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Wutzit Tewya 05-12-2018 08:53 PM

Freewrite
 
Watch my head spinnin in circles. I could text until I'm purple in the flesh. The next to serve you vultures death. I'll flex and hurtchu. Take a step and I'll disperse you through the vents. My breath'll burn you til there's nothin left but steam. I'm drippin sweat. I'll fuckin murk you. My intent: to better serve you what is meant to end ya curfew. You ain't home in bed by ten. You at the place they drove the hearse to. Who you rehearse to musta gassed you up. And now I mustard gas you. Rut Row Raggy..I think I might have to unmask you. Gh-Gh-Gh-Gh-ghost. Think I'm bout to make a toast. Glasses clinkin. Let me bring in tonight's honorary roast. I ain't most. I ain't any. I'm not even fucking here. Lemme whisper zero decibels to make it loud and clear. . . .

ACTIVATE SELF 05-12-2018 09:28 PM

Smooth drop my dude. Flowed like h20. That last line was fire. I enjoyed this. Keep scribing.

Aero 05-12-2018 09:54 PM

Awful.

Geno 05-13-2018 07:11 AM

Lol. Content and structure were both wiers. Flowed well though. Glad to have you around.


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