Hush 0-0 Vs Ricantheoryz 0-0 - HUSH WINS

Allen Knight · 09-12-2016, 01:50 PM

NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4

Due Thursday 12 pacific

Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.

& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.

NO EXT, AT ALL.

@Hush
@R!canTheoryz

Hush · 09-12-2016, 11:49 PM

U still fat as fuck . So when bullets fly it's no way that u can duck
Semi auto put ya stomach in ya lap. Like every time that u stand up

R!canTheoryz · 09-14-2016, 04:35 AM

I'll drop shortly when I get home

R!canTheoryz · 09-14-2016, 10:56 PM

Best lay low when the Techs blow I'm Your biggest obstacle,
His family'll be following H in a box faster than giving directions to the nearest hospital!

ALTE · 09-15-2016, 01:46 AM

Hush flowed better...hit harder.
vote hush

Certain · 09-15-2016, 02:20 AM

Oh, man. R!canTheoryz had such a fire concept that he worded so clumsily. It was still so creative that I almost gave it to him. But Hush had a good, slightly simpler bar that he worded so much better.

Vote: Hush

Cred · 09-15-2016, 07:29 AM

Ricanz shit def had potential, following H tho? Why following? Lol. Hush had the solid punch here.

Vote Hush

Aero · 09-15-2016, 08:47 AM

Hush - once you stand up it's no longer a lap. Plus if you sit down and your stomach is in your lap you're still fat so you could've gone with that. Cool attempt.

Rican - at first read I was thinking niiiice. Upon 2nd read it's still nice.

Vote - Rican

Maximus · 09-15-2016, 06:01 PM

victer voted

Inno · 09-15-2016, 08:17 PM

Rican with the better concept but hush punch was a lot smoother

Hush

Pinot Grij · 09-15-2016, 09:19 PM

Hush's punch felt lazy - if he's fat, wouldn't his stomach be in his lap when he sits down too tho? Also, when you stand up your lap is GONE.

Rican - nice concept, tough wording - not perfect, but I like the idea behind it more than a simple fat joke.

Vote -- Rican Theoryza1~

Hearder Hearder · 09-16-2016, 01:06 AM

Yeah once you stand up your stomach isn't in your lap anymore so it didn't really make sens

Ricans could have been better but it was still good, I liked the concept and effort

Vote Rican

Slechtn · 09-16-2016, 02:06 PM

Rican had the better concept. Agreed but the wording killed it. Hush was direct and smoother which is why I vote Hush.

Ghost1 · 09-16-2016, 02:39 PM

I already been did that hospital shit before, rican worded it like shit, hush was whatever....nothing crazy..pretty light ..was worded cleaner tho

id honestly give that shit to rico if I didn't think his concept was played...that coupled w shit wording...unredeemable

v hush

Useless · 09-16-2016, 06:06 PM

Didn't like hushs at all tbh. Doesn't really make sense. Rican had a good concept bad wording.

V. Rican

09-12-2016, 01:50 PM	#1
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Hush 0-0 Vs Ricantheoryz 0-0 - HUSH WINS NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4 Due Thursday 12 pacific Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling. & dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted. NO EXT, AT ALL. @Hush @R!canTheoryz

09-15-2016, 01:46 AM	#5
ALTE Cw-cc-hhe-d4r vet Join Date: Oct 2014 Location: New zealand Posts: 21 Rep Power: 0	Hush flowed better...hit harder. vote hush __________________

09-15-2016, 02:20 AM	#6
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Oh, man. R!canTheoryz had such a fire concept that he worded so clumsily. It was still so creative that I almost gave it to him. But Hush had a good, slightly simpler bar that he worded so much better. Vote: Hush __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

09-15-2016, 08:47 AM	#8
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,826 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Hush - once you stand up it's no longer a lap. Plus if you sit down and your stomach is in your lap you're still fat so you could've gone with that. Cool attempt. Rican - at first read I was thinking niiiice. Upon 2nd read it's still nice. Vote - Rican __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

09-15-2016, 09:19 PM	#11
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Hush's punch felt lazy - if he's fat, wouldn't his stomach be in his lap when he sits down too tho? Also, when you stand up your lap is GONE. Rican - nice concept, tough wording - not perfect, but I like the idea behind it more than a simple fat joke. Vote -- Rican Theoryza1~ __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

09-12-2016, 11:49 PM	#2
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	U still fat as fuck . So when bullets fly it's no way that u can duck Semi auto put ya stomach in ya lap. Like every time that u stand up

09-15-2016, 07:29 AM	#7
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899383	Ricanz shit def had potential, following H tho? Why following? Lol. Hush had the solid punch here. Vote Hush

09-15-2016, 06:01 PM	#9
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	victer voted

09-15-2016, 08:17 PM	#10
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Rican with the better concept but hush punch was a lot smoother Hush

09-16-2016, 01:06 AM	#12
Hearder Hearder Banned Join Date: Aug 2016 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	Yeah once you stand up your stomach isn't in your lap anymore so it didn't really make sens Ricans could have been better but it was still good, I liked the concept and effort Vote Rican

09-16-2016, 02:06 PM	#13
Slechtn Pay Homage Join Date: Sep 2016 Location: La Luna Posts: 254 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 0	Rican had the better concept. Agreed but the wording killed it. Hush was direct and smoother which is why I vote Hush. __________________

09-16-2016, 06:06 PM	#15
Useless 100% Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 1,803 Battle Record: 9-12 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 0	Didn't like hushs at all tbh. Doesn't really make sense. Rican had a good concept bad wording. V. Rican