Infiltration vs Lotto Smirk - INFILTRATION WINS

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[Lotto Smirk]

How many?

[Saint]

10

[Lotto Smirk]

it pretty clear since I found out child molestations ya hobbie
the name infiltration fits u perfectly, u known for attack in small bodies
No1 rates u as hard, never wrote a bar that's bad or mean
We all thinking inflame so I'll torch this loser to his death w/ gasoline
u wanna talk gun bars, well Its nothing for me to let the weapon spray
Ill put a couple up top that'll make sure u won't make it to see ya wedding cake
this queer ain't packing weapons its a front & all pretend
if he holding a piece steady hes taking bunny ear selfies w/ his friends
I'll go slow, when I slice u w/ the blade for them poor dim bars
won't make the horroh short, but ur body'll be looking like it could feature in lar's

Meh lets go

[Saint]

flipped my lars horror bar in the cypher thread, lol

Last week..

no punches landed on grij at best u left some soft impressions.
we frowned on that verse... smirk lines were all filler like Botox injections.
a walkin disgrace. swear u'll drop fire but only the ball in its place.
think ya shit dont stink.. funny its when u try covering it up w/ Lysol in my face.
this is like a new twist on the bible story of sodom in genesis, ya'll.
i'll walk away w/ Lot's Wife. & we'll look back to see HIM turn to a pillar of salt.
u cant trust any1 anymore. friends faces can seem alien my dude.
Sci-Fi masked up at ya front door...a 5th Wave & ya world gets taken from you.
u came into the battle wild w/ ire. but skillwise i'm miles up higher.
inferno respect smokin your wack ass but i still completed this easy trial by fire.

[Lotto Smirk]

Just for the record I've not read or seen the cypher thread, I can edit in a different bar if you wish?

[Saint]

Nah let it ride

[e11even]

Lotto
it pretty clear since I found out child molestations ya hobbie
the name infiltration fits u perfectly, u known for attack in small bodies
I didn't like this one
No1 rates u as hard, never wrote a bar that's bad or mean
We all thinking inflame so I'll torch this loser to his death w/ gasoline
thinking in flame? either this is forced or its over my head...
u wanna talk gun bars, well Its nothing for me to let the weapon spray
Ill put a couple up top that'll make sure u won't make it to see ya wedding cake
I liked this one
this queer ain't packing weapons its a front & all pretend
if he holding a piece steady hes taking bunny ear selfies w/ his friends
dope IMO
I'll go slow, when I slice u w/ the blade for them poor dim bars
won't make the horroh short, but ur body'll be looking like it could feature in lar's
didn't hit for me... may be over my head

Meh lets go
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Infiltration
flipped my lars horror bar in the cypher thread, lol

Last week..

no punches landed on grij at best u left some soft impressions.
we frowned on that verse... smirk lines were all filler like Botox injections.
eh... so-so. ok nameplay, but probably played
a walkin disgrace. swear u'll drop fire but only the ball in its place.
think ya shit dont stink.. funny its when u try covering it up w/ Lysol in my face.
kinda cool. not really a direct hit IMO tho
this is like a new twist on the bible story of sodom in genesis, ya'll.
i'll walk away w/ Lot's Wife. & we'll look back to see HIM turn to a pillar of salt.
fire... I hadta research this reference
u cant trust any1 anymore. friends faces can seem alien my dude.
Sci-Fi masked up at ya front door...a 5th Wave & ya world gets taken from you.
pretty dope
u came into the battle wild w/ ire. but skillwise i'm miles up higher.
inferno respect smokin your wack ass but i still completed this easy trial by fire.
cool finish


MVGT Infiltration for more hits and more originality. This is my first time rating a battle in a long time, so pardon if I didn't catch every punch thrown.

[Useless]

No1 rates u as hard, never wrote a bar that's bad or mean
We all thinking inflame so I'll torch this loser to his death w/ gasoline
u wanna talk gun bars, well Its nothing for me to let the weapon spray
Ill put a couple up top that'll make sure u won't make it to see ya wedding cake

--- inf lame is cool, pronunciation is a lil off but I like it. Wedding cake was nice imo, I don't care for gun bars but I like this one.


I'll go slow, when I slice u w/ the blade for them poor dim bars
won't make the horroh short, but ur body'll be looking like it could feature in lar's

--- I haven't read the cypher so this is aite to me, wording is a lil off tho. Holding a piece steady line was aite too but it came off a lil corny. Overall tho this is one of the better verses I've seen from u. Props.



Vs.



no punches landed on grij at best u left some soft impressions.
we frowned on that verse... smirk lines were all filler like Botox injections.
--- I like the name play and simile........
a walkin disgrace. swear u'll drop fire but only the ball in its place.
think ya shit dont stink.. funny its when u try covering it up w/ Lysol in my face.
--- wp ok, didn't like the wording tho...........
this is like a new twist on the bible story of sodom in genesis, ya'll.
i'll walk away w/ Lot's Wife. & we'll look back to see HIM turn to a pillar of salt.
--- again I like the concept, just don't like the flip.....cuz in the story Lot's wife turned to a pillar of salt because she looked back....might be nitpicking but it doesn't work for me...........
u cant trust any1 anymore. friends faces can seem alien my dude.
Sci-Fi masked up at ya front door...a 5th Wave & ya world gets taken from you.
--- aite for a gun bar..........
u came into the battle wild w/ ire. but skillwise i'm miles up higher.
inferno respect smokin your wack ass but i still completed this easy trial by fire.
--- I used this against bash in the BAL, and saying 'easy trial by fire' sounds weird.............idk I feel like u switched ur style up or something and I'm not really feelin it. This isn't up to par with ur usual stuff.




V. Lotto

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

it pretty clear since I found out child molestations ya hobbie
the name infiltration fits u perfectly, u known for attack in small bodies
Nah
No1 rates u as hard, never wrote a bar that's bad or mean
We all thinking inflame so I'll torch this loser to his death w/ gasoline
Nah still
u wanna talk gun bars, well Its nothing for me to let the weapon spray
Ill put a couple up top that'll make sure u won't make it to see ya wedding cake
Ok cool
this queer ain't packing weapons its a front & all pretend
if he holding a piece steady hes taking bunny ear selfies w/ his friends
seen too many selfie bars and this wasn't hard
I'll go slow, when I slice u w/ the blade for them poor dim bars
won't make the horroh short, but ur body'll be looking like it could feature in lar's
Not feeling
Meh lets go

Originally Posted by Infiltration

flipped my lars horror bar in the cypher thread, lol

Last week..

no punches landed on grij at best u left some soft impressions.
we frowned on that verse... smirk lines were all filler like Botox injections.
Not seen this name play done. thought this was cool
a walkin disgrace. swear u'll drop fire but only the ball in its place.
think ya shit dont stink.. funny its when u try covering it up w/ Lysol in my face.
Seen Lysol wordplay done and done better
this is like a new twist on the bible story of sodom in genesis, ya'll.
i'll walk away w/ Lot's Wife. & we'll look back to see HIM turn to a pillar of salt.
Not feeling
u cant trust any1 anymore. friends faces can seem alien my dude.
Sci-Fi masked up at ya front door...a 5th Wave & ya world gets taken from you.
Ok
u came into the battle wild w/ ire. but skillwise i'm miles up higher.
inferno respect smokin your wack ass but i still completed this easy trial by fire.
Meh

My vote goes to infiltration. 1 Extra quotable and the rest of his verse went slightly harder than lotto's IMO.

V/infiltration

[King]

u wanna talk gun bars, well Its nothing for me to let the weapon spray
Ill put a couple up top that'll make sure u won't make it to see ya wedding cake


vs


no punches landed on grij at best u left some soft impressions.
we frowned on that verse... smirk lines were all filler like Botox injections.
u cant trust any1 anymore. friends faces can seem alien my dude.
Sci-Fi masked up at ya front door...a 5th Wave & ya world gets taken from you.

got an extra quoted line and overall a better worded more consistent verse for Infiltration. Lotto had some good ideas but lacked a little on execution imo.

Vote Infiltration

[Pinot Grij]

Lotto Smirk
Opener is a bit of a stretch.
Gasoline bar is a better nameplay.
Wedding cake line is dope.
I think I criticized someone else's selfie bar last week, but the "piece/peace" flip was a nice addition. I liked.
Closer is decent.

Infiltration
Opener was cool.
Lysol flip is dope. Understated, I like that.
I'm not up on my Bible verses.
Never seen 5th Wave so I can't fuck with that bar.
Closer is a bit of a stretch but still cool.

I gotta go with Inf on this one. Lotto had that wedding cake bar, but Inf had more hits.

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

it pretty clear since I found out child molestations ya hobbie
the name infiltration fits u perfectly, u known for attack in small bodies
That's cool. Inf namplays are hard and this is fresh
No1 rates u as hard, never wrote a bar that's bad or mean
We all thinking inflame so I'll torch this loser to his death w/ gasoline
Wording is fuckd we all thinking inflame sounds alien
u wanna talk gun bars, well Its nothing for me to let the weapon spray
Ill put a couple up top that'll make sure u won't make it to see ya wedding cake
Fire
this queer ain't packing weapons its a front & all pretend
if he holding a piece steady hes taking bunny ear selfies w/ his friends
Nah
I'll go slow, when I slice u w/ the blade for them poor dim bars
won't make the horroh short, but ur body'll be looking like it could feature in Lars
That's light but ok
Meh lets go

Originally Posted by Infiltration

flipped my lars horror bar in the cypher thread, lol

Last week..

no punches landed on grij at best u left some soft impressions.
we frowned on that verse... smirk lines were all filler like Botox injections.
Fire
a walkin disgrace. swear u'll drop fire but only the ball in its place.
think ya shit dont stink.. funny its when u try covering it up w/ Lysol in my face.
Nice wp setup was nice too
this is like a new twist on the bible story of sodom in genesis, ya'll.
i'll walk away w/ Lot's Wife. & we'll look back to see HIM turn to a pillar of salt.
Ok nice
u cant trust any1 anymore. friends faces can seem alien my dude.
Sci-Fi masked up at ya front door...a 5th Wave & ya world gets taken from you.
Don't get it
u came into the battle wild w/ ire. but skillwise i'm miles up higher.
inferno respect smokin your wack ass but i still completed this easy trial by fire.
Nice

Inf got this he out punched him clearly
Smirk still got some wording bugs


V inf

[10 Senses]

Lotto,
I really liked your line with wedding cake couple, that was dope. And the piece sign selfie pic was nice too. Your opener and finisher was not that strong, IMO

Infiltration,
5th Wave, Bible bar, and even the lysol hit. Your opener and closer was also better than Lotto's.

Infiltration for the win. Good battle.

[Fracture]

This was dope


Infil had a way better opener, and a better closer

Lotto had six bars in the middle that were dope creative


3-2 I have to go with lotto


Great read

[Resin M-I-C]

yo that wedding cake and bunny ears line were bonkers buttttt.. inf was too consistant here tho.. every line was either a good or solid hit for me

v inf

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

Opener & closer.
Would quote wedding cake & bunny ears, but those are concepts done better by Smack battlers.

Originally Posted by Infiltration

Lot's wife, 5th wave & closer.

Decent battle, seen better from both tbh, but I'd say INFILTRATION edged, due to Lotto using "familiar" Smack/URL bars.

[murda sho]

Inf

no punches landed on grij at best u left some soft impressions.
we frowned on that verse... smirk lines were all filler like Botox injections.



Lotto

No1 rates u as hard, never wrote a bar that's bad or mean
We all thinking inflame so I'll torch this loser to his death w/ gasoline


Both had one hit for me, I liked Inf verse slightly more though his missed shots were more tolerable