's nothin left but steam. I'm drippin sweat. I'll fuckin murk you. My intent: to better serve you what is meant to end ya curfew. You ain't home in bed by ten. You at the place they drove the hearse to. Who you rehearse to musta gassed you up. And now I mustard gas you. Rut Row Raggy..I think I might have to unmask you. Gh-Gh-Gh-Gh-ghost. Think I'm bout to make a toast. Glasses clinkin. Let me bring in tonight's honorary roast. I ain't most. I ain't any. I'm not even fucking here. Lemme whisper zero decibels to make it loud and clear. . . . Last edited by Wutzit Tewya; 05-12-2018 at 08:56 PM.

05-12-2018, 09:54 PM	#3
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,826 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Awful. __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

05-13-2018, 07:11 AM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Lol. Content and structure were both wiers. Flowed well though. Glad to have you around. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*