Enbombz vs Cred - CRED WINS

[Orc]

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday Feb 22nd and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

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@Enbombz @Cred

[Enbombz]

Check 10-12 is good

[Cred]

Cash.

[Cred]

Listen up Sour Joog...


Ratchet tucked, u ain’t man enuf. My bullets got good aim
Gas em up n I promise Diesel be part of Sour like a kush strain
I’ll knock u the fuck out. so don’t claim u got heart, stop it
Or I’m dropping shit quik wit more punches than u asked for.. aka Barcotic
Ur girl’s a slut too. Y’all argue why she don’t even fuck you
This is marriage counseling.. I’m the guy on the side ur bitch opens up to
Won’t hesitate to stab u. Permanent scars if u ever dodgin a fee
Think traditional tattoo - I’ll put a Knife Thru ur Heart so erybody can see
Pop up at his fortress n I’m sprayin off wit tecs to hit em
At ur door step Bomb, blastin in ur face like Austin Texas victims

[Enbombz]

Alright Mr URL..

See Gaslight don't know about how you've tried to fool ya peers
But you know all about gaslight..You've abused the biting rules for years
S.o.b think he can Bury me? This man is kidding right?
Better use caution, I got infinite ways to fuck you up worse than Finny's life
I'll blam this man for cash in hand, Take the shotty n I snatch a life
On my Altered Carbon shit, This just another body if the Stack is right
My latest gun called Black Panther, I'm proud of this shit
I'll be Shuri see the New Tech before it go River Tribe n put a Round in his Lip
This a taste of your own medicine, Taken down a tier
This Mack to the side of ya head put more than a Flavor in ya ear

[Barcotic]

Ratchet tucked, u ain’t man enuf. My bullets got good aim
Gas em up n I promise Diesel be part of Sour like a kush strain

decent, half the concept is played but i like the np aspect

I’ll knock u the fuck out. so don’t claim u got heart, stop it
Or I’m dropping shit quik wit more punches than u asked for.. aka Barcotic

ehh, too simple for me but not a total miss either

Ur girl’s a slut too. Y’all argue why she don’t even fuck you
This is marriage counseling.. I’m the guy on the side ur bitch opens up to

dope

Won’t hesitate to stab u. Permanent scars if u ever dodgin a fee
Think traditional tattoo - I’ll put a Knife Thru ur Heart so erybody can see

cool

Pop up at his fortress n I’m sprayin off wit tecs to hit em
At ur door step Bomb, blastin in ur face like Austin Texas victims

nahh

vs

See Gaslight don't know about how you've tried to fool ya peers
But you know all about gaslight..You've abused the biting rules for years

not bad, the tie in wasnt that great tho

S.o.b think he can Bury me? This man is kidding right?
Better use caution, I got infinite ways to fuck you up worse than Finny's life

ehh, too simple

I'll blam this man for cash in hand, Take the shotty n I snatch a life
On my Altered Carbon shit, This just another body if the Stack is right

cool

My latest gun called Black Panther, I'm proud of this shit
I'll be Shuri see the New Tech before it go River Tribe n put a Round in his Lip

i hate "round" concepts, they dont even make sense & are overdone. other half of the concept was cool, but this is still a miss

This a taste of your own medicine, Taken down a tier
This Mack to the side of ya head put more than a Flavor in ya ear

nah man

v/cred
by about a bar n a half

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Cred

Ratchet tucked, u ain’t man enuf. My bullets got good aim
Gas em up n I promise Diesel be part of Sour like a kush strain
Nice opener
I’ll knock u the fuck out. so don’t claim u got heart, stop it
Or I’m dropping shit quik wit more punches than u asked for.. aka Barcotic
Loool good
Ur girl’s a slut too. Y’all argue why she don’t even fuck you
This is marriage counseling.. I’m the guy on the side ur bitch opens up to
Dope
Won’t hesitate to stab u. Permanent scars if u ever dodgin a fee
Think traditional tattoo - I’ll put a Knife Thru ur Heart so erybody can see
Cool
Pop up at his fortress n I’m sprayin off wit tecs to hit em
At ur door step Bomb, blastin in ur face like Austin Texas victims
Decent closer

Originally Posted by Enbombz

See Gaslight don't know about how you've tried to fool ya peers
But you know all about gaslight..You've abused the biting rules for years
Not feeling this
S.o.b think he can Bury me? This man is kidding right?
Better use caution, I got infinite ways to fuck you up worse than Finny's life
Lol nasty
I'll blam this man for cash in hand, Take the shotty n I snatch a life
On my Altered Carbon shit, This just another body if the Stack is right
Dope
My latest gun called Black Panther, I'm proud of this shit
I'll be Shuri see the New Tech before it go River Tribe n put a Round in his Lip
Cool, but you overstuffed it a bit
This a taste of your own medicine, Taken down a tier
This Mack to the side of ya head put more than a Flavor in ya ear
Predictable, but good closer

VOTE CRED Bombz was solid, but Cred's bars stood out more imo.

[Incredible]

Cred:

"Ratchet tucked, u ain’t man enuf. My bullets got good aim
Gas em up n I promise Diesel be part of Sour like a kush strain"

"I’ll knock u the fuck out. so don’t claim u got heart, stop it
Or I’m dropping shit quik wit more punches than u asked for.. aka Barcotic"

"Ur girl’s a slut too. Y’all argue why she don’t even fuck you
This is marriage counseling.. I’m the guy on the side ur bitch opens up to"

Enbombz:

"S.o.b think he can Bury me? This man is kidding right?
Better use caution, I got infinite ways to fuck you up worse than Finny's life"

"I'll blam this man for cash in hand, Take the shotty n I snatch a life
On my Altered Carbon shit, This just another body if the Stack is right"


I felt like both didn't bring their best. I have definitely seen better from Sour Joog, aka Enbombz. The black panther line kind of lost me for the rest of that verse, and I felt like Cred did a straight through overall better verse here. By me saying I have seen better I'm not saying its horrible by any means. Still was a decent battle to read. Props to both for showing early. Both went in ready just think Cred is the winner in this one.

[Profit]

Cred opener is played now on him but u twisted it a bit to land it, barcotic line was dope, marriage counseling was fire,l as well as traditional tattoo, & ur last bar was ok. Dope verse



Enbombz ur opener was ok, finnys life was niiice, altered carbon was dope & the next bar had a little too much going on imo. Flavor in ya ear was oooook..


Dope match real close.. I feel as if bombz woulda landed his 4th he'd a edged this but I got to go cred on consistency no real misses.. this battle was hit tho props.. vote cred

[DynamiCz]

Ratchet tucked, u ain’t man enuf. My bullets got good aim
Gas em up n I promise Diesel be part of Sour like a kush strain

Dope

I’ll knock u the fuck out. so don’t claim u got heart, stop it
Or I’m dropping shit quik wit more punches than u asked for.. aka Barcotic

Lol nice

Ur girl’s a slut too. Y’all argue why she don’t even fuck you
This is marriage counseling.. I’m the guy on the side ur bitch opens up to

Fiyaaa


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S.o.b think he can Bury me? This man is kidding right?
Better use caution, I got infinite ways to fuck you up worse than Finny's life

Niceeee

My latest gun called Black Panther, I'm proud of this shit
I'll be Shuri see the New Tech before it go River Tribe n put a Round in his Lip

Coo

This was close, I'm going with Cred on this one. That marriage counseling line gave cred the edge in this battle. Dope shit to both!

Vote-Cred

[Blue Bayou]

Ratchet tucked, u ain’t man enuf. My bullets got good aim
Gas em up n I promise Diesel be part of Sour like a kush strain
^nice np flip
Ur girl’s a slut too. Y’all argue why she don’t even fuck you
This is marriage counseling.. I’m the guy on the side ur bitch opens up to
^fuck yeah, dope bar
Won’t hesitate to stab u. Permanent scars if u ever dodgin a fee
Think traditional tattoo - I’ll put a Knife Thru ur Heart so erybody can see
^cool attack line


Other two were mehh & too simple to me... good 10'er
vs.


I'll blam this man for cash in hand, Take the shotty n I snatch a life
On my Altered Carbon shit, This just another body if the Stack is right
^dope attack line
My latest gun called Black Panther, I'm proud of this shit
I'll be Shuri see the New Tech before it go River Tribe n put a Round in his Lip
^this concept is dope.. a bit rough around the edges but points for creativity


Cool battle.... I've got Cred by a bar and a bit more consistency


Vote - Cred

[Pinot Grij]

Cred -- slow start. that sour diesel shit been used on him a couple weeks ago.
The barcotic line was aight but not too harsh.
Opens up and tattoo lines were flames. Nice angle on the concepts. Dope.
Wasn't wowed by the closer.

Joog -- wasn't really feelin the first two bars. Altered Carbon is a super specific reference, the flip was just alright. The Black Panther line had a lot of working parts.. in the end, it's a "round" wp which I don't rate that highly anymore because its been overdone to death. The mack line is timely, but nothing about the play links it to his death. I think you were running on empty this week.

Vote -- Cred