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Old 07-04-2018, 12:59 PM   #1
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The Architect of synchronicity intellect and simplicity,
they stay visibly missing V with revisionist history.
My vision is victory, no revision in perfect calligraphy,
awaken the victims of amygdala wizardry.
Conflicting with infancy, critical condition your infantry,
forsaken the missives of thinking malignancy.
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Literally Athmospheric electricity combined with Divine expectancy,
entwined in a rhyme, my mind's design shines in defined complexity.
Speaking the signs which consigns the lot of stigmata to perplexity,
professional rhyme flexing, incredibly brought evidence of what text could be.
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Old 07-04-2018, 01:13 PM   #2
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Old 07-04-2018, 02:24 PM   #3
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Thank you
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Old 07-04-2018, 03:24 PM   #4
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Old 07-04-2018, 04:50 PM   #5
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i hope it sofuce
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Old 07-05-2018, 01:16 AM   #6
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My vision is victory, no revision in perfect calligraphy,
awaken the victims of amygdala wizardry.
Conflicting with infancy, critical condition your infantry,
forsaken the missives of thinking malignancy.

^^That's off it's guts.

The whole verse is dope but yeah, that section is flames man.
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Old 07-05-2018, 03:50 PM   #7
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super sick the first 4 had me already trapped in your Vortex of rhyme
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"awaken the victims of amygdala wizardry.

^Dope.

I dug the metaphysical perspective of your esoteric rhyme style. Plus, the flows were hot. Props.
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