Camp Bell vs. Touche Guerrero [Red Soldier Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 10-16-2014, 11:29 AM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

Red Soldier · 10-17-2014, 07:19 AM

Check, no rebuttal

Camp Bell · 10-17-2014, 09:40 PM

...yup

Red Soldier · 10-20-2014, 08:26 PM

I'm a real thugger, n pussy ur lackin the role to flex yo
Watch me give CB4 stomps to his face till he looks like MC Gusto

Camp Bell · 10-20-2014, 09:40 PM

sick of these thug types that shout they better
give it up, u suck son an must be punch drunk
sips of bud light dont make you bout whatever

Destroyer · 10-20-2014, 10:04 PM

flex yo doesn't rhyme with gusto?

v/the other guy

Packed Graves · 10-20-2014, 11:24 PM

Epic fail vs stretched wording & bland concept.

Vote soup

El Muffin · 10-21-2014, 12:38 AM

V/ camp

Flex yo
Gusto

I mean the rhyme wasnt ulllltra bad. U got the o part right but it just comes of the tongue/minds tongue bad if that makes sense

I kinda like camps. Cool commercial ref

V camp

Kin · 10-21-2014, 07:27 AM

Red...diggin this... set up was kinda a weak way to go into punch flex yo....only complaint cb 4 stomps dope

Camp...wasnt really feelin this..stretched and not really a punch...more like a statement

Red had that connection with gusto and lackin the role to flex cb4... maybe being overlooked

V red... more creative

BROKE LESNAR · 10-21-2014, 09:49 AM

Going with Red. Although my preffered rhyme scheme wasn't there, it had an old school vibe that still connected. Camp, you know I dig 3 line schemes but in this instance there was just way too much happening internally for it to have your usual payoff.

v-Red

Wordz AhGod · 10-21-2014, 12:11 PM

gotta vote for red just for attempting a punch, both weren't too good and I have no clue what camp even trying to do there lol.

v/red

Blanco Bishop · 10-22-2014, 01:20 AM

I liked camps concept a lot more.
Touche was hurried it seems.

V camp

murda sho · 10-23-2014, 12:48 PM

I have no idea what Camp Bell was trying to do, Red's punch was kind of weird but thats probably because I search for multi's when I read bars cause I use em so much.. anyway judging by just haw hard they hit I gotta go Red

FGR · 10-23-2014, 01:27 PM

wasnt feeling camps punch or wording, came off weak to me. TG was mild but enough for the win

Camp Bell · 10-23-2014, 08:18 PM

LMAOOOO

Certain · 10-24-2014, 11:54 AM

This battle was spectacularly bad. I vote for Red Soldier because a bad rhyme and plain concept (little more than an old-school movie reference) are better than a nothing concept and an overextended bar that had no real cadence.

~RustyGunZ~ · 10-24-2014, 03:33 PM

red.

camp didn't have a punch

makes it irrellegant that red didn't rhyme well

10-16-2014, 11:29 AM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Camp Bell vs. Touche Guerrero [Red Soldier Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

10-17-2014, 09:40 PM	#3
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	...yup __________________ get high. write rhymes.

10-20-2014, 09:40 PM	#5
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	sick of these thug types that shout they better give it up, u suck son an must be punch drunk sips of bud light dont make you bout whatever __________________ get high. write rhymes.

10-20-2014, 11:24 PM	#7
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777847	Epic fail vs stretched wording & bland concept. Vote soup __________________ back

10-21-2014, 12:38 AM	#8
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	V/ camp Flex yo Gusto I mean the rhyme wasnt ulllltra bad. U got the o part right but it just comes of the tongue/minds tongue bad if that makes sense I kinda like camps. Cool commercial ref V camp __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

10-17-2014, 07:19 AM	#2
Red Soldier T.Guerrero Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 96 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 0	Check, no rebuttal

10-20-2014, 08:26 PM	#4
Red Soldier T.Guerrero Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 96 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 0	I'm a real thugger, n pussy ur lackin the role to flex yo Watch me give CB4 stomps to his face till he looks like MC Gusto

10-21-2014, 07:27 AM	#9
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	Red...diggin this... set up was kinda a weak way to go into punch flex yo....only complaint cb 4 stomps dope Camp...wasnt really feelin this..stretched and not really a punch...more like a statement Red had that connection with gusto and lackin the role to flex cb4... maybe being overlooked V red... more creative

10-21-2014, 09:49 AM	#10
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Going with Red. Although my preffered rhyme scheme wasn't there, it had an old school vibe that still connected. Camp, you know I dig 3 line schemes but in this instance there was just way too much happening internally for it to have your usual payoff. v-Red

10-21-2014, 12:11 PM	#11
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	gotta vote for red just for attempting a punch, both weren't too good and I have no clue what camp even trying to do there lol. v/red

10-22-2014, 01:20 AM	#12
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	I liked camps concept a lot more. Touche was hurried it seems. V camp

10-23-2014, 12:48 PM	#13
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758482	I have no idea what Camp Bell was trying to do, Red's punch was kind of weird but thats probably because I search for multi's when I read bars cause I use em so much.. anyway judging by just haw hard they hit I gotta go Red __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

10-23-2014, 01:27 PM	#14
FGR Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 564 Battle Record: 16-17 Rep Power: 8596598	wasnt feeling camps punch or wording, came off weak to me. TG was mild but enough for the win

10-23-2014, 08:18 PM	#15
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	LMAOOOO __________________ get high. write rhymes.

10-24-2014, 11:54 AM	#16
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	This battle was spectacularly bad. I vote for Red Soldier because a bad rhyme and plain concept (little more than an old-school movie reference) are better than a nothing concept and an overextended bar that had no real cadence. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-24-2014, 03:33 PM	#17
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,844 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899406	red. camp didn't have a punch makes it irrellegant that red didn't rhyme well