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Allen Knight 09-12-2016 01:50 PM

Hush 0-0 Vs Ricantheoryz 0-0 - HUSH WINS
 
NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4

Due Thursday 12 pacific

Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.
& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.

NO EXT, AT ALL.

@Hush
@R!canTheoryz

Hush 09-12-2016 11:49 PM

U still fat as fuck . So when bullets fly it's no way that u can duck
Semi auto put ya stomach in ya lap. Like every time that u stand up

R!canTheoryz 09-14-2016 04:35 AM

I'll drop shortly when I get home

R!canTheoryz 09-14-2016 10:56 PM

Best lay low when the Techs blow I'm Your biggest obstacle,
His family'll be following H in a box faster than giving directions to the nearest hospital!

ALTE 09-15-2016 01:46 AM

Hush flowed better...hit harder.
vote hush

Certain 09-15-2016 02:20 AM

Oh, man. R!canTheoryz had such a fire concept that he worded so clumsily. It was still so creative that I almost gave it to him. But Hush had a good, slightly simpler bar that he worded so much better.

Vote: Hush

Cred 09-15-2016 07:29 AM

Ricanz shit def had potential, following H tho? Why following? Lol. Hush had the solid punch here.

Vote Hush

Aero 09-15-2016 08:47 AM

Hush - once you stand up it's no longer a lap. Plus if you sit down and your stomach is in your lap you're still fat so you could've gone with that. Cool attempt.

Rican - at first read I was thinking niiiice. Upon 2nd read it's still nice.

Vote - Rican

Maximus 09-15-2016 06:01 PM

victer voted

Inno 09-15-2016 08:17 PM

Rican with the better concept but hush punch was a lot smoother

Hush

Pinot Grij 09-15-2016 09:19 PM

Hush's punch felt lazy - if he's fat, wouldn't his stomach be in his lap when he sits down too tho? Also, when you stand up your lap is GONE.

Rican - nice concept, tough wording - not perfect, but I like the idea behind it more than a simple fat joke.

Vote -- Rican Theoryza1~

Hearder Hearder 09-16-2016 01:06 AM

Yeah once you stand up your stomach isn't in your lap anymore so it didn't really make sens


Ricans could have been better but it was still good, I liked the concept and effort

Vote Rican

Slechtn 09-16-2016 02:06 PM

Rican had the better concept. Agreed but the wording killed it. Hush was direct and smoother which is why I vote Hush.

Ghost1 09-16-2016 02:39 PM

I already been did that hospital shit before, rican worded it like shit, hush was whatever....nothing crazy..pretty light ..was worded cleaner tho

id honestly give that shit to rico if I didn't think his concept was played...that coupled w shit wording...unredeemable

v hush

Useless 09-16-2016 06:06 PM

Didn't like hushs at all tbh. Doesn't really make sense. Rican had a good concept bad wording.


V. Rican


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