Evolution Is A Slow Process

Mr. J · 11-04-2014, 02:55 AM

Do I play the reflection of what you want to see
or just a misjudgement of your dishonesty
Possibly a wish bone broke on what you wanna be
its all spice girl and how you add an ingredient
how you mix the pot that you often see me in
am I mischievous or just a sexual deviant
for fucking the game over that they need me in
I sign out due to disobedience and ride the median
the lies couldn't keep me and time is lenient
If the past is the past I surpass anyone's POV
that's a wrap faster than Andre 3 on B.O.B.
Give birth to your ideas and I reap those seeds
Inception with a Clint Eastwood Gran Torino theme
I used to stack bodies back when you'd see me or Iglos
I laughed at OMs with a crooked eye and a pig nose
If they were coming right for us I was Uncle Jimbo
so many different observations coulda swore I was schizo
when I stand over a dead man's chest like my name was Calypso
now every writer think they hot, flashes close to a menstrual
when these bitches had their tongues out hanging from the window
I blew enough cartridges through the game since Nintendo
smoother than any criminal out on the crescendo...
Annie are you ok? Darth Vader knew what he was getting into
I'm instrumental to the game when you was an instrument to game
when you couldn't get the picture with the connected frame
I left, went away, let the rats out and let them play
while I played black Smith over fireworks for Independance day
Treated it like Chinese New Year that's when I let it spray
crossing streams and putting souls to rest...
I don't need approval from you ho's...correct?
So play Scarface while I breathe the same words Sosa said
overkill or over dead ideas from these so called poster threads...
shit...no Mimosas left

Verbal · 11-04-2014, 08:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr. J

Do I play the reflection of what you want to see
or just a misjudgement of your dishonesty
Possibly a wish bone broke on what you wanna be
its all spice girl and how you add an ingredient
how you mix the pot that you often see me in
am I mischievous or just a sexual deviant
for fucking the game over that they need me in
I sign out due to disobedience and ride the median
the lies couldn't keep me and time is lenient
If the past is the past I surpass anyone's POV
that's a wrap faster than Andre 3 on B.O.B.
Give birth to your ideas and I reap those seeds
Inception with a Clint Eastwood Gran Torino theme
I used to stack bodies back when you'd see me or Iglos
I laughed at OMs with a crooked eye and a pig nose
If they were coming right for us I was Uncle Jimbo
so many different observations coulda swore I was schizo
when I stand over a dead man's chest like my name was Calypso
now every writer think they hot, flashes close to a menstrual
when these bitches had their tongues out hanging from the window
I blew enough cartridges through the game since Nintendo
smoother than any criminal out on the crescendo...
Annie are you ok? Darth Vader knew what he was getting into
I'm instrumental to the game when you was an instrument to game
when you couldn't get the picture with the connected frame
I left, went away, let the rats out and let them play
while I played black Smith over fireworks for Independance day
Treated it like Chinese New Year that's when I let it spray
crossing streams and putting souls to rest...
I don't need approval from you ho's...correct?
So play Scarface while I breathe the same words Sosa said
overkill or over dead ideas from these so called poster threads...
shit...no Mimosas left

Haha like the mo Mimosas left line. Thanks for the drop. I think I'm starting to understand your point Mr J. Inception with a Clint Eastwood Gran Torino theme is very spot on.

Exis · 11-04-2014, 12:00 PM

my bad, can't quote...but this was cool man.Word usage was kinda ehh in places but whatever you made up for that in other ways...thought the first line was nice.Like how you just sorta roll with your thoughts, Idk if this is keyed or not (felt that way) but it was worth the peep...I'll get at other shit you drop when I can. .

Stay uppity.

Mr. J · 11-07-2014, 04:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Exis

Idk if this is keyed or not (felt that way)
Stay uppity.

I don't know if I like your attitude

Spoken · 11-07-2014, 06:34 PM

Sorry I can't leave a good feed but u have this vague flow that leaves open possibility of how it supposed to be said ya know. The certain diction u had in mind was time kept and well thought out and with ease this verse read on....

Phanes · 11-07-2014, 07:27 PM

this was pretty well written, I wouldn't say it's the best text piece of read on this site but I like how it flows and the over all direction. I like the linked word play as the verse progressed. It's hard to catch the flow at all points but I still feel this was worth the read.

Mr. J · 11-11-2014, 01:51 PM

What do you mean "isn't"...

I find your lack of faith disturbing

razor wayans damon blades · 11-12-2014, 12:34 AM

This was an exceptional little piece here bub!!! really cool, and the flow was rly cool here and there.....nice mr j.

Wise Wiggles · 11-12-2014, 07:59 PM

I liked this man. Where iggy at? lol

Mr. J · 11-15-2014, 09:49 PM

Havent heard from him since...back when D:
Thanks for the feed breh

Mr. J · 11-24-2014, 09:23 PM

I'm still amused by the Uncle Jimbo line

Bodey · 12-04-2014, 03:45 AM

Gran Torino theme

11-04-2014, 02:55 AM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Evolution Is A Slow Process Do I play the reflection of what you want to see or just a misjudgement of your dishonesty Possibly a wish bone broke on what you wanna be its all spice girl and how you add an ingredient how you mix the pot that you often see me in am I mischievous or just a sexual deviant for fucking the game over that they need me in I sign out due to disobedience and ride the median the lies couldn't keep me and time is lenient If the past is the past I surpass anyone's POV that's a wrap faster than Andre 3 on B.O.B. Give birth to your ideas and I reap those seeds Inception with a Clint Eastwood Gran Torino theme I used to stack bodies back when you'd see me or Iglos I laughed at OMs with a crooked eye and a pig nose If they were coming right for us I was Uncle Jimbo so many different observations coulda swore I was schizo when I stand over a dead man's chest like my name was Calypso now every writer think they hot, flashes close to a menstrual when these bitches had their tongues out hanging from the window I blew enough cartridges through the game since Nintendo smoother than any criminal out on the crescendo... Annie are you ok? Darth Vader knew what he was getting into I'm instrumental to the game when you was an instrument to game when you couldn't get the picture with the connected frame I left, went away, let the rats out and let them play while I played black Smith over fireworks for Independance day Treated it like Chinese New Year that's when I let it spray crossing streams and putting souls to rest... I don't need approval from you ho's...correct? So play Scarface while I breathe the same words Sosa said overkill or over dead ideas from these so called poster threads... shit...no Mimosas left __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you Last edited by Mr. J; 11-04-2014 at 03:02 AM.

11-07-2014, 06:34 PM	#5
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	Sorry I can't leave a good feed but u have this vague flow that leaves open possibility of how it supposed to be said ya know. The certain diction u had in mind was time kept and well thought out and with ease this verse read on.... __________________ WP Po'ethics

11-11-2014, 01:51 PM	#7
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	What do you mean "isn't"... I find your lack of faith disturbing __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

11-12-2014, 07:59 PM	#9
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	I liked this man. Where iggy at? lol __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

11-15-2014, 09:49 PM	#10
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Havent heard from him since...back when D: Thanks for the feed breh __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

11-04-2014, 12:00 PM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	my bad, can't quote...but this was cool man.Word usage was kinda ehh in places but whatever you made up for that in other ways...thought the first line was nice.Like how you just sorta roll with your thoughts, Idk if this is keyed or not (felt that way) but it was worth the peep...I'll get at other shit you drop when I can. . Stay uppity.

11-07-2014, 07:27 PM	#6
Phanes Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 16 Rep Power: 0	this was pretty well written, I wouldn't say it's the best text piece of read on this site but I like how it flows and the over all direction. I like the linked word play as the verse progressed. It's hard to catch the flow at all points but I still feel this was worth the read.

11-12-2014, 12:34 AM	#8
razor wayans damon blades Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 43 Rep Power: 3501591	This was an exceptional little piece here bub!!! really cool, and the flow was rly cool here and there.....nice mr j.

11-24-2014, 09:23 PM	#11
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	I'm still amused by the Uncle Jimbo line __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you