Kirk Clapplin vs Plot - KIRK/BM WINS

Orc · 12-27-2017, 06:11 AM

Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

@Kirk CLapplin @Plot

Basic M · 12-27-2017, 08:41 AM

10-12 is good

Plot · 12-27-2017, 10:31 PM

Sounds good man

Basic M · 12-30-2017, 02:30 AM

Swaggin' when the tech clap, its a show when i wreck cats
Catch a shot on the block 1 legged, thats a Dirk step back
2 cannons at ya spine. Hittin' the canvas from this duel threat
Arms behind ya back'll leave u flipped, look at that german suplex
Facing a true animal here, 4 lb leavin' u rocky
U can live or die w/ that beast at hand like its tomagotchi
Ninja stars by the dozen, free flowin' if pissed off
piece hittin' from a distance leaves u rattled, homie this isnt disc golf
Invade ya room window. Chop chop till im tired
Axe to ya back as u clear the room. Now ur a fire fighter
Ya sluts r coked up. Every broad u bang is lame, turd
If ur doggin these hoes its cuz ur bringin' home half dead birds

#PutFootsOnEm

Plot · 01-04-2018, 08:02 AM

gonna need the ext, working like a motherfucker

Plot · 01-05-2018, 09:43 AM

Want war with King Kong, Kim Jon? take your finger off that trigger,
Coz you'll just get trumped in all facets, my buttons bigger.
Kirk your concepts are a snorefest, your style is fucking boring,
Your text career is about to bite the big one, R.I.P. Richard Corey.
When I pull out my giant tec its violence next, shit gets gory,
And the B.F.G.s about to take you off to napland, no childrens story.
A silloute with a cigarette, you wont even smell the smoke,
Stalk up in steathmode, and doubletap ya face, give you a Zelph Nose.
Alias maybe? Vertias back from RB? we all know he tried to mod that site,
And we know your a faggot Kirk, but this couldnt really be that life.fatwife.
Your climbing Everest just to get pushed off the precipice and skydive,
Coz Plot just fucked up Klap worse than Orc and Hawk trying to high-five.

BROKE LESNAR · 01-05-2018, 04:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Basic M

Swaggin' when the tech clap, its a show when i wreck cats
Catch a shot on the block 1 legged, thats a Dirk step back

☆☆☆

2 cannons at ya spine. Hittin' the canvas from this duel threat
Arms behind ya back'll leave u flipped, look at that german suplex

☆☆☆☆☆

Facing a true animal here, 4 lb leavin' u rocky
U can live or die w/ that beast at hand like its tomagotchi

☆☆☆

Ninja stars by the dozen, free flowin' if pissed off
piece hittin' from a distance leaves u rattled, homie this isnt disc golf

☆☆☆☆☆

Invade ya room window. Chop chop till im tired
Axe to ya back as u clear the room. Now ur a fire fighter

☆

Ya sluts r coked up. Every broad u bang is lame, turd
If ur doggin these hoes its cuz ur bringin' home half dead birds

☆☆☆ lmao

#PutFootsOnEm

Quote:

Originally Posted by Plot

Want war with King Kong, Kim Jon? take your finger off that trigger,
Coz you'll just get trumped in all facets, my buttons bigger.

☆

Kirk your concepts are a snorefest, your style is fucking boring,
Your text career is about to bite the big one, R.I.P. Richard Corey.

☆

When I pull out my giant tec its violence next, shit gets gory,
And the B.F.G.s about to take you off to napland, no childrens story.

☆☆☆

A silloute with a cigarette, you wont even smell the smoke,
Stalk up in steathmode, and doubletap ya face, give you a Zelph Nose.

☆☆

Alias maybe? Vertias back from RB? we all know he tried to mod that site,
And we know your a faggot Kirk, but this couldnt really be that life.fatwife.

☆

Your climbing Everest just to get pushed off the precipice and skydive,
Coz Plot just fucked up Klap worse than Orc and Hawk trying to high-five.

☆

I have Basic taking this by a comfortable margin. Plot's execution was weird and sloppy and times, there was also some difficulty in effectively delivering the punches.

v-Basic M

Pinot Grij · 01-05-2018, 07:31 PM

Basic -- everything but firefighter was flames (ha!)... it was all similar construction but the aggression and wp was on point. Really solid verse.

Plot -- opener is funny, BFGs is cool, rest was cool. I think it was hard to match the originailty in Basic's verse.

Vote -- Basic

For Battling · 01-06-2018, 05:51 AM

Swaggin' when the tech clap, its a show when i wreck cats
Catch a shot on the block 1 legged, thats a Dirk step back
hmm ok
2 cannons at ya spine. Hittin' the canvas from this duel threat
Arms behind ya back'll leave u flipped, look at that german suplex
ok cool
Facing a true animal here, 4 lb leavin' u rocky
U can live or die w/ that beast at hand like its tomagotchi
pretty nice here, cool line all around tbh
Ninja stars by the dozen, free flowin' if pissed off
piece hittin' from a distance leaves u rattled, homie this isnt disc golf
phew, fire
Invade ya room window. Chop chop till im tired
Axe to ya back as u clear the room. Now ur a fire fighter
decent
Ya sluts r coked up. Every broad u bang is lame, turd
If ur doggin these hoes its cuz ur bringin' home half dead birds
nah

Vs

Want war with King Kong, Kim Jon? take your finger off that trigger,
Coz you'll just get trumped in all facets, my buttons bigger.
nah man
Kirk your concepts are a snorefest, your style is fucking boring,
Your text career is about to bite the big one, R.I.P. Richard Corey.
kind of a weird execution here but not bad
When I pull out my giant tec its violence next, shit gets gory,
And the B.F.G.s about to take you off to napland, no childrens story.
ha, alright
A silloute with a cigarette, you wont even smell the smoke,
Stalk up in steathmode, and doubletap ya face, give you a Zelph Nose.
not a good zelph line
Alias maybe? Vertias back from RB? we all know he tried to mod that site,
And we know your a faggot Kirk, but this couldnt really be that life.fatwife.
nah this one wasn’t good
Your climbing Everest just to get pushed off the precipice and skydive,
Coz Plot just fucked up Klap worse than Orc and Hawk trying to high-five.
lmfaooooo dope

Good verse from Kirk, only had 1 clear miss. Plot had LOTB with the Orc/hawk line but had 3 misses.

Vote Kirk

ill nik-A · 01-06-2018, 06:33 AM

Kirk had the better verse. Some of the wordplay was good but I feel u need to attack ur opponent more. Still solid. Plot, I don’t know man, the button line is just weird. RC Line was too. i Think what hurts u is the construction of the punch. Feels like u write ur set-ups and adopt ur punch to it for rhyming sake

Kirk wins

WRATH · 01-06-2018, 07:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Basic M

Swaggin' when the tech clap, its a show when i wreck cats
Catch a shot on the block 1 legged, thats a Dirk step back

Okay

2 cannons at ya spine. Hittin' the canvas from this duel threat
Arms behind ya back'll leave u flipped, look at that german suplex

It's like a weak version of a pedigree line

Facing a true animal here, 4 lb leavin' u rocky
U can live or die w/ that beast at hand like its tomagotchi

Its ok, execution needed more

Ninja stars by the dozen, free flowin' if pissed off
piece hittin' from a distance leaves u rattled, homie this isnt disc golf

Probably okay

Invade ya room window. Chop chop till im tired
Axe to ya back as u clear the room. Now ur a fire fighter

Losing focus

Ya sluts r coked up. Every broad u bang is lame, turd
If ur doggin these hoes its cuz ur bringin' home half dead birds

Poor execution

#PutFootsOnEm

Want war with King Kong, Kim Jon? take your finger off that trigger,
Coz you'll just get trumped in all facets, my buttons bigger.

Weak

Kirk your concepts are a snorefest, your style is fucking boring,
Your text career is about to bite the big one, R.I.P. Richard Corey.

Okay

When I pull out my giant tec its violence next, shit gets gory,
And the B.F.G.s about to take you off to napland, no childrens story.fat wife

Heh

A silloute with a cigarette, you wont even smell the smoke,
Stalk up in steathmode, and doubletap ya face, give you a Zelph Nose.

Lol saucey

Alias maybe? Vertias back from RB? we all know he tried to mod that site,
And we know your a faggot Kirk, but this couldnt really be that life.fatwife.

Eh

Your climbing Everest just to get pushed off the precipice and skydive,
Coz Plot just fucked up Klap worse than Orc and Hawk trying to high-five.

Nah

I was looking for a reason to vote for you plot but overall strength leans towards the first guy,

V - kc

12-27-2017, 06:11 AM	#1
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	Kirk Clapplin vs Plot - KIRK/BM WINS Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! @Kirk CLapplin @Plot

01-05-2018, 09:43 AM	#6
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	Want war with King Kong, Kim Jon? take your finger off that trigger, Coz you'll just get trumped in all facets, my buttons bigger. Kirk your concepts are a snorefest, your style is fucking boring, Your text career is about to bite the big one, R.I.P. Richard Corey. When I pull out my giant tec its violence next, shit gets gory, And the B.F.G.s about to take you off to napland, no childrens story. A silloute with a cigarette, you wont even smell the smoke, Stalk up in steathmode, and doubletap ya face, give you a Zelph Nose. Alias maybe? Vertias back from RB? we all know he tried to mod that site, And we know your a faggot Kirk, but this couldnt really be that life.fatwife. Your climbing Everest just to get pushed off the precipice and skydive, Coz Plot just fucked up Klap worse than Orc and Hawk trying to high-five. Last edited by Plot; 01-05-2018 at 09:53 AM.

01-05-2018, 07:31 PM	#8
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Basic -- everything but firefighter was flames (ha!)... it was all similar construction but the aggression and wp was on point. Really solid verse. Plot -- opener is funny, BFGs is cool, rest was cool. I think it was hard to match the originailty in Basic's verse. Vote -- Basic __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

01-06-2018, 06:33 AM	#10
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	Kirk had the better verse. Some of the wordplay was good but I feel u need to attack ur opponent more. Still solid. Plot, I don’t know man, the button line is just weird. RC Line was too. i Think what hurts u is the construction of the punch. Feels like u write ur set-ups and adopt ur punch to it for rhyming sake Kirk wins __________________ Grumpy old man.

12-27-2017, 08:41 AM	#2
Basic M Kirk Clapplin Join Date: Oct 2017 Posts: 27 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 3254860	10-12 is good

12-27-2017, 10:31 PM	#3
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	Sounds good man

12-30-2017, 02:30 AM	#4
Basic M Kirk Clapplin Join Date: Oct 2017 Posts: 27 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 3254860	Swaggin' when the tech clap, its a show when i wreck cats Catch a shot on the block 1 legged, thats a Dirk step back 2 cannons at ya spine. Hittin' the canvas from this duel threat Arms behind ya back'll leave u flipped, look at that german suplex Facing a true animal here, 4 lb leavin' u rocky U can live or die w/ that beast at hand like its tomagotchi Ninja stars by the dozen, free flowin' if pissed off piece hittin' from a distance leaves u rattled, homie this isnt disc golf Invade ya room window. Chop chop till im tired Axe to ya back as u clear the room. Now ur a fire fighter Ya sluts r coked up. Every broad u bang is lame, turd If ur doggin these hoes its cuz ur bringin' home half dead birds #PutFootsOnEm

01-04-2018, 08:02 AM	#5
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	gonna need the ext, working like a motherfucker

01-06-2018, 05:51 AM	#9
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Swaggin' when the tech clap, its a show when i wreck cats Catch a shot on the block 1 legged, thats a Dirk step back hmm ok 2 cannons at ya spine. Hittin' the canvas from this duel threat Arms behind ya back'll leave u flipped, look at that german suplex ok cool Facing a true animal here, 4 lb leavin' u rocky U can live or die w/ that beast at hand like its tomagotchi pretty nice here, cool line all around tbh Ninja stars by the dozen, free flowin' if pissed off piece hittin' from a distance leaves u rattled, homie this isnt disc golf phew, fire Invade ya room window. Chop chop till im tired Axe to ya back as u clear the room. Now ur a fire fighter decent Ya sluts r coked up. Every broad u bang is lame, turd If ur doggin these hoes its cuz ur bringin' home half dead birds nah Vs Want war with King Kong, Kim Jon? take your finger off that trigger, Coz you'll just get trumped in all facets, my buttons bigger. nah man Kirk your concepts are a snorefest, your style is fucking boring, Your text career is about to bite the big one, R.I.P. Richard Corey. kind of a weird execution here but not bad When I pull out my giant tec its violence next, shit gets gory, And the B.F.G.s about to take you off to napland, no childrens story. ha, alright A silloute with a cigarette, you wont even smell the smoke, Stalk up in steathmode, and doubletap ya face, give you a Zelph Nose. not a good zelph line Alias maybe? Vertias back from RB? we all know he tried to mod that site, And we know your a faggot Kirk, but this couldnt really be that life.fatwife. nah this one wasn’t good Your climbing Everest just to get pushed off the precipice and skydive, Coz Plot just fucked up Klap worse than Orc and Hawk trying to high-five. lmfaooooo dope Good verse from Kirk, only had 1 clear miss. Plot had LOTB with the Orc/hawk line but had 3 misses. Vote Kirk