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Mediocrity · 05-03-2018, 10:19 PM

I think your finally dead to me
all them nights I went without sleep just cause I was too scared to dream
I’d see your face then it’d get worse
It’s a blessing and a curse
this thing that we call love sometimes it can make you hurt
Sometimes it can make you crazy thinking bout all the things you heard
you said you’d never leave me and how we could make it work
In the end you cheated on me I’m questioning my self worth
Have a funeral for my feelings drop my heart in the dirt
Never cuff another bitch until I get what I deserve
And that’s love and loyalty I put those 2 things first
Wore my heart upon my sleeve until you ripped it off my shirt
Now these broads are on their knees as I give em what they deserve
They don’t get nothin from me but this dick and a hard time
They want me to fall in love I tell these hoes to fall in line
I ain’t posing for no pictures so you can post it online
You wanna make these hoes jealous but bitch you ain’t even mine
Besides

Does it look like my name could be Superman
I ain’t into saving these hoes that’s just not who I am
Matter fact
I don’t even know who I am understand that I’m goin thru changes
Yeah I know my life’s been short but I’ve been thru some things and I just want a better life
forget about being famous performing at major stages
Reporters in my face asking me questions about the latest
I just wanna make it

Geno · 05-04-2018, 09:19 AM

Pretty emotionally revealing. I dig it. Always enjoy this type material. Used to be all i wrote. Good drop man

Mediocrity · 05-04-2018, 11:37 AM

Thanks man

ACTIVATE SELF · 05-07-2018, 11:26 AM

Yeah, perhaps not the most elegant or sophisticated form of poetry I've ever read, but its honesty and raw emotion made it worth the read. You kept it 100 from top to bottom and articulated your feelings/pov very well. I fuck wit it. In particular this line ...

"Have a funeral for my feelings drop my heart in the dirt"

Good shit, M.

Lenox · 05-07-2018, 06:39 PM

This shit is gay as fuck ,, kill urself u emo C u c k b o y

Mediocrity · 05-07-2018, 06:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lenox

This shit is gay as fuck ,, kill urself u emo C u c k b o y

CUT MY LIFE INTO PIECES

THIS IS MY LAST RESORT

SUFFOCATION

NO BREATHIN

El Muffin · 05-08-2018, 02:45 AM

LMAO

Wutzit Tewya · 05-12-2018, 07:43 PM

I ain't posing for no pictures so you can post it online
You wanna make these hoes jealous, but bitch you ain't even mine...hahaha.

Never anything wrong with droppin emotion man. I feel like writing is more of an outlet than anything. Keep it up and you might find out that's where you'll pull your best shit from. Not the best shit I've read..but I can dig the realness of the emotion in it. But yo...I'm just some fuckin dude online. Keep doin you regardless

Current faggot · 05-15-2018, 12:26 PM

This was nice. The opener was nice.
The closer , the whole better life sequence was pretty dope. Good read

05-03-2018, 10:19 PM	#1
Mediocrity Brother Join Date: Apr 2018 Posts: 518 Rep Power: 4919695	Free verse I think your finally dead to me all them nights I went without sleep just cause I was too scared to dream I’d see your face then it’d get worse It’s a blessing and a curse this thing that we call love sometimes it can make you hurt Sometimes it can make you crazy thinking bout all the things you heard you said you’d never leave me and how we could make it work In the end you cheated on me I’m questioning my self worth Have a funeral for my feelings drop my heart in the dirt Never cuff another bitch until I get what I deserve And that’s love and loyalty I put those 2 things first Wore my heart upon my sleeve until you ripped it off my shirt Now these broads are on their knees as I give em what they deserve They don’t get nothin from me but this dick and a hard time They want me to fall in love I tell these hoes to fall in line I ain’t posing for no pictures so you can post it online You wanna make these hoes jealous but bitch you ain’t even mine Besides Does it look like my name could be Superman I ain’t into saving these hoes that’s just not who I am Matter fact I don’t even know who I am understand that I’m goin thru changes Yeah I know my life’s been short but I’ve been thru some things and I just want a better life forget about being famous performing at major stages Reporters in my face asking me questions about the latest I just wanna make it

05-04-2018, 09:19 AM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Pretty emotionally revealing. I dig it. Always enjoy this type material. Used to be all i wrote. Good drop man __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

05-08-2018, 02:45 AM	#7
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	LMAO __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

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05-04-2018, 11:37 AM	#3
Mediocrity Brother Join Date: Apr 2018 Posts: 518 Rep Power: 4919695	Thanks man

05-07-2018, 06:39 PM	#5
Lenox Hungry Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 1,420 Battle Record: 1-5 Rep Power: 16155613	This shit is gay as fuck ,, kill urself u emo C u c k b o y

05-12-2018, 07:43 PM	#8
Wutzit Tewya Junior Member Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 12 Rep Power: 0	I ain't posing for no pictures so you can post it online You wanna make these hoes jealous, but bitch you ain't even mine...hahaha. Never anything wrong with droppin emotion man. I feel like writing is more of an outlet than anything. Keep it up and you might find out that's where you'll pull your best shit from. Not the best shit I've read..but I can dig the realness of the emotion in it. But yo...I'm just some fuckin dude online. Keep doin you regardless

05-15-2018, 12:26 PM	#9
Current faggot Senior Member Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 233 Rep Power: 0	This was nice. The opener was nice. The closer , the whole better life sequence was pretty dope. Good read