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PiE 08-04-2013 09:07 PM

A River Runs Through Me As I Flow With The Waves
 
An Old School Method... I'm old.. don't hate... That's agism



A drop of rain is hit with light

Running through the sky-
It's effect is a blessed
Vision I use to fuel my life-
Emotions pour into streams
Racing through storms of my seas-

Rivers are born in the seems
Used with brainstorms and lightning-
Neutralizing the energy
So I can harness what's left-

Translating intricasies
Hoping to garnish the depth-
Recharged and refreshed
Omnipotant over sources of flow-
Unfold the force of my soul
Gather feelings on a course with control-
Happiness with love and growth to death with

Miserable losses-
Existence exhausted

As my pen travels dimensions in all this-
Surfing the waves

I'll go under and won't resurface for days-

Further displays awakened
Laced within my nerves on this page-
Overflowing causing floods of
Water to crash through the masses-

With tidal (title) currents sometimes
I flourish in ways surpassing the savage-
Tracking my status as I change with the seasons
Heinous in regions-

Turning up the
Heat to keep the language from freezing-
Extinguish the demons with the sorcery to

Wash you with truth- while
Advertisments to be the truest
Voice the fraudulent rules-
Elevating my brain'waves' brings
Successful flow to all that I do-

Pakistani Hand Cannon 08-22-2013 11:27 AM

smfh

PiE 08-22-2013 01:44 PM

why was this brought to the front... smfh2... keep doing research.

Exis 08-22-2013 03:24 PM

Wasn't feelin' this tbh...thought it was bland, however I thought this was cool -

As my pen travels dimensions in all this-
Surfing the waves

I'll go under and won't resurface for days

...Stay upwards.

PiE 08-22-2013 06:30 PM

yes I know... it's something I just posted when I first got here... it's old and shouldn't be on the first page. just playful bullshit

Geno 08-22-2013 09:13 PM

Its only playful. But has some dope concepts

I have the email btw@pie

Dope shit. And I will match and respond soon.
But in the meantime. Goddamnit. Check your pm box and perform the task required please. Consider it jury duty. And its very light this month at that! Hasten my friend. HASTEN!!!

Pakistani Hand Cannon 08-23-2013 11:22 AM

research? cause i read shit a couple pages back?

lmfao ok holmes

damn niggaz logic on here is something else

PiE 08-23-2013 11:55 AM

yea... cuz who looks up shit pages back to make stupid comments.... research and logic.... you need both...

Pakistani Hand Cannon 08-23-2013 12:04 PM

you're assuming i purposely looked for this drop with the intent to make that comment...logic?
dont tell another nigga what he needs when you aint got fuck all of it to offer yourself
#1

& for the record, this shit aint even that old so shut tha fuck up


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