Hush vs Tic - (Tic wins)

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@Hush @Tic

[Tic]

Sup. 12? Maybe more......what you wanna do.

[Hush]

This a shooting gallery

When it come to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd
U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words
from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing
No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian
One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack
One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back
I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me
Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery
Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy
U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie
Vs me u lighting the c4, U the type of Coward asking why it's beef for
All my niggas turn to animals An shoot This is transformers beast wars
If I'm in fight mode..Mr Freeze when I grip the beam..ice cold
This is Gaultnet for Nes all I gotta do is press a button and your life's stole

[Tic]

You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it
You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice"
No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent
Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus
Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers
All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners
Precision attack has this cry baby's heart broke in ya chest
Blade leave ya insides lifeless - I call it the blighted ovum effect
Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best
We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X
I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate
The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section
Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream
Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene

[Pinot Grij]

Hush

When it come to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd
U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words
setup is kinda wordy - i like the premise of the punch, but it was not killer
from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing
No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian
decent line
One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack
One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back
I like the setup as a punch better than the punch, lol - both nice tho
I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me
Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery
I don't get the reference
Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy
U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie
Selfie feels like a dry concept, but you flipped it nice
Vs me u lighting the c4, U the type of Coward asking why it's beef for
All my niggas turn to animals An shoot This is transformers beast wars
this is aight
If I'm in fight mode..Mr Freeze when I grip the beam..ice cold
This is Gaultnet for Nes all I gotta do is press a button and your life's stole
old ass reference - I don't remember Gauntlet that well tho. sorry

vs

Tic

You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it
You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice"
eeeee.. that's a little played
No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent
Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus
I like this. Pretty hilarious
Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers
All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners
Nice imagery - still topical concept too
Precision attack has this cry baby's heart broke in ya chest
Blade leave ya insides lifeless - I call it the blighted ovum effect
I don't get this one.
Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best
We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X
I don't get this one either
I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate
The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section
This is alright
Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream
Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene
The concept is a little lost here

I really like how Tic started off - The Zika and the Oscars lines were bomb as fuck, but everything esle after that kida fell off. I think if you could've kept up that firing rate, you coulda taken it but as it stands I gotta go with Hush. I think some of the punches weren't that hard-hitting, but I like the variance of concepts. There was something there for everyone.

Vote -- Hush

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Hush

This a shooting gallery

When it come to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd
U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words
Ok
from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing
No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian
Haha cool
One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack
One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back
not bad
I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me
Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery
meh
Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy
U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie
Wasnt terrible but seen loads of these selfie bars
Vs me u lighting the c4, U the type of Coward asking why it's beef for
All my niggas turn to animals An shoot This is transformers beast wars
Transformers = no
If I'm in fight mode..Mr Freeze when I grip the beam..ice cold
This is Gaultnet for Nes all I gotta do is press a button and your life's stole
Don't get jt

Originally Posted by Tic

You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it
You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice"
Ok
No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent
Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus
cool
Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers
All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners
Cool
Precision attack has this cry baby's heart broke in ya chest
Blade leave ya insides lifeless - I call it the blighted ovum effect
i don't understand
Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best
We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X
Nah
I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate
The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section
not bad
Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream
Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene
this hits somehow even though I don't like the Newcomer wordplay. Slightly forced

So I found hush's verse to be slightly more consistent. However, sometimes you gotta go with what was entertaining to you and tics hits were cooler in my opinion.

V/Tic

[10 Senses]

Tic had a line or 2 that made caught my attention, but his concept was all over the place.

Hush had a more complex and more consistent flow, everything pretty much strung together. Called him a comic book nerd and ripped him with a bunch of bars that related to that.

My vote goes to HUSH

[Useless]

When it come to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd
U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words
from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing
No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian

These were aite, ebonics words is nice, Mario villains feels like a throw back/dated concept. Whales back was really bad tho, from a technical standpoint it was aite but that's it lol. The rest of ur verse was meh, felt rushed. All strait forward similes with no real thought put into it. Flips were bland too.


Vs


You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it
You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice"
--- aite but feels dated

Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best
We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X
I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate
The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section
Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream
Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene
--- all these were slightly above average. Didn't get the zika virus reference and can't be arsed to Google.


Overall: both verses felt rushed with first draft lines getting posted. That's cool, OK read but nothing too crazy. Pretty close too but I felt like tic put a lil more effort into his shit



V. Tic

[Saint]

Hush had an.ok verse, no real haymakers imo. My fave was the robbery and whale back lines, Mario stomped was ok, too basic for me though.

Tic had my favorite concepts of the battle: Oscars and Zika Virus, although you list me towards the end, I felt those two were the strongest, and i almost want to give to hush on consistency a punch of his never really had me like this is solid, cool.. etc.

vote - tic

[ill nik-A]

Hush
to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd
U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words
from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing
No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian
One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack
One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back
---opener was blah, head stomp/Mario bros in 2016? Cmon bro u no better, but I'm counting the last two as punches cuz both were nasty... Fuck a set up, props on that
I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me
Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery
Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy
U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie
Vs me u lighting the c4, U the type of Coward asking why it's beef for
All my niggas turn to animals An shoot This is transformers beast wars
If I'm in fight mode..Mr Freeze when I grip the beam..ice cold
This is Gaultnet for Nes all I gotta do is press a button and your life's stole
---Robery was aight, selfie nah, I dug the beast wars shit though it's old, I never played gauntlet

Tic
You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it
You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice"
No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent
Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus
Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers
All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners
---I get the opening personal but it's tied in to an old concept that's played, zula was dope, scope I've done variations of but ur flip was ok

Precision attack has this cry baby's heart broke in ya chest
Blade leave ya insides lifeless - I call it the blighted ovum effect
Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best
We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X
I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate
The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section
Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream
Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene
--wtf at ovum effect noooo lol, Planet X was ok, deli is played ender was eh

Wow close

I got hush barely here

[Destroyer]

Hush kinda keyed, but at the same time was a little more original ultimately, even though he had some played stuff too, he flipped it nicely as per usual
Tic came nice but had some played stuff which hurt his overall verse. Opener was mean tho

V/hush

[Allen Knight]

One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack
One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back
I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me
Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery
Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy
U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie

Vs


No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent
Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus
Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers
All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners


V/hush, this was close, i can see tic gettin votes but imo his wording hurt him
here, some the bars i wasnt rocking w/ cuz the excution but zika bar was lotb, hush had a solid verse he had one more quote, props to both.

[slech]

When it come to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd
U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words
ight cool $3
from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing
No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian
lol not bad $3
One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack
One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back
could have been worded better tbh $3
I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me
Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery
eh nah $2.5
Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy
U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie
ok o $3
Vs me u lighting the c4, U the type of Coward asking why it's beef for
All my niggas turn to animals An shoot This is transformers beast wars
lol no $1.5
If I'm in fight mode..Mr Freeze when I grip the beam..ice cold
This is Gaultnet for Nes all I gotta do is press a button and your life's stole
nah $1.5
$17.5

vs

You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it
You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice"

LMFAO yes $4.5
No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent
Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus
dope $4
Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers
All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners
haha cool $4
Precision attack has this cry baby's heart broke in ya chest
Blade leave ya insides lifeless - I call it the blighted ovum effect
nah$1.5
Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best
We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X
meh $2
I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate
The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section
igh tcool $3
Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream
Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene
yeah cool $3.5

$22.5
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cool battle here but giving this to tic, just a bit more haymaker weight on his verse. it was more enjoyable to me. hush came cool but tics first lines took hush ..

vote tic