Championship Match: BROKE LESNAR vs. murda sho [murda sho Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 10-16-2014, 11:13 AM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

BROKE LESNAR · 10-21-2014, 03:00 AM

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murda sho · 10-21-2014, 10:35 PM

Why you take that wack ass bar down bro?

Anyway...

I'm all over his case! I'll fuckin rip this dog for showing his face
So either stay in the housebroke or get shitted on all over the place

Zip Him Up!

BROKE LESNAR · 10-22-2014, 12:42 AM

man of my word

Blanco Bishop · 10-22-2014, 01:28 AM

Geeez.

Sho was cool.
But come on.....broke went for the jugular.

V broke

YDK · 10-22-2014, 03:01 AM

Jesus Christ RIP murda and the whole family after that one

Vote broke

Certain · 10-22-2014, 03:14 AM

BROKE LESNAR: None of that leadup stuff was necessary, and it all seemed like you were swaying. Why did you mention any of that and then not use anything other than a small part of the quote? I don't know. To me, a 1-2 battle league should be focused only on the two lines. And I didn't get a whole lot from your two lines. That was a really weak punchline. I guess it was personal, but it also was a fathered/dad play.

murda sho: I'm sure that name play has been used against BROKE LESNAR. It was a very basic name play that didn't fully connect. I didn't think either line was that good, but I probably side with BROKE LESNAR for attempting to be personal and having better wording.

Vote: BROKE LESNAR

theMuzzl3 · 10-22-2014, 07:38 AM

/f murda, fo' sho.

Broke's come back was a lame attempt.

Neither impressed me as an "ooohhhh" line.

Wordz AhGod · 10-22-2014, 07:51 AM

was feeling Sho's more here, not sure if housebroke is played or not but it had a good spin to it. Wasn't feeling brokes, it was too statementish (seems a lot of dudes on this site like those types of lines lol).

v/Murda Sho

FGR · 10-22-2014, 10:29 AM

v/sho
i thought he had the better hit, i didnt think brokes was creative enough here to take the win

Kill Spree · 10-22-2014, 12:01 PM

Brokers was kinda soft unless I'm missing something... Shos bar was a nice hit. Set up was nice aswell

Vote sho

Packed Graves · 10-23-2014, 07:45 AM

Neither came with anything over the top, Sho used a generic nameplay - while broke came with a few personally just liked the harsh execution. Both came off as Jab instead of going for the throat in the chanp match.

Broke wins due to effort & concept.

Tic · 10-23-2014, 12:07 PM

I think Broke went for the throat, but it was more of a statement. I get what he was going for, but also writing more than just a 1-2 lol. So did Murda though, and I wasn't too keen on his wording.

Vote Broke by a hair

jilti · 10-24-2014, 11:47 AM

Both kept it short and straight to the point.
Broke had good simple wording in an effective punch. The quotes he used to set up the punch made it obvious where he was going with his bar before he dropped it, so there wasnt a wow factor when i read it. Solid punch nonetheless.
Murda had a nice nameflip using dog and shitting on as transitional words in his bar.
This was even to me.
However, my own personal preference gives the ever slightest of edges towards one..

Vote-Murda

Destroyer · 10-24-2014, 03:00 PM

feeling murda slightly more on this one

v/sho

~RustyGunZ~ · 10-24-2014, 03:15 PM

cool np vs overkill personal

v/ sho

not feeling the no concept/low creativity personals coming from broke. all I seem to see by him.

10-16-2014, 11:13 AM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Championship Match: BROKE LESNAR vs. murda sho [murda sho Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

10-21-2014, 03:00 AM	#2
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	... Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 10-21-2014 at 07:57 PM.

10-21-2014, 10:35 PM	#3
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758482	Why you take that wack ass bar down bro? Anyway... I'm all over his case! I'll fuckin rip this dog for showing his face So either stay in the housebroke or get shitted on all over the place Zip Him Up! __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

10-22-2014, 12:42 AM	#4
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	man of my word Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 10-24-2014 at 03:24 PM.

10-22-2014, 03:01 AM	#6
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	Jesus Christ RIP murda and the whole family after that one Vote broke __________________

10-22-2014, 01:28 AM	#5
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	Geeez. Sho was cool. But come on.....broke went for the jugular. V broke

10-22-2014, 03:14 AM	#7
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	BROKE LESNAR: None of that leadup stuff was necessary, and it all seemed like you were swaying. Why did you mention any of that and then not use anything other than a small part of the quote? I don't know. To me, a 1-2 battle league should be focused only on the two lines. And I didn't get a whole lot from your two lines. That was a really weak punchline. I guess it was personal, but it also was a fathered/dad play. murda sho: I'm sure that name play has been used against BROKE LESNAR. It was a very basic name play that didn't fully connect. I didn't think either line was that good, but I probably side with BROKE LESNAR for attempting to be personal and having better wording. Vote: BROKE LESNAR __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-22-2014, 07:51 AM	#9
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	was feeling Sho's more here, not sure if housebroke is played or not but it had a good spin to it. Wasn't feeling brokes, it was too statementish (seems a lot of dudes on this site like those types of lines lol). v/Murda Sho

10-22-2014, 10:29 AM	#10
FGR Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 564 Battle Record: 16-17 Rep Power: 8596598	v/sho i thought he had the better hit, i didnt think brokes was creative enough here to take the win

10-22-2014, 12:01 PM	#11
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Brokers was kinda soft unless I'm missing something... Shos bar was a nice hit. Set up was nice aswell Vote sho

10-23-2014, 07:45 AM	#12
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777847	Neither came with anything over the top, Sho used a generic nameplay - while broke came with a few personally just liked the harsh execution. Both came off as Jab instead of going for the throat in the chanp match. Broke wins due to effort & concept. __________________ back

10-23-2014, 12:07 PM	#13
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137909	I think Broke went for the throat, but it was more of a statement. I get what he was going for, but also writing more than just a 1-2 lol. So did Murda though, and I wasn't too keen on his wording. Vote Broke by a hair

10-24-2014, 11:47 AM	#14
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	Both kept it short and straight to the point. Broke had good simple wording in an effective punch. The quotes he used to set up the punch made it obvious where he was going with his bar before he dropped it, so there wasnt a wow factor when i read it. Solid punch nonetheless. Murda had a nice nameflip using dog and shitting on as transitional words in his bar. This was even to me. However, my own personal preference gives the ever slightest of edges towards one.. Vote-Murda

10-24-2014, 03:15 PM	#16
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,844 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899406	cool np vs overkill personal v/ sho not feeling the no concept/low creativity personals coming from broke. all I seem to see by him.