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Week 6 All rules apply: No feeding, biting, swaying. Due on Thursday... NO EXT AT ALL. REBUTTAL AND REMATCH OPTIONS - Agreement on rebuttal battle + first bars due Wednesday. Check the new rule thread for specifics. If agreement/bars are not in on Wednesday it will be treated as a normal battle. @YDK @Flo Real Preview Cool matchup IMO. Both guys been down in standings with some iffier bars but both are capable of doing damage in the 1-2. Flo's been looking way better since getting back into it as we saw in the cypher. Meanwhile YDK has ended up with a record that really doesn't reflect how good he can be, but he could definitely do with an adjustment in style. This should be a good one because I don't see these guys sitting on losing records and doing nothing about it for long.
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Yup
No rebuttal
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I won't mention flo and chromosomes BUT.. he's lackin more than just a green card Cuz when your comprehension's as bad as this faggots your probably just a retard
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Pussy im throwing them heavy punches your out of your depth look
You were a fish out of water flappin an all it took was the right hook |
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Y had a decent personal but I like Flo´s punch.
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Wording hurt flo here and the flip was basic seen the fish hook done many times and this one was lackluster.
V. YdK
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V ydk. Was more personal and got me to laugh
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Both were bad imo. Not tryna but a dick but ydk was a statement, there wasn't a flip, ur just saying oh if ur comprehension as bad as his ur a retard. And u saying like that isn't even a direct diss, u dissing an imaginary third party by comparing them t flo real. Flo had an ancient concept and ancient execution. Fish out of water/right hook is something almost everyone writes when they first start battling/writing. U gotta get past that breh, keep thinking keep flipping try to write something u think everyone else hasn't prob written.
This is a tuff one to call here cuz one had an actual punch n one had a statement BUT it was a personal statement, he coulda did sooo much more with that but IMO he did enuff to get the W here. Sorry flo but I'm always partial to personals. V. Ydk |
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ydk was straightforward.. nothin fancy,cleaner in wording, ehh.. flo came played
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Tbh I got Flo
Fish outta water/right hook is alright and could have been tied to something personal, like YDK not being a battler. But without that setup its not as effective The chromosome line was just kind of bland to me. Probably could have used better wording but as it was I didn't think it was too effective. That's just my taste. Close as all hell tho V/flo |
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i had flo winning too
even if it was played, YDK's felt too statementish to me this week for me to go for it
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Flow got this
YDK's was really weak, IMO. |
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I have YDK here. Wasn't a fan of Flo's fish out of water cliché.
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tough one to judge...
I read YDK shit a couple times tryna make it comp.-rahen-shun or somethin... the personal tie in cool but not much to the concept here, just too simple for a 1 bar battle Flo coulda added to that wording, at least a two syllable multi my man... but I thought his had a little more complexity & was decently developed, that got it for me V/ Flo Real |
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I've got flo here wording let him down but better punch overall, YDK too simple for a 1-2 punch
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Ydk was a statement
Flo wasn't the best punch but at least it has some sort of flip to it V/ flo
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I had to side with flo here, neither came particularly damagingly but where ydk was more statementish and plain flo had at least a flip in the right hook concept. Both can do better, schemes were fairly flat and nothing was too biting or cold.
V flo
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