Week 2: Razah (1-0) vs. MMLP (1-0) - RAZAH WINS BY NO SHOW

Frank · 12-22-2016, 03:24 AM

Season 7

Verses are due Tuesday 12/27 at 11:59 PST. EXT 12/28 11:59 PST

Voting ends Sunday 12/31 at 11:59 PST

Verses may not exceed 48 lines

Voting on 3 battles is required. If you win and don't vote the requirement you will not receive a victory. If you lose and don't vote the requirement, you will receive a one-week suspension.

Topic: "Cardsharps"

Good luck to both participants. @Razah @MMLP

MMLP · 12-22-2016, 03:45 AM

Petr Cech

Razah · 12-22-2016, 02:14 PM

word.

Razah · 12-30-2016, 12:59 AM

Pleasantly amused, I felt the room was full of love
But it grew dim, & now I could take a swim in this pool of blood
I memorized the cards that you gave, I was lost in the game
Figured it was curiosity and not deceit that I saw in your face
I was sadly mistaken- My flawless heart's blemished with pain
The thoughts of calling your bluff are now replenished by rage
It was a pastime we all admired, we were longing for more
Until the wrong move would cause the cards to fall to the floor
I suddenly lost it, my heart burst like you hollowed the chambers
I've never felt fury, at this moment I was swallowed by anger
I'm now a vessel for madness, I wish I could shatter your spine
Still I went on a rampage, a blow to your chest & your dagger is mine
Your accomplice was frozen- My cards.. he was dying to know
I still remember the size of your eyes as I was slicing his throat
I'm like a lion you woke- I'll deliver a cut so precise it won't spatter
Here's my final question to you, "What's it like to die by your own dagger?"

Fucking cheaters.

12-22-2016, 03:24 AM	#1
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Week 2: Razah (1-0) vs. MMLP (1-0) - RAZAH WINS BY NO SHOW Season 7 Verses are due Tuesday 12/27 at 11:59 PST. EXT 12/28 11:59 PST Voting ends Sunday 12/31 at 11:59 PST Verses may not exceed 48 lines Voting on 3 battles is required. If you win and don't vote the requirement you will not receive a victory. If you lose and don't vote the requirement, you will receive a one-week suspension. Topic: "Cardsharps" Good luck to both participants. @Razah @MMLP

12-22-2016, 03:45 AM	#2
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 614 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768091	Petr Cech

12-22-2016, 02:14 PM	#3
Razah rockkFresh Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Chicago. Posts: 1,088 Battle Record: 8-10 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 11328545	word.

12-30-2016, 12:59 AM	#4
Razah rockkFresh Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Chicago. Posts: 1,088 Battle Record: 8-10 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 11328545	Pleasantly amused, I felt the room was full of love But it grew dim, & now I could take a swim in this pool of blood I memorized the cards that you gave, I was lost in the game Figured it was curiosity and not deceit that I saw in your face I was sadly mistaken- My flawless heart's blemished with pain The thoughts of calling your bluff are now replenished by rage It was a pastime we all admired, we were longing for more Until the wrong move would cause the cards to fall to the floor I suddenly lost it, my heart burst like you hollowed the chambers I've never felt fury, at this moment I was swallowed by anger I'm now a vessel for madness, I wish I could shatter your spine Still I went on a rampage, a blow to your chest & your dagger is mine Your accomplice was frozen- My cards.. he was dying to know I still remember the size of your eyes as I was slicing his throat I'm like a lion you woke- I'll deliver a cut so precise it won't spatter Here's my final question to you, "What's it like to die by your own dagger?" Fucking cheaters.