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Mr. J 11-04-2014 02:55 AM

Evolution Is A Slow Process
 
Do I play the reflection of what you want to see
or just a misjudgement of your dishonesty
Possibly a wish bone broke on what you wanna be
its all spice girl and how you add an ingredient
how you mix the pot that you often see me in
am I mischievous or just a sexual deviant
for fucking the game over that they need me in
I sign out due to disobedience and ride the median
the lies couldn't keep me and time is lenient
If the past is the past I surpass anyone's POV
that's a wrap faster than Andre 3 on B.O.B.
Give birth to your ideas and I reap those seeds
Inception with a Clint Eastwood Gran Torino theme
I used to stack bodies back when you'd see me or Iglos
I laughed at OMs with a crooked eye and a pig nose
If they were coming right for us I was Uncle Jimbo
so many different observations coulda swore I was schizo
when I stand over a dead man's chest like my name was Calypso
now every writer think they hot, flashes close to a menstrual
when these bitches had their tongues out hanging from the window
I blew enough cartridges through the game since Nintendo
smoother than any criminal out on the crescendo...
Annie are you ok? Darth Vader knew what he was getting into
I'm instrumental to the game when you was an instrument to game
when you couldn't get the picture with the connected frame
I left, went away, let the rats out and let them play
while I played black Smith over fireworks for Independance day
Treated it like Chinese New Year that's when I let it spray
crossing streams and putting souls to rest...
I don't need approval from you ho's...correct?
So play Scarface while I breathe the same words Sosa said
overkill or over dead ideas from these so called poster threads...
shit...no Mimosas left

Verbal 11-04-2014 08:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr. J (Post 431988)
Do I play the reflection of what you want to see
or just a misjudgement of your dishonesty
Possibly a wish bone broke on what you wanna be
its all spice girl and how you add an ingredient
how you mix the pot that you often see me in
am I mischievous or just a sexual deviant
for fucking the game over that they need me in
I sign out due to disobedience and ride the median
the lies couldn't keep me and time is lenient
If the past is the past I surpass anyone's POV
that's a wrap faster than Andre 3 on B.O.B.
Give birth to your ideas and I reap those seeds
Inception with a Clint Eastwood Gran Torino theme
I used to stack bodies back when you'd see me or Iglos
I laughed at OMs with a crooked eye and a pig nose
If they were coming right for us I was Uncle Jimbo
so many different observations coulda swore I was schizo
when I stand over a dead man's chest like my name was Calypso
now every writer think they hot, flashes close to a menstrual
when these bitches had their tongues out hanging from the window
I blew enough cartridges through the game since Nintendo
smoother than any criminal out on the crescendo...
Annie are you ok? Darth Vader knew what he was getting into
I'm instrumental to the game when you was an instrument to game
when you couldn't get the picture with the connected frame
I left, went away, let the rats out and let them play
while I played black Smith over fireworks for Independance day
Treated it like Chinese New Year that's when I let it spray
crossing streams and putting souls to rest...
I don't need approval from you ho's...correct?
So play Scarface while I breathe the same words Sosa said
overkill or over dead ideas from these so called poster threads...
shit...no Mimosas left

Haha like the mo Mimosas left line. Thanks for the drop. I think I'm starting to understand your point Mr J. Inception with a Clint Eastwood Gran Torino theme is very spot on.

Exis 11-04-2014 12:00 PM

my bad, can't quote...but this was cool man.Word usage was kinda ehh in places but whatever you made up for that in other ways...thought the first line was nice.Like how you just sorta roll with your thoughts, Idk if this is keyed or not (felt that way) but it was worth the peep...I'll get at other shit you drop when I can. .

Stay uppity.

Mr. J 11-07-2014 04:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Exis (Post 432139)
Idk if this is keyed or not (felt that way)
Stay uppity.

I don't know if I like your attitude

Spoken 11-07-2014 06:34 PM

Sorry I can't leave a good feed but u have this vague flow that leaves open possibility of how it supposed to be said ya know. The certain diction u had in mind was time kept and well thought out and with ease this verse read on....

Phanes 11-07-2014 07:27 PM

this was pretty well written, I wouldn't say it's the best text piece of read on this site but I like how it flows and the over all direction. I like the linked word play as the verse progressed. It's hard to catch the flow at all points but I still feel this was worth the read.

Mr. J 11-11-2014 01:51 PM

What do you mean "isn't"...

I find your lack of faith disturbing

razor wayans damon blades 11-12-2014 12:34 AM

This was an exceptional little piece here bub!!! really cool, and the flow was rly cool here and there.....nice mr j.

Wise Wiggles 11-12-2014 07:59 PM

I liked this man. Where iggy at? lol

Mr. J 11-15-2014 09:49 PM

Havent heard from him since...back when D:
Thanks for the feed breh

Mr. J 11-24-2014 09:23 PM

I'm still amused by the Uncle Jimbo line

Bodey 12-04-2014 03:45 AM

Gran Torino theme


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