Free verse
 

I think your finally dead to me
all them nights I went without sleep just cause I was too scared to dream
I’d see your face then it’d get worse
It’s a blessing and a curse
this thing that we call love sometimes it can make you hurt
Sometimes it can make you crazy thinking bout all the things you heard
you said you’d never leave me and how we could make it work
In the end you cheated on me I’m questioning my self worth
Have a funeral for my feelings drop my heart in the dirt
Never cuff another bitch until I get what I deserve
And that’s love and loyalty I put those 2 things first
Wore my heart upon my sleeve until you ripped it off my shirt
Now these broads are on their knees as I give em what they deserve
They don’t get nothin from me but this dick and a hard time
They want me to fall in love I tell these hoes to fall in line
I ain’t posing for no pictures so you can post it online
You wanna make these hoes jealous but bitch you ain’t even mine
Besides

Does it look like my name could be Superman
I ain’t into saving these hoes that’s just not who I am
Matter fact
I don’t even know who I am understand that I’m goin thru changes
Yeah I know my life’s been short but I’ve been thru some things and I just want a better life
forget about being famous performing at major stages
Reporters in my face asking me questions about the latest
I just wanna make it

Pretty emotionally revealing. I dig it. Always enjoy this type material. Used to be all i wrote. Good drop man

Thanks man

Yeah, perhaps not the most elegant or sophisticated form of poetry I've ever read, but its honesty and raw emotion made it worth the read. You kept it 100 from top to bottom and articulated your feelings/pov very well. I fuck wit it. In particular this line ...

"Have a funeral for my feelings drop my heart in the dirt"

Good shit, M.

This shit is gay as fuck ,, kill urself u emo C u c k b o y

CUT MY LIFE INTO PIECES

THIS IS MY LAST RESORT

SUFFOCATION

NO BREATHIN

LMAO

I ain't posing for no pictures so you can post it online
You wanna make these hoes jealous, but bitch you ain't even mine...hahaha.

Never anything wrong with droppin emotion man. I feel like writing is more of an outlet than anything. Keep it up and you might find out that's where you'll pull your best shit from. Not the best shit I've read..but I can dig the realness of the emotion in it. But yo...I'm just some fuckin dude online. Keep doin you regardless

This was nice. The opener was nice.
The closer , the whole better life sequence was pretty dope. Good read