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Hush vs Tic - (Tic wins)
NBL Season 9 Due TUESDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Hush @Tic |
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This a shooting gallery
When it come to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie Vs me u lighting the c4, U the type of Coward asking why it's beef for All my niggas turn to animals An shoot This is transformers beast wars If I'm in fight mode..Mr Freeze when I grip the beam..ice cold This is Gaultnet for Nes all I gotta do is press a button and your life's stole |
You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it
You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice" No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners Precision attack has this cry baby's heart broke in ya chest Blade leave ya insides lifeless - I call it the blighted ovum effect Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene |
Hush
When it come to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words setup is kinda wordy - i like the premise of the punch, but it was not killer from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian decent line One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back I like the setup as a punch better than the punch, lol - both nice tho I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery I don't get the reference Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie Selfie feels like a dry concept, but you flipped it nice Vs me u lighting the c4, U the type of Coward asking why it's beef for All my niggas turn to animals An shoot This is transformers beast wars this is aight If I'm in fight mode..Mr Freeze when I grip the beam..ice cold This is Gaultnet for Nes all I gotta do is press a button and your life's stole old ass reference - I don't remember Gauntlet that well tho. sorry vs Tic You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice" eeeee.. that's a little played No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus I like this. Pretty hilarious Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners Nice imagery - still topical concept too Precision attack has this cry baby's heart broke in ya chest Blade leave ya insides lifeless - I call it the blighted ovum effect I don't get this one. Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X I don't get this one either I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section This is alright Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene The concept is a little lost here I really like how Tic started off - The Zika and the Oscars lines were bomb as fuck, but everything esle after that kida fell off. I think if you could've kept up that firing rate, you coulda taken it but as it stands I gotta go with Hush. I think some of the punches weren't that hard-hitting, but I like the variance of concepts. There was something there for everyone. Vote -- Hush |
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Tic had a line or 2 that made caught my attention, but his concept was all over the place.
Hush had a more complex and more consistent flow, everything pretty much strung together. Called him a comic book nerd and ripped him with a bunch of bars that related to that. My vote goes to HUSH |
When it come to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd
U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian These were aite, ebonics words is nice, Mario villains feels like a throw back/dated concept. Whales back was really bad tho, from a technical standpoint it was aite but that's it lol. The rest of ur verse was meh, felt rushed. All strait forward similes with no real thought put into it. Flips were bland too. Vs You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice" --- aite but feels dated Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene --- all these were slightly above average. Didn't get the zika virus reference and can't be arsed to Google. Overall: both verses felt rushed with first draft lines getting posted. That's cool, OK read but nothing too crazy. Pretty close too but I felt like tic put a lil more effort into his shit V. Tic |
Hush had an.ok verse, no real haymakers imo. My fave was the robbery and whale back lines, Mario stomped was ok, too basic for me though.
Tic had my favorite concepts of the battle: Oscars and Zika Virus, although you list me towards the end, I felt those two were the strongest, and i almost want to give to hush on consistency a punch of his never really had me like this is solid, cool.. etc. vote - tic |
Hush
to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back ---opener was blah, head stomp/Mario bros in 2016? Cmon bro u no better, but I'm counting the last two as punches cuz both were nasty... Fuck a set up, props on that I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie Vs me u lighting the c4, U the type of Coward asking why it's beef for All my niggas turn to animals An shoot This is transformers beast wars If I'm in fight mode..Mr Freeze when I grip the beam..ice cold This is Gaultnet for Nes all I gotta do is press a button and your life's stole ---Robery was aight, selfie nah, I dug the beast wars shit though it's old, I never played gauntlet Tic You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice" No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners ---I get the opening personal but it's tied in to an old concept that's played, zula was dope, scope I've done variations of but ur flip was ok Precision attack has this cry baby's heart broke in ya chest Blade leave ya insides lifeless - I call it the blighted ovum effect Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene --wtf at ovum effect noooo lol, Planet X was ok, deli is played ender was eh Wow close I got hush barely here |
Hush kinda keyed, but at the same time was a little more original ultimately, even though he had some played stuff too, he flipped it nicely as per usual
Tic came nice but had some played stuff which hurt his overall verse. Opener was mean tho V/hush |
One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack
One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie Vs No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners V/hush, this was close, i can see tic gettin votes but imo his wording hurt him here, some the bars i wasnt rocking w/ cuz the excution but zika bar was lotb, hush had a solid verse he had one more quote, props to both. |
When it come to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd
U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words ight cool $3 from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian lol not bad $3 One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back could have been worded better tbh $3 I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery eh nah $2.5 Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie ok o $3 Vs me u lighting the c4, U the type of Coward asking why it's beef for All my niggas turn to animals An shoot This is transformers beast wars lol no $1.5 If I'm in fight mode..Mr Freeze when I grip the beam..ice cold This is Gaultnet for Nes all I gotta do is press a button and your life's stole nah $1.5 $17.5 vs You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice" LMFAO yes $4.5 No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus dope $4 Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners haha cool $4 Precision attack has this cry baby's heart broke in ya chest Blade leave ya insides lifeless - I call it the blighted ovum effect nah$1.5 Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X meh $2 I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section igh tcool $3 Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene yeah cool $3.5 $22.5 __________________ cool battle here but giving this to tic, just a bit more haymaker weight on his verse. it was more enjoyable to me. hush came cool but tics first lines took hush .. vote tic |
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