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08-04-2013, 09:07 PM
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el es a la mode
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A River Runs Through Me As I Flow With The Waves
An Old School Method... I'm old.. don't hate... That's agism
A drop of rain is hit with light Running through the sky- It's effect is a blessed Vision I use to fuel my life- Emotions pour into streams Racing through storms of my seas- Rivers are born in the seems Used with brainstorms and lightning- Neutralizing the energy So I can harness what's left- Translating intricasies Hoping to garnish the depth- Recharged and refreshed Omnipotant over sources of flow- Unfold the force of my soul Gather feelings on a course with control- Happiness with love and growth to death with Miserable losses- Existence exhausted As my pen travels dimensions in all this- Surfing the waves I'll go under and won't resurface for days- Further displays awakened Laced within my nerves on this page- Overflowing causing floods of Water to crash through the masses- With tidal (title) currents sometimes I flourish in ways surpassing the savage- Tracking my status as I change with the seasons Heinous in regions- Turning up the Heat to keep the language from freezing- Extinguish the demons with the sorcery to Wash you with truth- while Advertisments to be the truest Voice the fraudulent rules- Elevating my brain'waves' brings Successful flow to all that I do-
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08-22-2013, 11:27 AM
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smfh
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08-22-2013, 01:44 PM
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el es a la mode
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why was this brought to the front... smfh2... keep doing research.
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08-22-2013, 03:24 PM
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Wasn't feelin' this tbh...thought it was bland, however I thought this was cool -
As my pen travels dimensions in all this- Surfing the waves I'll go under and won't resurface for days ...Stay upwards. |
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08-22-2013, 06:30 PM
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el es a la mode
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yes I know... it's something I just posted when I first got here... it's old and shouldn't be on the first page. just playful bullshit
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08-22-2013, 09:13 PM
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White Earl
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Its only playful. But has some dope concepts
I have the email btw@pie Dope shit. And I will match and respond soon. But in the meantime. Goddamnit. Check your pm box and perform the task required please. Consider it jury duty. And its very light this month at that! Hasten my friend. HASTEN!!!
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08-23-2013, 11:22 AM
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research? cause i read shit a couple pages back?
lmfao ok holmes damn niggaz logic on here is something else |
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08-23-2013, 11:55 AM
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el es a la mode
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yea... cuz who looks up shit pages back to make stupid comments.... research and logic.... you need both...
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08-23-2013, 12:04 PM
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you're assuming i purposely looked for this drop with the intent to make that comment...logic?
dont tell another nigga what he needs when you aint got fuck all of it to offer yourself #1 & for the record, this shit aint even that old so shut tha fuck up |
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