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Orc 12-27-2017 06:11 AM

Kirk Clapplin vs Plot - KIRK/BM WINS
 
Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition


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FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

@Kirk CLapplin @Plot

Basic M 12-27-2017 08:41 AM

10-12 is good

Plot 12-27-2017 10:31 PM

Sounds good man

Basic M 12-30-2017 02:30 AM

Swaggin' when the tech clap, its a show when i wreck cats
Catch a shot on the block 1 legged, thats a Dirk step back
2 cannons at ya spine. Hittin' the canvas from this duel threat
Arms behind ya back'll leave u flipped, look at that german suplex
Facing a true animal here, 4 lb leavin' u rocky
U can live or die w/ that beast at hand like its tomagotchi
Ninja stars by the dozen, free flowin' if pissed off
piece hittin' from a distance leaves u rattled, homie this isnt disc golf
Invade ya room window. Chop chop till im tired
Axe to ya back as u clear the room. Now ur a fire fighter
Ya sluts r coked up. Every broad u bang is lame, turd
If ur doggin these hoes its cuz ur bringin' home half dead birds

#PutFootsOnEm

Plot 01-04-2018 08:02 AM

gonna need the ext, working like a motherfucker

Plot 01-05-2018 09:43 AM

Want war with King Kong, Kim Jon? take your finger off that trigger,
Coz you'll just get trumped in all facets, my buttons bigger.
Kirk your concepts are a snorefest, your style is fucking boring,
Your text career is about to bite the big one, R.I.P. Richard Corey.
When I pull out my giant tec its violence next, shit gets gory,
And the B.F.G.s about to take you off to napland, no childrens story.
A silloute with a cigarette, you wont even smell the smoke,
Stalk up in steathmode, and doubletap ya face, give you a Zelph Nose.
Alias maybe? Vertias back from RB? we all know he tried to mod that site,
And we know your a faggot Kirk, but this couldnt really be that life.fatwife.
Your climbing Everest just to get pushed off the precipice and skydive,
Coz Plot just fucked up Klap worse than Orc and Hawk trying to high-five.

BROKE LESNAR 01-05-2018 04:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Basic M (Post 631956)
Swaggin' when the tech clap, its a show when i wreck cats
Catch a shot on the block 1 legged, thats a Dirk step back

☆☆☆

2 cannons at ya spine. Hittin' the canvas from this duel threat
Arms behind ya back'll leave u flipped, look at that german suplex

☆☆☆☆☆

Facing a true animal here, 4 lb leavin' u rocky
U can live or die w/ that beast at hand like its tomagotchi

☆☆☆

Ninja stars by the dozen, free flowin' if pissed off
piece hittin' from a distance leaves u rattled, homie this isnt disc golf

☆☆☆☆☆

Invade ya room window. Chop chop till im tired
Axe to ya back as u clear the room. Now ur a fire fighter



Ya sluts r coked up. Every broad u bang is lame, turd
If ur doggin these hoes its cuz ur bringin' home half dead birds

☆☆☆ lmao

#PutFootsOnEm



Quote:

Originally Posted by Plot (Post 632714)
Want war with King Kong, Kim Jon? take your finger off that trigger,
Coz you'll just get trumped in all facets, my buttons bigger.



Kirk your concepts are a snorefest, your style is fucking boring,
Your text career is about to bite the big one, R.I.P. Richard Corey.



When I pull out my giant tec its violence next, shit gets gory,
And the B.F.G.s about to take you off to napland, no childrens story.

☆☆☆

A silloute with a cigarette, you wont even smell the smoke,
Stalk up in steathmode, and doubletap ya face, give you a Zelph Nose.

☆☆

Alias maybe? Vertias back from RB? we all know he tried to mod that site,
And we know your a faggot Kirk, but this couldnt really be that life.fatwife.



Your climbing Everest just to get pushed off the precipice and skydive,
Coz Plot just fucked up Klap worse than Orc and Hawk trying to high-five.


I have Basic taking this by a comfortable margin. Plot's execution was weird and sloppy and times, there was also some difficulty in effectively delivering the punches.

v-Basic M

Pinot Grij 01-05-2018 07:31 PM

Basic -- everything but firefighter was flames (ha!)... it was all similar construction but the aggression and wp was on point. Really solid verse.

Plot -- opener is funny, BFGs is cool, rest was cool. I think it was hard to match the originailty in Basic's verse.

Vote -- Basic

For Battling 01-06-2018 05:51 AM

Swaggin' when the tech clap, its a show when i wreck cats
Catch a shot on the block 1 legged, thats a Dirk step back
hmm ok
2 cannons at ya spine. Hittin' the canvas from this duel threat
Arms behind ya back'll leave u flipped, look at that german suplex
ok cool
Facing a true animal here, 4 lb leavin' u rocky
U can live or die w/ that beast at hand like its tomagotchi
pretty nice here, cool line all around tbh
Ninja stars by the dozen, free flowin' if pissed off
piece hittin' from a distance leaves u rattled, homie this isnt disc golf
phew, fire
Invade ya room window. Chop chop till im tired
Axe to ya back as u clear the room. Now ur a fire fighter
decent
Ya sluts r coked up. Every broad u bang is lame, turd
If ur doggin these hoes its cuz ur bringin' home half dead birds
nah

Vs


Want war with King Kong, Kim Jon? take your finger off that trigger,
Coz you'll just get trumped in all facets, my buttons bigger.
nah man
Kirk your concepts are a snorefest, your style is fucking boring,
Your text career is about to bite the big one, R.I.P. Richard Corey.
kind of a weird execution here but not bad
When I pull out my giant tec its violence next, shit gets gory,
And the B.F.G.s about to take you off to napland, no childrens story.
ha, alright
A silloute with a cigarette, you wont even smell the smoke,
Stalk up in steathmode, and doubletap ya face, give you a Zelph Nose.
not a good zelph line
Alias maybe? Vertias back from RB? we all know he tried to mod that site,
And we know your a faggot Kirk, but this couldnt really be that life.fatwife.
nah this one wasn’t good
Your climbing Everest just to get pushed off the precipice and skydive,
Coz Plot just fucked up Klap worse than Orc and Hawk trying to high-five.
lmfaooooo dope


Good verse from Kirk, only had 1 clear miss. Plot had LOTB with the Orc/hawk line but had 3 misses.

Vote Kirk

ill nik-A 01-06-2018 06:33 AM

Kirk had the better verse. Some of the wordplay was good but I feel u need to attack ur opponent more. Still solid. Plot, I don’t know man, the button line is just weird. RC Line was too. i Think what hurts u is the construction of the punch. Feels like u write ur set-ups and adopt ur punch to it for rhyming sake

Kirk wins

WRATH 01-06-2018 07:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Basic M (Post 631956)
Swaggin' when the tech clap, its a show when i wreck cats
Catch a shot on the block 1 legged, thats a Dirk step back

Okay

2 cannons at ya spine. Hittin' the canvas from this duel threat
Arms behind ya back'll leave u flipped, look at that german suplex

It's like a weak version of a pedigree line

Facing a true animal here, 4 lb leavin' u rocky
U can live or die w/ that beast at hand like its tomagotchi

Its ok, execution needed more

Ninja stars by the dozen, free flowin' if pissed off
piece hittin' from a distance leaves u rattled, homie this isnt disc golf

Probably okay

Invade ya room window. Chop chop till im tired
Axe to ya back as u clear the room. Now ur a fire fighter

Losing focus

Ya sluts r coked up. Every broad u bang is lame, turd
If ur doggin these hoes its cuz ur bringin' home half dead birds

Poor execution

#PutFootsOnEm



Want war with King Kong, Kim Jon? take your finger off that trigger,
Coz you'll just get trumped in all facets, my buttons bigger.

Weak

Kirk your concepts are a snorefest, your style is fucking boring,
Your text career is about to bite the big one, R.I.P. Richard Corey.

Okay

When I pull out my giant tec its violence next, shit gets gory,
And the B.F.G.s about to take you off to napland, no childrens story.fat wife

Heh

A silloute with a cigarette, you wont even smell the smoke,
Stalk up in steathmode, and doubletap ya face, give you a Zelph Nose.

Lol saucey

Alias maybe? Vertias back from RB? we all know he tried to mod that site,
And we know your a faggot Kirk, but this couldnt really be that life.fatwife.

Eh

Your climbing Everest just to get pushed off the precipice and skydive,
Coz Plot just fucked up Klap worse than Orc and Hawk trying to high-five.

Nah


I was looking for a reason to vote for you plot but overall strength leans towards the first guy,

V - kc


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