Barcotic vs Infiltrate (C) - CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH - INF WINS VIA DQ

[Orc]

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday Feb 22nd and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC
@Infiltrate @Barcotic

[Barcotic]

i kno u got wc, so ext granted if nec.
i may go a decent amount, we'll see in the next hr
gl

EDIT

got 20

[Saint]

yeah I'll post on or around due date. match.

[Barcotic]

Originally Posted by Allen Knight

This is tough to call but ima say bar cuz i feel like he gonna drop a dope verse an suprise us

1hundo

@Infiltrate aka Haunt

aka a bisexual that oooonly talks about the dudes
he gets animated, any man tryna Pocahontas welcome to
those weak concepts dont leave a tad of concern much
none of MRI opening and u need one after my first punch
voting for urself vs schad = crooked, whack & cheap
soon as Usada votes drop, u got shook and had to cheat
ill bound u w/ some tape dog, then gagball ur chick
u can watch ur Babysit on my cock and take all my kids
my gym playlist is dope af, i only fuck w vicious beats
when it comes to Inf Adele is what he bumps religiously
fag, look.. u bang books. 33 at ya cliq, a mag cooks yall
u'll be first down from the steal at my hip. its flag football
+these light machine guns do release the business
ill let drums go all around ur mug. u a street musician
no weapon? ill scrap, roll an armbar n get ya to tap
threaten a snap, get defensive end Michael Bennett in half
alrdy murked u cousin, twice. work's becomin light yo
3 shows n u still cant build a verse to fuck w Mike Holmes
u champing w/ 8 lines was laugh of the week, ya dig?
and if thats a cop out, then zelph culd actually be a pig

20.

[Saint]

U cry in a mans arms when u lose, no doubt he's a clincher
Your cunt gets full'a sandbar & open up to a body like a mouth of a river
Mike idk who brainwashed u to get that ink. Look...I see ya
You need Dr. Evil for them tats aka laser beams on those sharks a good idea
How you sway w/ explanations prove you a big bitch; that's real shit
Ironic we alll want you to Hush the fuck up while ya wordplay only works w/ his lisp
Ur brain's on drugs thinkin up that forced shit for the wackest verse
U cant make an omelette w/o crackin eggs, & ya skull fractured if u think that shit works
U'll never have kids cuz ya game is weak & date the strangest freaks
A bitch wouldn't take seed from ur small package if Boof mailed it away for free
This nerd watches DBZ in dark seclusion. Yo..I'll spark this nuisance
Bitch u'll get two rings then a flash'll get me a new body, that's potara fusion
Wife said my dick is savage, sizewise i've got the big advantage
Once I Spaceballs on her chin she struggle to fit in a helmet like rick moranis
For being a hockey fan I'ma run up like a Viking & thrust lethal
Fuck Detroit, the only red wings on ya back will be after I cut a blood eagle
Keep comin at me sideways I'll show u i'm not to mess with
Trust.. I'll get a clean kill witha blade if Barbacide himself talkin reckless
Makin it here by chance an honest mistake, down the bottom's ur fate
I'll ease up.. cus beatings you's 'ascension' it's no wonder I stay at top of the ranks

[Lyfzaa Gamble]

barc

@Infiltratefat wifeaka Haunt

aka a bisexual that oooonly talks about the dudes
he gets animated, any man tryna Pocahontas welcome to

nice opener

those weak concepts dont leave a tad of concern much
none of MRI opening and u need one after my first punch

lol dope

voting for urself vs schad = crooked, whack & cheap
soon as Usada votes drop, u got shook and had to cheat

nice

ill bound u w/ some tape dog, then gagball ur chick
u can watch ur Babysit on my cock and take all my kids

nice flip

my gym playlist is dope af, i only fuck w vicious beats
when it comes to Inf Adele is what he bumps religiously

woo, real nice np

fag, look.. u bang books. 33 at ya cliq, a mag cooks yall
u'll be first down from the steal at my hip. its flag football

cool lol

+these light machine guns do release the business
ill let drums go all around ur mug. u a street musician

sight, bit simple but diggin it

no weapon? ill scrap, roll an armbar n get ya to tap
threaten a snap, get defensive end Michael Bennett in half

dope

alrdy murked u cousin, twice. work's becomin light yo
3 shows n u still cant build a verse to fuck w Mike Holmes

ok

u champing w/ 8 lines was laugh of the week, ya dig?
and if thats a cop out, then zelph culd actually be a pig

okay closer

overall real solid verse man, gonna be real tough to top. good shit fam.



*****



U cry in a mans arms when u lose, no doubt he's a clincher
Your cunt gets full'a sandbar & open up to a body like a mouth of a river

nice opener

Mike idk who brainwashed u to get that ink. Look...I see ya
You need Dr. Evil for them tats aka laser beams on those sharks a good idea

nah not feeling, wording could've really helped this alot

How you sway w/ explanations prove you a big bitch; that's real shit
Ironic we alll want you to Hush the fuck up while ya wordplay only works w/ his lisp

lol alright

Ur brain's on drugs thinkin up that forced shit for the wackest verse
U cant make an omelette w/o crackin eggs, & ya skull fractured if u think that shit works

nice

U'll never have kids cuz ya game is weak & date the strangest freaks
A bitch wouldn't take seed from ur small package if Boof mailed it away for free

cool

This nerd watches DBZ in dark seclusion. Yo..I'll spark this nuisance
Bitch u'll get two rings then a flash'll get me a new body, that's potara fusion

real sick

Wife said my dick is savage, sizewise i've got the big advantage
Once I Spaceballs on her chin she struggle to fit in a helmet like rick moranis

LMAO, dopee

For being a hockey fan I'ma run up like a Viking & thrust lethal
Fuck Detroit, the only red wings on ya back will be after I cut a blood eagle

good

Keep comin at me sideways I'll show u i'm not to mess with
Trust.. I'll get a clean kill witha blade if Barbacide himself talkin reckless

nice np

Makin it here by chance an honest mistake, down the bottom's ur fate
I'll ease up.. cus beatings you's 'ascension' it's no wonder I stay at top of the ranks

real sick

damn what a battle, this was super close. idk i gotta call it a tie, idk what else to say. 2 close to call

[sral]

LOL @ a tie, what a complete faggot Gamble is

I'm a real motherfucker not afraid to cast the first vote so let me show you how this done pussies:

Barcotic - Poke a Haunt is works fine in my accent but I can see some people saying it doesn't. Fire IMO. MRI/'em are eye opening was dope as well, two solid punches off rip and worded really clean. I fuck with it. I wouldn't pronounce Usada the same way you might but that's good, I can see it working in your accent definitely. Babysit is another good concept, I think maybe the wording didn't fully do it justice though here around the wordplay, it sounded a bit paedophiley when read a certain way tbh LOL and I've seen them young girls you be posting. Inf Adele again works completely fine for me with a pause in there, I haven't seen this done before either so I give it props for creativity. Flag football was clean as fuck, worded real smooth. Street Musician was cool but having two back to back gun bars maybe hurt it a little, you know? I'd have tried to space them out more personally and kept it to a varied attack to get more impact from them. Michael Bennett was dope, Mike Holmes was a similar line to the previous but not as good here and again, similar idea but done back to back, I'd have spaced them out throughout the verse to maximise impact. Cop Out was just okay, could have done more with it I felt. Solid verse, real consistent, started off with crazy fire but maybe lost some pace towards the end aside from that Michael Bennett line.

Infiltrate: Nice concept for the opening line, I fuck with it. LOL @ Dr Evil line, that's hilarious clownage right there. Possibly my fave line so far in truth as Barc seemed to take a more serious wordplay based attack rather than straight up clowning. Some might say the Shark tatt thing is played, to me nothing is played if it's done right and done well. This a clear example of that. Hush line was just okay, Omelette was another good personal idea but I wasn't keen on the "skull fractured" wording, just drew it out too long for me, too wordy and could have been cleaner. LOL @ Boof seeds line though, that's cool. Potara Fusion was ill but I can see it being too vague for some people to to get without looking it up. Rick Moranis was nice, Red Wings on your back like a Blood eagle was lost on me, I'm not sure what a Blood Eagle is tbh so I'm probably missing something here. Barbicide was another heater, I fuck with that. Ascension was cool to close. Okay so Inf had LOTD for me with that Dr Evik shit, seemed to keep it consistent throughout where I felt Barc started off crazily then seemed to have petered out BUT reading back through I definitely more of Barcs shit landed stronger than I did Inf's here, it was probably the wording to be honest as Inf seemed to try for too much at times and it ended up convoluting what was a good idea in all the unnecessary details. The omelette/fracture shit off hand here springs to mind. Good idea, just overworded to the point the punch itself lacked something to me while Barc was just straight zingers then into the next one.


Ive got Barc taking this but props to both you guys for real, this is an ill matchup. Much respect.

[Cred]

those weak concepts dont leave a tad of concern much
none of MRI opening and u need one after my first punch
fag, look.. u bang books. 33 at ya cliq, a mag cooks yall
u'll be first down from the steal at my hip. its flag football
+these light machine guns do release the business
ill let drums go all around ur mug. u a street musician

vs

U'll never have kids cuz ya game is weak & date the strangest freaks
A bitch wouldn't take seed from ur small package if Boof mailed it away for free
This nerd watches DBZ in dark seclusion. Yo..I'll spark this nuisance
Bitch u'll get two rings then a flash'll get me a new body, that's potara fusion
Wife said my dick is savage, sizewise i've got the big advantage
Once I Spaceballs on her chin she struggle to fit in a helmet like rick moranis
Keep comin at me sideways I'll show u i'm not to mess with
Trust.. I'll get a clean kill witha blade if Barbacide himself talkin reckless

Dope match here. Both had some nice shit and some shit I didn’t like. I honestly came I got this battle thinking barc was gonna take this but imo Inf happened to edge it. Honestly jus my personal preference judging these bars. Good shit to both.

Vote / Infiltrate

[Enbombz]

Poke a haunt just sounds weird. Mri was cool, us ads a bit of s reach but okay enough, babysit clean but light, Adele was corny, don't get the next one, street musician needed a better link, don't get the Bennett line, don't get the Holmes line, closer light.

Inf- opener good idea wording hurt, Dr evil was dope, hush okay, omelette good personal wording could be better, void line was okay, don't get potara, Rick Miranis was okay, barbecide was alright, closer was soft.

I got inf here, bars verse was pretty light overall. Very jab by no real haymakers. Could concepts lost on me/not familiar with. Clean verse but lacked the big hits. Inf wasn't as clean but had the better concepts here. Wording not as clean but had the stand out bar of the battle with the Dr evil line. For the more memorable verse vote inf

[DynamiCz]

aka a bisexual that oooonly talks about the dudes
he gets animated, any man tryna Pocahontas welcome to
those weak concepts dont leave a tad of concern much
none of MRI opening and u need one after my first punch

Dope here!

ill bound u w/ some tape dog, then gagball ur chick
u can watch ur Babysit on my cock and take all my kids

Coo..

my gym playlist is dope af, i only fuck w vicious beats
when it comes to Inf Adele is what he bumps religiously

Nice

fag, look.. u bang books. 33 at ya cliq, a mag cooks yall
u'll be first down from the steal at my hip. its flag football

Light, but nice

+these light machine guns do release the business
ill let drums go all around ur mug. u a street musician
no weapon? ill scrap, roll an armbar n get ya to tap
threaten a snap, get defensive end Michael Bennett in half

Solid here!

u champing w/ 8 lines was laugh of the week, ya dig?
and if thats a cop out, then zelph culd actually be a pig

Funny closer

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U cry in a mans arms when u lose, no doubt he's a clincher
Your cunt gets full'a sandbar & open up to a body like a mouth of a river

Nice

How you sway w/ explanations prove you a big bitch; that's real shit
Ironic we alll want you to Hush the fuck up while ya wordplay only works w/ his lisp

Lol funny

Ur brain's on drugs thinkin up that forced shit for the wackest verse
U cant make an omelette w/o crackin eggs, & ya skull fractured if u think that shit works

Nice

This nerd watches DBZ in dark seclusion. Yo..I'll spark this nuisance
Bitch u'll get two rings then a flash'll get me a new body, that's potara fusion
Wife said my dick is savage, sizewise i've got the big advantage
Once I Spaceballs on her chin she struggle to fit in a helmet like rick moranis

Doppppe!

Makin it here by chance an honest mistake, down the bottom's ur fate
I'll ease up.. cus beatings you's 'ascension' it's no wonder I stay at top of the ranks

Coo closer

Overall probably top battle of the week, but this shit was dope on both ends. Had to read twice, but I'm going with Bar on this one.

V-Bar

[bleak]

For whoever doesn't think Pocahontas doesn't work, I can see where you voted for Inf. But on first read I thought that shit was fire and that's what is currently pulling it in Barc's favor for me (still reading tho) Lines after that was filler but u had

MRI even tho it's played
Infidel
Flag football COULD have been killer but still decent
Street musician pretty good.

Bennett was shit and you know it
Zelph line was just there


Okay Inf potara fusion literally slayed me and I'm gonna ignore the fact you said RINGS instead of EARrings cause they the same thing if you think about it. I love anime/gaming bars so this was an easy way to earn my favor at least. Spaceballs to follow which was also nice. Ascension took a second glance so not completely seamless but I thought it hit. You also had

Dr Evil
Barbicide

The rest weren't complete misses but these are what stood out. I guess I'm gonna have to count them out.


Pot fusion LOTB
Pocahontas LOTV

2 good
Rest decent
1 miss

3 good
Wash
2 misses/filler

Gd this is hard to vote on but Barc has just a TAD more substance. I honestly was not expecting Inf to be inspired for this after all the battles he's been writing for but he came correct. If we were voting based on workload it would go Inf but stand alone battle I'm leaning Barcotic

[Concrete]

Vote Barcotic, more clean and just better style overall. Did at least as much damage without stretching the lines. Unfortunately, in this battle, there was some rather forced wordplays, inside jokes and a few references lost on me. Overall I think Infil had the better concepts and aggression, however several of his punches came off as... cumbersome. The cracking skull could have been used way better for instance. Still, a nice battle from both sides, but I prefer Barcotics more direct approach here.

[Suthaveli]

man i had a big layout but lost it. i didn't like barc pocahantos or closer but he had a nice verse all the way thru. say what u guys want, but he continues to post wp & its actually getting better. other then the opener of course, so props to him on that. babysit & flagfootball were cold af tho! dope shit.

inf had a few misses that were just lackin in certain areas. imo u can tell his focus wasn't all the way there vs what i've been reading from him in the past month or 2. he's a diff beast nw. i love the idea of the shark tatt lasers, but the wording on it ruined it for me. but the potential i envisioned there would've made it lotb imo. omelette could've been better & i didn't care for red wing nor closer. barbacide had me shleep.

cool battle. but i would have to edge it to @Barcotic w.a better overall verse. gd shit from both tho

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

aka a bisexual that oooonly talks about the dudes
he gets animated, any man tryna Pocahontas welcome to
Not feeling this
those weak concepts dont leave a tad of concern much
none of MRI opening and u need one after my first punch
This is nice
voting for urself vs schad = crooked, whack & cheap
soon as Usada votes drop, u got shook and had to cheat
the wp doesn't work both ways
ill bound u w/ some tape dog, then gagball ur chick
u can watch ur Babysit on my cock and take all my kids
Naaa too predictable
my gym playlist is dope af, i only fuck w vicious beats
when it comes to Inf Adele is what he bumps religiously
this is aight
fag, look.. u bang books. 33 at ya cliq, a mag cooks yall
u'll be first down from the steal at my hip. its flag football
Smh.. naaaa
+these light machine guns do release the business
ill let drums go all around ur mug. u a street musician
Dope
no weapon? ill scrap, roll an armbar n get ya to tap
threaten a snap, get defensive end Michael Bennett in half
Just OK
alrdy murked u cousin, twice. work's becomin light yo
3 shows n u still cant build a verse to fuck w Mike Holmes
Crazy, should've hard more like this
u champing w/ 8 lines was laugh of the week, ya dig?
and if thats a cop out, then zelph culd actually be a pig
Decent closer

versus

Originally Posted by Infiltrate

U cry in a mans arms when u lose, no doubt he's a clincher
Your cunt gets full'a sandbar & open up to a body like a mouth of a river
Good opener
Mike idk who brainwashed u to get that ink. Look...I see ya
You need Dr. Evil for them tats aka laser beams on those sharks a good idea
Funny, but wording's off
How you sway w/ explanations prove you a big bitch; that's real shit
Ironic we alll want you to Hush the fuck up while ya wordplay only works w/ his lisp
LOOOOOLLL
Ur brain's on drugs thinkin up that forced shit for the wackest verse
U cant make an omelette w/o crackin eggs, & ya skull fractured if u think that shit works
Bit convoluted, still hit tho
U'll never have kids cuz ya game is weak & date the strangest freaks
A bitch wouldn't take seed from ur small package if Boof mailed it away for free
Dope
This nerd watches DBZ in dark seclusion. Yo..I'll spark this nuisance
Bitch u'll get two rings then a flash'll get me a new body, that's potara fusion
Cool, had to google..lol
Wife said my dick is savage, sizewise i've got the big advantage
Once I Spaceballs on her chin she struggle to fit in a helmet like rick moranis
Lol good
For being a hockey fan I'ma run up like a Viking & thrust lethal
Fuck Detroit, the only red wings on ya back will be after I cut a blood eagle
Great imagery
Keep comin at me sideways I'll show u i'm not to mess with
Trust.. I'll get a clean kill witha blade if Barbacide himself talkin reckless
This is OK
Makin it here by chance an honest mistake, down the bottom's ur fate
I'll ease up.. cus beatings you's 'ascension' it's no wonder I stay at top of the ranks
Nice closer

Inf def got convoluted at times, but for the most part his joints landed imo. Barc's original verse, before Inf dropped, was dope asf to Me, but then I come back & he's changed up some things.. basically edited out at least two of the bars I thought hit the hardest lol. As close as expected & I can see why ppl would go the other way, but VOTE INFILTRATE.

[Destroyer]

I got inf here
I don’t know but we need to stop this bullshit style of putting two related words in the punchline and pretending that’s clever. Mike Holmes was dope. Inf Adele was horrible. No hate here barc, this is just straight up how I feel. Street musician was fire
Inf had dr. Evil, hush lisp, omelette, all personals and all hit.

V/inf

Also, if bleak isn’t a barcotic alias, I’ll be a mernkeys urncle

[King Karaoke]

Hi...


those weak concepts dont leave a tad of concern much
none of MRI opening and u need one after my first punch
fag, look.. u bang books. 33 at ya cliq, a mag cooks yall
u'll be first down from the steal at my hip. its flag football
+these light machine guns do release the business
ill let drums go all around ur mug. u a street musician

I like the shortened bars but a lot of your stuff didnt hit hard. Really disliked the opener. Adele was ok but you couldve done way more.


Mike idk who brainwashed u to get that ink. Look...I see ya
You need Dr. Evil for them tats aka laser beams on those sharks a good idea
How you sway w/ explanations prove you a big bitch; that's real shit
Ironic we alll want you to Hush the fuck up while ya wordplay only works w/ his lisp
Ur brain's on drugs thinkin up that forced shit for the wackest verse
U cant make an omelette w/o crackin eggs, & ya skull fractured if u think that shit works
U'll never have kids cuz ya game is weak & date the strangest freaks
A bitch wouldn't take seed from ur small package if Boof mailed it away for free
This nerd watches DBZ in dark seclusion. Yo..I'll spark this nuisance
Bitch u'll get two rings then a flash'll get me a new body, that's potara fusion
Keep comin at me sideways I'll show u i'm not to mess with
Trust.. I'll get a clean kill witha blade if Barbacide himself talkin reckless

Your verse was fire to me. Your creativity is what makes your lines either dope or terrible. The Dr. Evil line was very creative but you tried doing too much with closer. Your personals got you this win.

Infiltration got this with his personals.

Bye...

[Cred]

5-5, FIRST PERSON UP BY 2 WINS.

[Pinot Grij]

Ok, Barc basically had two lines of attack here -- wordplay and nameplays (his and Inf's). The wordplay that started the verse was hard to nail on the first go round. Pocahontas needed to be sounded out a few times. Same with MRI. Same with Usada. Soe I had a difficult entryway into this verse. Started picking up steam in the middle -- I like the Adele bar (gym playlist as a diss though, lol, love it)... but the wp doesn't work both ways for me. The Inf Adele / religious angle wasn't strong enough for me. The other nameplays were your own -- last week was the first time I saw you referred to as Mike in the battle. I'm so-so on it. Yo, so I just wasn't wow'ed here is basically it. I had more problems than I had nod-along moments essentially.

Inf -- I like the opener, I don't get the tattoo reference, but it's written well. The wordplay attacks were great personals -- working in the omelette concept was genius. Really after that, the verse kinda fell off. The Dragonball line was written nice, but I don't relate to it. There were good concepts and solid rhyme-writing but I didn't get floored by anything really.

So here's my dilemma. Barc was more consistent through the verse, while Inf was strong off the top and weakened towards the end. I still gotta hand it to Infiltrate though on personal preference. I got a gut reaction from a few of his bars. Barcotic didn't give me those feels at all.

Vote -- Infiltrate

[Orc]

Just saw all the bullshit. Inf wins. "I'm out if I lose" thats just pathetic.