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BROKE LESNAR 10-16-2014 11:29 AM

Camp Bell vs. Touche Guerrero [Red Soldier Wins]
 
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Red Soldier 10-17-2014 07:19 AM

Check, no rebuttal

Camp Bell 10-17-2014 09:40 PM

...yup

Red Soldier 10-20-2014 08:26 PM

I'm a real thugger, n pussy ur lackin the role to flex yo
Watch me give CB4 stomps to his face till he looks like MC Gusto

Camp Bell 10-20-2014 09:40 PM

sick of these thug types that shout they better
give it up, u suck son an must be punch drunk
sips of bud light dont make you bout whatever

Destroyer 10-20-2014 10:04 PM

flex yo doesn't rhyme with gusto?


v/the other guy

Packed Graves 10-20-2014 11:24 PM

Epic fail vs stretched wording & bland concept.

Vote soup

El Muffin 10-21-2014 12:38 AM

V/ camp

Flex yo
Gusto

I mean the rhyme wasnt ulllltra bad. U got the o part right but it just comes of the tongue/minds tongue bad if that makes sense

I kinda like camps. Cool commercial ref

V camp

Kin 10-21-2014 07:27 AM

Red...diggin this... set up was kinda a weak way to go into punch flex yo....only complaint cb 4 stomps dope

Camp...wasnt really feelin this..stretched and not really a punch...more like a statement

Red had that connection with gusto and lackin the role to flex cb4... maybe being overlooked

V red... more creative

BROKE LESNAR 10-21-2014 09:49 AM

Going with Red. Although my preffered rhyme scheme wasn't there, it had an old school vibe that still connected. Camp, you know I dig 3 line schemes but in this instance there was just way too much happening internally for it to have your usual payoff.

v-Red

Wordz AhGod 10-21-2014 12:11 PM

gotta vote for red just for attempting a punch, both weren't too good and I have no clue what camp even trying to do there lol.

v/red

Blanco Bishop 10-22-2014 01:20 AM

I liked camps concept a lot more.
Touche was hurried it seems.

V camp

murda sho 10-23-2014 12:48 PM

I have no idea what Camp Bell was trying to do, Red's punch was kind of weird but thats probably because I search for multi's when I read bars cause I use em so much.. anyway judging by just haw hard they hit I gotta go Red

FGR 10-23-2014 01:27 PM

wasnt feeling camps punch or wording, came off weak to me. TG was mild but enough for the win

Camp Bell 10-23-2014 08:18 PM

LMAOOOO

Certain 10-24-2014 11:54 AM

This battle was spectacularly bad. I vote for Red Soldier because a bad rhyme and plain concept (little more than an old-school movie reference) are better than a nothing concept and an overextended bar that had no real cadence.

~RustyGunZ~ 10-24-2014 03:33 PM

red.

camp didn't have a punch

makes it irrellegant that red didn't rhyme well


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