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Evolution Is A Slow Process
Do I play the reflection of what you want to see
or just a misjudgement of your dishonesty Possibly a wish bone broke on what you wanna be its all spice girl and how you add an ingredient how you mix the pot that you often see me in am I mischievous or just a sexual deviant for fucking the game over that they need me in I sign out due to disobedience and ride the median the lies couldn't keep me and time is lenient If the past is the past I surpass anyone's POV that's a wrap faster than Andre 3 on B.O.B. Give birth to your ideas and I reap those seeds Inception with a Clint Eastwood Gran Torino theme I used to stack bodies back when you'd see me or Iglos I laughed at OMs with a crooked eye and a pig nose If they were coming right for us I was Uncle Jimbo so many different observations coulda swore I was schizo when I stand over a dead man's chest like my name was Calypso now every writer think they hot, flashes close to a menstrual when these bitches had their tongues out hanging from the window I blew enough cartridges through the game since Nintendo smoother than any criminal out on the crescendo... Annie are you ok? Darth Vader knew what he was getting into I'm instrumental to the game when you was an instrument to game when you couldn't get the picture with the connected frame I left, went away, let the rats out and let them play while I played black Smith over fireworks for Independance day Treated it like Chinese New Year that's when I let it spray crossing streams and putting souls to rest... I don't need approval from you ho's...correct? So play Scarface while I breathe the same words Sosa said overkill or over dead ideas from these so called poster threads... shit...no Mimosas left |
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my bad, can't quote...but this was cool man.Word usage was kinda ehh in places but whatever you made up for that in other ways...thought the first line was nice.Like how you just sorta roll with your thoughts, Idk if this is keyed or not (felt that way) but it was worth the peep...I'll get at other shit you drop when I can. .
Stay uppity. |
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Sorry I can't leave a good feed but u have this vague flow that leaves open possibility of how it supposed to be said ya know. The certain diction u had in mind was time kept and well thought out and with ease this verse read on....
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this was pretty well written, I wouldn't say it's the best text piece of read on this site but I like how it flows and the over all direction. I like the linked word play as the verse progressed. It's hard to catch the flow at all points but I still feel this was worth the read.
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What do you mean "isn't"...
I find your lack of faith disturbing |
This was an exceptional little piece here bub!!! really cool, and the flow was rly cool here and there.....nice mr j.
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I liked this man. Where iggy at? lol
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Havent heard from him since...back when D:
Thanks for the feed breh |
I'm still amused by the Uncle Jimbo line
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Gran Torino theme
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