Championship Match: BROKE LESNAR vs. murda sho [murda sho Wins]
 

Rebuttal Option

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Why you take that wack ass bar down bro?

Anyway...

I'm all over his case! I'll fuckin rip this dog for showing his face
So either stay in the housebroke or get shitted on all over the place

Zip Him Up!

man of my word

Geeez.

Sho was cool.
But come on.....broke went for the jugular.

V broke

Jesus Christ RIP murda and the whole family after that one

Vote broke

BROKE LESNAR: None of that leadup stuff was necessary, and it all seemed like you were swaying. Why did you mention any of that and then not use anything other than a small part of the quote? I don't know. To me, a 1-2 battle league should be focused only on the two lines. And I didn't get a whole lot from your two lines. That was a really weak punchline. I guess it was personal, but it also was a fathered/dad play.

murda sho: I'm sure that name play has been used against BROKE LESNAR. It was a very basic name play that didn't fully connect. I didn't think either line was that good, but I probably side with BROKE LESNAR for attempting to be personal and having better wording.

Vote: BROKE LESNAR

/f murda, fo' sho.

Broke's come back was a lame attempt.

Neither impressed me as an "ooohhhh" line.

was feeling Sho's more here, not sure if housebroke is played or not but it had a good spin to it. Wasn't feeling brokes, it was too statementish (seems a lot of dudes on this site like those types of lines lol).

v/Murda Sho

v/sho
i thought he had the better hit, i didnt think brokes was creative enough here to take the win

Brokers was kinda soft unless I'm missing something... Shos bar was a nice hit. Set up was nice aswell

Vote sho

Neither came with anything over the top, Sho used a generic nameplay - while broke came with a few personally just liked the harsh execution. Both came off as Jab instead of going for the throat in the chanp match.

Broke wins due to effort & concept.

I think Broke went for the throat, but it was more of a statement. I get what he was going for, but also writing more than just a 1-2 lol. So did Murda though, and I wasn't too keen on his wording.

Vote Broke by a hair

Both kept it short and straight to the point.
Broke had good simple wording in an effective punch. The quotes he used to set up the punch made it obvious where he was going with his bar before he dropped it, so there wasnt a wow factor when i read it. Solid punch nonetheless.
Murda had a nice nameflip using dog and shitting on as transitional words in his bar.
This was even to me.
However, my own personal preference gives the ever slightest of edges towards one..

Vote-Murda

feeling murda slightly more on this one

v/sho

cool np vs overkill personal

v/ sho

not feeling the no concept/low creativity personals coming from broke. all I seem to see by him.