Mind Distortion

CopyPat · 07-06-2015, 12:38 AM

Fire stokin, hot to scorch. My rhymes are molten lava form. Lines are golden, top the board. Your style is low on awesome.. snore. Supply is slow for proper molded rhymes, your flow’s on life support. My style’s a whole concoction sorta vile and mostly rotten. Hoards of grimy old forgotten corpses winding through my haunted verses. I’m blinding through your optic cortex. Climb into your logic, snort a line and do a mind distortion. I’m flying through with flying colors. Your rhymes are too confined, conformist. My style is huge, a wide performance. Your style is cute and tiny, Novice… I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy, when I handle this plate you guys are food and I’m the jaw that feeds. Word to my momma, I’m outta my lima bean. You don’t wanna see what this honkey mean, get some gonorrhea. And a nauseous feeling, catch the hottest fever. Catch an honest beating when you tangle with the boss of lyrics. Drop repulsive music, I’m a compulsive human. And I’m compelled to send to hell all of you shoddy losers. The fuckin shotty shooter. The fuckin party pooper. You duckin cars, my Ruger bust apart consumers. Put a damper on your mood like if you watchin news clips. And then you watch my uz clips. And then I watch the ooze drip. The fuckin boss of cool shit. Fuck Bronson music. The only one with action is the CopyPoo biissssssshhhh

Hush · 07-06-2015, 12:41 AM

Forgotten corpses/optic cortex/conformist/distortion entire section was flames

Clutbuck · 07-06-2015, 01:52 PM

I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy, when I handle this plate you guys are food and I’m the jaw that feeds. Word to my momma, I’m outta my lima bean.

lmaoooo that section rolled off so smooth, plus the shit Hush mentioned

keep that pen moving!

Mr. J · 07-09-2015, 10:57 AM

I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy, when I handle this plate you guys are food and I’m the jaw that feeds. Word to my momma, I’m outta my lima bean.

^^^
This whole section was nice to me, the rest was kind of hit and miss for me
when you used 'conformist' that kind of threw me off because of the connection
other then that this was a cool new Copy scheme, not as nice as...shit I forget what it's called
either way this was a pretty cool piece ja?

CopyPat · 10-07-2015, 09:21 PM

stop and view this. awesome. do it.

Exis · 10-10-2015, 01:21 AM

Great piece...I can't fault it, your flow is awesome...but you can't practice what you preach either
..You tell me to break outta my comfort zone then write the same in/same out type shit.

Write a topical...you've already got swagger in your arsenal, not to mention your butter like flow.

time is now...branch out, your deprivin' us of pure brilliance.

Stay upside.

.

Witty · 10-15-2015, 11:10 PM

My style is huge, a wide performance. Your style is cute and tiny, Novice… I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy

^Sweet Jesus lol that shit was so dope man. All of it was tbh the rhymes were flawless, some shit was funny as fuck and other parts were really really clever. Rhymes come easy to you like they do to me, so I can really appreciate what you do, you've mastered this shit dude, when it comes to sheer entertainment and enjoyment from reading a verse, you are the best hands down, never change, never conform, this shit was flames bro.

2tripple0 · 10-18-2015, 02:36 PM

lol enjoyed this one thought you used a unique structure to attack it.......the lines were easy to read like most of the other people already said......definitely rolled off the toungue and was a dope flow for the most part.....cant really pick at any points in this piece it was strong overall good drop continue writing mate will check back on this later

Blaccalicious · 11-05-2015, 02:48 PM

My kind of shit but next time broading the content of it being "my styles this.. your styles that.." your flow, word choices and rhyme schems are muuuuuurda tho G.

Dove Dozer · 11-26-2015, 04:04 PM

this is ridiculously dope. your flow starts of crazy right out the gate and carries on throughout. your schemes are retarded

MMLP · 12-14-2015, 08:10 AM

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CopyPat · 05-13-2016, 01:57 AM

oh damn this gotta be upped hahaha

Split Eight · 05-22-2016, 08:51 AM

damn. I was hoping this was hot off the presses

what Hush mentioned was the dopest part, IMO. Copy's comfort zone is insanity

07-06-2015, 12:38 AM	#1
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	Mind Distortion Fire stokin, hot to scorch. My rhymes are molten lava form. Lines are golden, top the board. Your style is low on awesome.. snore. Supply is slow for proper molded rhymes, your flow’s on life support. My style’s a whole concoction sorta vile and mostly rotten. Hoards of grimy old forgotten corpses winding through my haunted verses. I’m blinding through your optic cortex. Climb into your logic, snort a line and do a mind distortion. I’m flying through with flying colors. Your rhymes are too confined, conformist. My style is huge, a wide performance. Your style is cute and tiny, Novice… I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy, when I handle this plate you guys are food and I’m the jaw that feeds. Word to my momma, I’m outta my lima bean. You don’t wanna see what this honkey mean, get some gonorrhea. And a nauseous feeling, catch the hottest fever. Catch an honest beating when you tangle with the boss of lyrics. Drop repulsive music, I’m a compulsive human. And I’m compelled to send to hell all of you shoddy losers. The fuckin shotty shooter. The fuckin party pooper. You duckin cars, my Ruger bust apart consumers. Put a damper on your mood like if you watchin news clips. And then you watch my uz clips. And then I watch the ooze drip. The fuckin boss of cool shit. Fuck Bronson music. The only one with action is the CopyPoo biissssssshhhh __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete. Last edited by CopyPat; 10-15-2015 at 11:14 PM.

07-06-2015, 12:41 AM	#2
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	Forgotten corpses/optic cortex/conformist/distortion entire section was flames __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

07-09-2015, 10:57 AM	#4
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy, when I handle this plate you guys are food and I’m the jaw that feeds. Word to my momma, I’m outta my lima bean. ^^^ This whole section was nice to me, the rest was kind of hit and miss for me when you used 'conformist' that kind of threw me off because of the connection other then that this was a cool new Copy scheme, not as nice as...shit I forget what it's called either way this was a pretty cool piece ja? __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

10-07-2015, 09:21 PM	#5
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	stop and view this. awesome. do it. __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete. Last edited by CopyPat; 05-13-2016 at 01:56 AM.

10-15-2015, 11:10 PM	#7
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	My style is huge, a wide performance. Your style is cute and tiny, Novice… I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy ^Sweet Jesus lol that shit was so dope man. All of it was tbh the rhymes were flawless, some shit was funny as fuck and other parts were really really clever. Rhymes come easy to you like they do to me, so I can really appreciate what you do, you've mastered this shit dude, when it comes to sheer entertainment and enjoyment from reading a verse, you are the best hands down, never change, never conform, this shit was flames bro. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

07-06-2015, 01:52 PM	#3
Clutbuck Battle Rap's Married Man Join Date: May 2015 Location: Crumpetville, England Posts: 389 Battle Record: 2-0 Champed - Gorilla Writing league Rep Power: 3513501	I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy, when I handle this plate you guys are food and I’m the jaw that feeds. Word to my momma, I’m outta my lima bean. lmaoooo that section rolled off so smooth, plus the shit Hush mentioned keep that pen moving!

10-10-2015, 01:21 AM	#6
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Great piece...I can't fault it, your flow is awesome...but you can't practice what you preach either ..You tell me to break outta my comfort zone then write the same in/same out type shit. Write a topical...you've already got swagger in your arsenal, not to mention your butter like flow. time is now...branch out, your deprivin' us of pure brilliance. Stay upside. .

10-18-2015, 02:36 PM	#8
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	lol enjoyed this one thought you used a unique structure to attack it.......the lines were easy to read like most of the other people already said......definitely rolled off the toungue and was a dope flow for the most part.....cant really pick at any points in this piece it was strong overall good drop continue writing mate will check back on this later __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

11-05-2015, 02:48 PM	#9
Blaccalicious Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 12 Rep Power: 0	My kind of shit but next time broading the content of it being "my styles this.. your styles that.." your flow, word choices and rhyme schems are muuuuuurda tho G.

11-26-2015, 04:04 PM	#10
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	this is ridiculously dope. your flow starts of crazy right out the gate and carries on throughout. your schemes are retarded __________________

12-14-2015, 08:10 AM	#11
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 614 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768091	Insert Flame emoji's

05-13-2016, 01:57 AM	#12
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	oh damn this gotta be upped hahaha __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

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