Lotto Smirk 5-3 vs Killing Spree 3-3 - LOTTO WINS

[Hush]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 16th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes

@Killing Spree vs @Lotto Smirk 5-3

[Lotto Smirk]

12?

[Kill Spree]

Truth. Pic or regs?

[Lotto Smirk]

Regs

[Kill Spree]

Ext?

[Lotto Smirk]

Yes

[Lotto Smirk]

Got 14 match me

3d gun straight out the box.. I shoot til I jam or break cuz Im g
taking my plastic to the limit, anything to put an end to this spree
rivalries heating up ya out of luck cus people only want ya to be gone
cus no1 wants you in the crew online even playing with a ps4 or Xbox one
this actor got a front, it's men he wants, its time for his outing
If he gon make move e, only interested if it's a remake of broke back mountain
this transgender should plan better, cus if he win it's contendership
but hes not worthy of a title yet as we're still trying to figure out what sex he is
listen fag this is easily bagged, check the mag, I am winning
Im predicted to hitman, but No forward planning needed to take out this killing
not wanted in nbl or fn's cus ya spit wack, while I spit ether
cus my clas sick, n on the subject ya not wanted in this summers either
ya sluts a sket me & ret got sore hands from when we switch
cus we been practicing our tag teaming, high fiving taking it in turns to fuck that bitch

[Hush]

@Killing Spree

[Kill Spree]

Fraze got u muffled?


listen




see...
ya text is wack kid, been dead to the earth & aint lastin
...shoulda started from scratch
Cos after this thats gon be your only option out of this casket
this cunt? all jokes, Im'a spark sho, cos its a murda if dude push me
trust its like we see ELlen D work, cos all this faggot amounts to is pussy
ya boring as hell, U'll soil ya self, cos 1 punch'll have u mumble u hurt
& for ya bars being clear as mud? the Snub'll make ya blood puddle the dirt
u can recycle, bite, im still takin ya life dude, wit a L this kids leavin
cos this battle just be a Pair a Fraze, of the result to ya batlles wit him this season
plus the gat hit this wack pig, u need to Lean up think'n u scarin kid
its nothing for me to FeedLot a fat fist, in a building where livestocks prepped for marketing
this man'll wheep know'n his fam cant handle street, im know to dropp thots
...I'll put u in lanes wit a gut feeling
& shoot ya daughters brains & stomach all over a cross walk
17-26? put the tough talk on HUSH u trans fag, know u'll taste clout
ya bars are Lenox N'Victa, cos the fight in u is just a women trying to break out

[Chyeahhh!!!]

man where do I start, thought this battle was okay. It really took me some time to focus on this shit. Lotto I've read from you before and you've come better, maybe just not that into it this week bro I dunno. 3D guns don't come straight out the box yo lmao I just had to say that. I quoted you on the take out this killing line cause I saw what you were going for there and I respect wordplay.

Killing Spree, you did just enough to edge the battle but nothing too noteworthy to quote, just more of a enjoyable verse. I need to read more from you cause I hear you have some rep or something
but I didn't see any razzle and dazzle here

Sorry guys, I've lost steam in this voting shit don't do it too often lol and it's early as fluck so sorry if I offended both of you bitches suck my fucking folgers cup

vote Killing Spree

[Aero]

L


3d gun straight out the box.. I shoot til I jam or break cuz Im g
taking my plastic to the limit, anything to put an end to this spree
ahhh, alright, credit card plastic limit coolish
rivalries heating up ya out of luck cus people only want ya to be gone
cus no1 wants you in the crew online even playing with a ps4 or Xbox one
no sir lol
this actor got a front, it's men he wants, its time for his outing
If he gon make move e, only interested if it's a remake of broke back mountain
nah
this transgender should plan better, cus if he win it's contendership
but hes not worthy of a title yet as we're still trying to figure out what sex he is
nope
listen fag this is easily bagged, check the mag, I am winning
Im predicted to hitman, but No forward planning needed to take out this killing
no sir
not wanted in nbl or fn's cus ya spit wack, while I spit ether
cus my clas sick, n on the subject ya not wanted in this summers either
lol nah man
ya sluts a sket me & ret got sore hands from when we switch
cus we been practicing our tag teaming, high fiving taking it in turns to fuck that bitch
no way


Started off ok but then just got bad and remained that way. and its okay to spell things correctly




K


see...
ya text is wack kid, been dead to the earth & aint lastin
...shoulda started from scratch
Cos after this thats gon be your only option out of this casket
aight
this cunt? all jokes, Im'a spark sho, cos its a murda if dude push me
trust its like we see ELlen D work, cos all this faggot amounts to is pussy
no
ya boring as hell, U'll soil ya self, cos 1 punch'll have u mumble u hurt
& for ya bars being clear as mud? the Snub'll make ya blood puddle the dirt
nah
u can recycle, bite, im still takin ya life dude, wit a L this kids leavin
cos this battle just be a Pair a Fraze, of the result to ya batlles wit him this season
no sir!
plus the gat hit this wack pig, u need to Lean up think'n u scarin kid
its nothing for me to FeedLot a fat fist, in a building where livestocks prepped for marketing
I like the wp but the execution is just not there
this man'll wheep know'n his fam cant handle street, im know to dropp thots
...I'll put u in lanes wit a gut feeling
& shoot ya daughters brains & stomach all over a cross walk
nahh
17-26? put the tough talk on HUSH u trans fag, know u'll taste clout
ya bars are Lenox N'Victa, cos the fight in u is just a women trying to break out
nahhhhh

This just wasn't it.



This wasn't a good battle fellas. Lotto Smirk had one almost decent bar so he gets my vote.

[murda sho]

Killing Spree

ya boring as hell, U'll soil ya self, cos 1 punch'll have u mumble u hurt
& for ya bars being clear as mud? the Snub'll make ya blood puddle the dirt

this man'll wheep know'n his fam cant handle street, im know to dropp thots
...I'll put u in lanes wit a gut feeling
& shoot ya daughters brains & stomach all over a cross walk


Lotto smirk

this transgender should plan better, cus if he win it's contendership
but hes not worthy of a title yet as we're still trying to figure out what sex he is

not wanted in nbl or fn's cus ya spit wack, while I spit ether
cus my clas sick, n on the subject ya not wanted in this summers either



Both of y'all need to work on your wording but this wasn't a shitty battle cause I see y'all was tryna take each others heads off... I got it even in quotes but Lotto's bars hit harder though to me and the ones I quotes were worded a bit better.. V/Lotto

[Orc]

3d gun straight out the box.. I shoot til I jam or break cuz Im g
taking my plastic to the limit, anything to put an end to this spree
mmm, feeling it
rivalries heating up ya out of luck cus people only want ya to be gone
cus no1 wants you in the crew online even playing with a ps4 or Xbox one
very simple bro
this actor got a front, it's men he wants, its time for his outing
If he gon make move e, only interested if it's a remake of broke back mountain
naaaah man cmon ur better than a punch like this
this transgender should plan better, cus if he win it's contendership
but hes not worthy of a title yet as we're still trying to figure out what sex he is
lmao im sorry but this was funny
listen fag this is easily bagged, check the mag, I am winning
Im predicted to hitman, but No forward planning needed to take out this killing
old wp man. almost saved it with the flip but not quite
not wanted in nbl or fn's cus ya spit wack, while I spit ether
cus my clas sick, n on the subject ya not wanted in this summers either
super old bro
ya sluts a sket me & ret got sore hands from when we switch
cus we been practicing our tag teaming, high fiving taking it in turns to fuck that bitch
felll flat

bro u have potential but ur using the first flip that comes to mind. when u think of a concept think of a few different ways to flip it instead of just the first one to come to mind because chances are it's been the first to come to some other battlers mind too so there's more chance of it being played

v

K


see...
ya text is wack kid, been dead to the earth & aint lastin
...shoulda started from scratch
Cos after this thats gon be your only option out of this casket
old concept stemming from nails in coffin/scratches. obv different flip but been done til death
this cunt? all jokes, Im'a spark sho, cos its a murda if dude push me
trust its like we see ELlen D work, cos all this faggot amounts to is pussy
this makes no sense imo
ya boring as hell, U'll soil ya self, cos 1 punch'll have u mumble u hurt
& for ya bars being clear as mud? the Snub'll make ya blood puddle the dirt
gully but too simple bro
u can recycle, bite, im still takin ya life dude, wit a L this kids leavin
cos this battle just be a Pair a Fraze, of the result to ya batlles wit him this season
better man. more creative. personal. better
plus the gat hit this wack pig, u need to Lean up think'n u scarin kid
its nothing for me to FeedLot a fat fist, in a building where livestocks prepped for marketing
coulda been flipped better but the concept was there
this man'll wheep know'n his fam cant handle street, im know to dropp thots
...I'll put u in lanes wit a gut feeling
& shoot ya daughters brains & stomach all over a cross walk
too simple bro where's the creativity
17-26? put the tough talk on HUSH u trans fag, know u'll taste clout
ya bars are Lenox N'Victa, cos the fight in u is just a women trying to break out
okay i get it


maaan u set shit up like it's bout to be hot but then it just falls flat. alot of the time ya wording is on point but then u rush the execution of the bar and flip it in a lazy way or a way that ain't really harsh such as the feedlot line. coulda been flipped so much nastier. try work on that and you'll get better at an even faster rate

i enjoyed Lotto's verse more and thought he was a little more creative at times and while both had some older concepts i felt his maybe weren't as stale at times. he won this by a small margin

both of u stay up

[Netcees Battle League]

3-1 Lotto Smirk. More votes please.

[Destroyer]

also got lotto here
thought spree came a lot better in our pic battle
pair of fraze was decent
liked opener and title punch from lotto

v/lotto

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

3d gun straight out the box.. I shoot til I jam or break cuz Im g
taking my plastic to the limit, anything to put an end to this spree
cool reference to 3d printed handguns. you probably could have set this up a little better to make the clear
rivalries heating up ya out of luck cus people only want ya to be gone
cus no1 wants you in the crew online even playing with a ps4 or Xbox one
a little boring as worded. concept is there but you should try to do more to make it interesting / harsh
this actor got a front, it's men he wants, its time for his outing
If he gon make move e, only interested if it's a remake of broke back mountain
nah too simple
this transgender should plan better, cus if he win it's contendership
but hes not worthy of a title yet as we're still trying to figure out what sex he is
this is aight
listen fag this is easily bagged, check the mag, I am winning
Im predicted to hitman, but No forward planning needed to take out this killing
nah not feeling this
not wanted in nbl or fn's cus ya spit wack, while I spit ether
cus my clas sick, n on the subject ya not wanted in this summers either
this has to be played
ya sluts a sket me & ret got sore hands from when we switch
cus we been practicing our tag teaming, high fiving taking it in turns to fuck that bitch
didn't really like this

Originally Posted by Killing Spree

ya text is wack kid, been dead to the earth & aint lastin
...shoulda started from scratch
Cos after this thats gon be your only option out of this casket
cool idea on some kill bill buried alive shit, but you didn't really set it up well
this cunt? all jokes, Im'a spark sho, cos its a murda if dude push me
trust its like we see ELlen D work, cos all this faggot amounts to is pussy
this bar is all over the place
ya boring as hell, U'll soil ya self, cos 1 punch'll have u mumble u hurt
& for ya bars being clear as mud? the Snub'll make ya blood puddle the dirt
bad wording.
u can recycle, bite, im still takin ya life dude, wit a L this kids leavin
cos this battle just be a Pair a Fraze, of the result to ya batlles wit him this season
could have done more with this. the wp is played but the personal makes it more effective. still kinda misses for me tho
plus the gat hit this wack pig, u need to Lean up think'n u scarin kid
its nothing for me to FeedLot a fat fist, in a building where livestocks prepped for marketing
i don't even know what this was
this man'll wheep know'n his fam cant handle street, im know to dropp thots
...I'll put u in lanes wit a gut feeling
& shoot ya daughters brains & stomach all over a cross walk
harshness is there but there isn't really anything clever about the flip
17-26? put the tough talk on HUSH u trans fag, know u'll taste clout
ya bars are Lenox N'Victa, cos the fight in u is just a women trying to break out
ehh....

LS had not worthy of a title which was pretty slick. KS didn't really have any solid hits to me. A few were close but bad wording ruined a lot of the effectiveness. I think I've seen better drops from both, but this wasn't horrible. Good matchup, but I'm going with Lotto.

Vote: Lotto Smirk

[O. Lineman]

Got Killing Spree. Only bar I felt in the battle was pair a fraze. It at least attempted creativity. Wasn't feeling lotto at all. Stay up tho. You both have the tools to be special.


V/KS

[Bust]

Fraze

Opener is a played concept on him but u added a fresh twist to it so I dug it
Next one was weak
Broke back mountain is old af
Fidnt like worthy of title
Hit man was weak
Classic is played to death
Didn't really like ur closer neither

I really only felt ur opener man seen a lot better from u.

Ks
Opener was ehh
Didn't really understand 2nd joint
Clear as mud was ooook, coulda been smoother
Pair a fraze is relevant all in all pretty cool
Feed lot coulda been dope if u finished right, didn't land it
Cross walk was ooooooooook wording hurt it
Didn't like the closer

Iunno seems like ur trying to hard or rushing the fuck outta these.. Concepts cool but execution was bad on most bro


All in all I lije Lottos opener n is had pair a fraze n a couple light hits n better concepts so I gotta go ks edging this one..

Ks

[Kill Spree]

5-3
good shit @Lotto Smirk

[Witty]

3d gun straight out the box.. I shoot til I jam or break cuz Im g
taking my plastic to the limit, anything to put an end to this spree
I likes
rivalries heating up ya out of luck cus people only want ya to be gone
cus no1 wants you in the crew online even playing with a ps4 or Xbox one
nahhhh bro
this actor got a front, it's men he wants, its time for his outing
If he gon make move e, only interested if it's a remake of broke back mountain
nooooooooo
this transgender should plan better, cus if he win it's contendership
but hes not worthy of a title yet as we're still trying to figure out what sex he is
i lol'd
listen fag this is easily bagged, check the mag, I am winning
Im predicted to hitman, but No forward planning needed to take out this killing
awkward but decent
not wanted in nbl or fn's cus ya spit wack, while I spit ether
cus my clas sick, n on the subject ya not wanted in this summers either
ok
ya sluts a sket me & ret got sore hands from when we switch
cus we been practicing our tag teaming, high fiving taking it in turns to fuck that bitch
basic but ok

vs

see...
ya text is wack kid, been dead to the earth & aint lastin
...shoulda started from scratch
Cos after this thats gon be your only option out of this casket
ehhhh really awkward wording
this cunt? all jokes, Im'a spark sho, cos its a murda if dude push me
trust its like we see ELlen D work, cos all this faggot amounts to is pussy
ok-ish
ya boring as hell, U'll soil ya self, cos 1 punch'll have u mumble u hurt
& for ya bars being clear as mud? the Snub'll make ya blood puddle the dirt
cool
u can recycle, bite, im still takin ya life dude, wit a L this kids leavin
cos this battle just be a Pair a Fraze, of the result to ya batlles wit him this season
best line so far, dope
plus the gat hit this wack pig, u need to Lean up think'n u scarin kid
its nothing for me to FeedLot a fat fist, in a building where livestocks prepped for marketing
nooo
this man'll wheep know'n his fam cant handle street, im know to dropp thots
...I'll put u in lanes wit a gut feeling
& shoot ya daughters brains & stomach all over a cross walk
vicious but simple lol not bad tho
17-26? put the tough talk on HUSH u trans fag, know u'll taste clout
ya bars are Lenox N'Victa, cos the fight in u is just a women trying to break out
i didn't get this :/

This could have been better....I'm pretty sure I've seem KS before and he was better than this and I KNOW Lotto is def better than what he dropped here, disappointing, but we all have our off days.

Giving it to Killing Spree for the Pair A Fraze line.