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veritas 07-04-2018 12:59 PM

THE ARCHITEXT SPEAKS...
 
The Architect of synchronicity intellect and simplicity,
they stay visibly missing V with revisionist history.
My vision is victory, no revision in perfect calligraphy,
awaken the victims of amygdala wizardry.
Conflicting with infancy, critical condition your infantry,
forsaken the missives of thinking malignancy.
Either win or learn, discern CERN, speaking self-sufficieny
Where's waldo in Walden? Breathing health in liberally.
Literally Athmospheric electricity combined with Divine expectancy,
entwined in a rhyme, my mind's design shines in defined complexity.
Speaking the signs which consigns the lot of stigmata to perplexity,
professional rhyme flexing, incredibly brought evidence of what text could be.

Inno 07-04-2018 01:13 PM

First 3 bars are fire!!!

veritas 07-04-2018 02:24 PM

Thank you

PancakeBrah 07-04-2018 03:24 PM

It's like Canibus but different

veritas 07-04-2018 04:50 PM

i hope it sofuce

Exis 07-05-2018 01:16 AM

My vision is victory, no revision in perfect calligraphy,
awaken the victims of amygdala wizardry.
Conflicting with infancy, critical condition your infantry,
forsaken the missives of thinking malignancy.

^^That's off it's guts.

The whole verse is dope but yeah, that section is flames man.

TeckNeek 07-05-2018 03:50 PM

super sick the first 4 had me already trapped in your Vortex of rhyme

ACTIVATE SELF 07-06-2018 03:26 PM

"awaken the victims of amygdala wizardry.

^Dope.

I dug the metaphysical perspective of your esoteric rhyme style. Plus, the flows were hot. Props.


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