Mind Distortion
 

Fire stokin, hot to scorch. My rhymes are molten lava form. Lines are golden, top the board. Your style is low on awesome.. snore. Supply is slow for proper molded rhymes, your flow’s on life support. My style’s a whole concoction sorta vile and mostly rotten. Hoards of grimy old forgotten corpses winding through my haunted verses. I’m blinding through your optic cortex. Climb into your logic, snort a line and do a mind distortion. I’m flying through with flying colors. Your rhymes are too confined, conformist. My style is huge, a wide performance. Your style is cute and tiny, Novice… I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy, when I handle this plate you guys are food and I’m the jaw that feeds. Word to my momma, I’m outta my lima bean. You don’t wanna see what this honkey mean, get some gonorrhea. And a nauseous feeling, catch the hottest fever. Catch an honest beating when you tangle with the boss of lyrics. Drop repulsive music, I’m a compulsive human. And I’m compelled to send to hell all of you shoddy losers. The fuckin shotty shooter. The fuckin party pooper. You duckin cars, my Ruger bust apart consumers. Put a damper on your mood like if you watchin news clips. And then you watch my uz clips. And then I watch the ooze drip. The fuckin boss of cool shit. Fuck Bronson music. The only one with action is the CopyPoo biissssssshhhh

Forgotten corpses/optic cortex/conformist/distortion entire section was flames

I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy, when I handle this plate you guys are food and I’m the jaw that feeds. Word to my momma, I’m outta my lima bean.

lmaoooo that section rolled off so smooth, plus the shit Hush mentioned

keep that pen moving!

I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy, when I handle this plate you guys are food and I’m the jaw that feeds. Word to my momma, I’m outta my lima bean.

^^^
This whole section was nice to me, the rest was kind of hit and miss for me
when you used 'conformist' that kind of threw me off because of the connection
other then that this was a cool new Copy scheme, not as nice as...shit I forget what it's called
either way this was a pretty cool piece ja?

stop and view this. awesome. do it.

Great piece...I can't fault it, your flow is awesome...but you can't practice what you preach either
..You tell me to break outta my comfort zone then write the same in/same out type shit.

Write a topical...you've already got swagger in your arsenal, not to mention your butter like flow.

time is now...branch out, your deprivin' us of pure brilliance.

Stay upside.



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My style is huge, a wide performance. Your style is cute and tiny, Novice… I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy

^Sweet Jesus lol that shit was so dope man. All of it was tbh the rhymes were flawless, some shit was funny as fuck and other parts were really really clever. Rhymes come easy to you like they do to me, so I can really appreciate what you do, you've mastered this shit dude, when it comes to sheer entertainment and enjoyment from reading a verse, you are the best hands down, never change, never conform, this shit was flames bro.

lol enjoyed this one thought you used a unique structure to attack it.......the lines were easy to read like most of the other people already said......definitely rolled off the toungue and was a dope flow for the most part.....cant really pick at any points in this piece it was strong overall good drop continue writing mate will check back on this later

My kind of shit but next time broading the content of it being "my styles this.. your styles that.." your flow, word choices and rhyme schems are muuuuuurda tho G.

this is ridiculously dope. your flow starts of crazy right out the gate and carries on throughout. your schemes are retarded

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oh damn this gotta be upped hahaha

damn. I was hoping this was hot off the presses

what Hush mentioned was the dopest part, IMO. Copy's comfort zone is insanity