Zelphish 2-1 vs Lotto Smirk 2-1 - LOTTO WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 11th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Zelphish @Lotto Smirk

[8===D~~~~(}:]

Sup, 14-16

[Sharp]

@Lotto Smirk zelph sent 10

[Lotto Smirk]

Gonna need the ext had to go work away

[Lotto Smirk]

What's up wi saying 14/16 and posting 10, you run out of concepts?

Tried to be cool here like fuck RB, but we know he had no options
Turned his back on his own,n just got flashbacks of his mom giving him up for adoption
Girls'll never pick him first cuz he looks retarded that's a FACT
if a girl choose to go phish the unlucky bitch lost when she pulled this joker from the pack
U & ya sister disgusting & dirty, wi u girls need mad protections
Just cuz U look Inbred doesn't give ya the excuse to be handing out yeast infections
This computer nerd can act dope but we look thru him & see he wack
phishin top tier, only if he hacked knucks account n used it to change his battle stats
Throw lefts n rights that ain't nice, I'll easily defend them geek
I'll be catching z's, wrist n make him repeatingly punch HIMSELF to sleep

Done

[8===D~~~~(}:]

Lot a hero? nah he aint shit when ive got the blade to his chin
im such a Joker.. the way my knife can turn a slight Smirk to a grin
& ya chicks bad Jim, sure. been in the slammer a couple times, but hey..
guess u werent Biggs enuf, cuz no matter hw much u Piper she'll always b gay
im a slugger, no horse play but a few run arounds n u'll get left in the dirt
just 1 combo'll send u to the dentist.. u'll see a Triple Crown when he smirks
Zelph's handy with the 9, watch me put em in his place
only time he'll ever CZ.. is when i have one pointed at his face
cash for days homie, best believe its a win when i play
cuz wen i have the .25 sent to a Lotto, uono if ima scratch em off or blow em away

[Greed]

Tried to be cool here like fuck RB, but we know he had no options
Turned his back on his own,n just got flashbacks of his mom giving him up for adoption
Okay

Girls'll never pick him first cuz he looks retarded that's a FACT
if a girl choose to go phish the unlucky bitch lost when she pulled this joker from the pack
These are long winded lines

U & ya sister disgusting & dirty, wi u girls need mad protections
Just cuz U look Inbred doesn't give ya the excuse to be handing out yeast infections
Weak

This computer nerd can act dope but we look thru him & see he wack
phishin top tier, only if he hacked knucks account n used it to change his battle stats
Eh

Throw lefts n rights that ain't nice, I'll easily defend them geek
I'll be catching z's, wrist n make him repeatingly punch HIMSELF to sleep
Well i just did one of these so i xant call it fresh

Done

Last edited by Lotto Smirk; Today at12:47 PM.



Today, 01:45 PM #6

Zelphish

Fuck RB

Join Date: May 2015

Location: Miami

Posts: 344

Battle Record: 2-1

Lot a hero? nah he aint shit when ive got the blade to his chin
im such a Joker.. the way my knife can turn a slight Smirk to a grin
Okay

& ya chicks bad Jim, sure. been in the slammer a couple times, but hey..
guess u werent Biggs enuf, cuz no matter hw much u Piper she'll always b gay
Dont get the reference

im a slugger, no horse play but a few run arounds n u'll get left in the dirt
just 1 combo'll send u to the dentist.. u'll see a Triple Crown when he smirks
Did you hit the dentist?

Zelph's handy with the 9, watch me put em in his place
only time he'll ever CZ.. is when i have one pointed at his face
Okay

cash for days homie, best believe its a win when i play
cuz wen i have the .25 sent to a Lotto, uono if ima scratch em off or blow em away
Cool

V zelph

[ill nik-A]

I got lotto... First four were nice, then it went downhill hard, I mean inbred/ yeast had potential I guess, the account stuff was ehh, ender was super played. No z's lines work.
Zelph, I saw better stuff in earlier weeks, the smirk stuff is super played against him and those were your better lines, same goes for the ender/ lotto reference, which I thought was cool, piper was bad, Cz, no!

I got lotto edging

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

What's up wi saying 14/16 and posting 10, you run out of concepts?

Tried to be cool here like fuck RB, but we know he had no options
Turned his back on his own,n just got flashbacks of his mom giving him up for adoption
ok
Girls'll never pick him first cuz he looks retarded that's a FACT
if a girl choose to go phish the unlucky bitch lost when she pulled this joker from the pack
ok, although thought the last one might've been slightly wordy.. this one definitely is
U & ya sister disgusting & dirty, wi u girls need mad protections
Just cuz U look Inbred doesn't give ya the excuse to be handing out yeast infections
Not feeling
This computer nerd can act dope but we look thru him & see he wack
phishin top tier, only if he hacked knucks account n used it to change his battle stats
like the phishing concept but not the execution
Throw lefts n rights that ain't nice, I'll easily defend them geek
I'll be catching z's, wrist n make him repeatingly punch HIMSELF to sleep
heard of few of these before but none like this so IMO, ok

Done

Vs

Originally Posted by Zelphish

Lot a hero? nah he aint shit when ive got the blade to his chin
im such a Joker.. the way my knife can turn a slight Smirk to a grin
cool
& ya chicks bad Jim, sure. been in the slammer a couple times, but hey..
guess u werent Biggs enuf, cuz no matter hw much u Piper she'll always b gay
not following
im a slugger, no horse play but a few run arounds n u'll get left in the dirt
just 1 combo'll send u to the dentist.. u'll see a Triple Crown when he smirks
nah
Zelph's handy with the 9, watch me put em in his place
only time he'll ever CZ.. is when i have one pointed at his face
aight I dig it
cash for days homie, best believe its a win when i play
cuz wen i have the .25 sent to a Lotto, uono if ima scratch em off or blow em away
cool

I think I may have even quoted smirk once more but fuck that shit. It ain't all about that. Zelphs hits were harder IMO and his verse was overall better worded & polished. I'm not saying smirk was bad at all though and still came with some shit & concepts that I dug. This was difficult to call, could go either way

V/Zelph

[Sharp]

up over closed battles

editing a vote here

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

What's up wi saying 14/16 and posting 10, you run out of concepts?

Tried to be cool here like fuck RB, but we know he had no options
Turned his back on his own,n just got flashbacks of his mom giving him up for adoption
lol nice. setup and punch meshed well. great way to start a verse
Girls'll never pick him first cuz he looks retarded that's a FACT
if a girl choose to go phish the unlucky bitch lost when she pulled this joker from the pack
eh, I like the angle u attempted but too many things I dont like. phish is a half nameplay, its retarded imho. some ppl like it I dont.. plus. if u want to be literal pulling a joker from the deck is usually a good thing.. u didnt sell the line enough for me
U & ya sister disgusting & dirty, wi u girls need mad protections
Just cuz U look Inbred doesn't give ya the excuse to be handing out yeast infections
decent. it felt clunky in how it was worded and came across a bit cumbersome for no reason, but the general idea was cool
This computer nerd can act dope but we look thru him & see he wack
phishin top tier, only if he hacked knucks account n used it to change his battle stats
yea I get it, but no. same as last time if not alil worst
Throw lefts n rights that ain't nice, I'll easily defend them geek
I'll be catching z's, wrist n make him repeatingly punch HIMSELF to sleep
this is better... dunno why u wanted to nameplay so much, the line isnt great but it seemed alot better by comparison to the last few
Done

Originally Posted by Zelphish

Lot a hero? nah he aint shit when ive got the blade to his chin
im such a Joker.. the way my knife can turn a slight Smirk to a grin
this is pretty good. I dig it, nice opener. setup worked. all in all this is above avg to good
& ya chicks bad Jim, sure. been in the slammer a couple times, but hey..
guess u werent Biggs enuf, cuz no matter hw much u Piper she'll always b gay
I dont get this. wording seemed fucked. iunno just a miss to me
im a slugger, no horse play but a few run arounds n u'll get left in the dirt
just 1 combo'll send u to the dentist.. u'll see a Triple Crown when he smirks
nah. the connection is too vague. it dont work. I see the angle but shit fell flat
Zelph's handy with the 9, watch me put em in his place
only time he'll ever CZ.. is when i have one pointed at his face
eh, its lazy and wack
cash for days homie, best believe its a win when i play
cuz wen i have the .25 sent to a Lotto, uono if ima scratch em off or blow em away

concept good. wp was almost good. but u had too many moving parts here and u didnt mesh em well. felt rushed

vote for lotto

slim margin, pretty competitive battle

[john hensley]

Somewhat close here. As far as quotes:

Lotto had the opener , the go phish and the closer that I thought were the best. The inbred line was aight but feel like it's been done with the yeast relation.

Zeph, the triple crown line had potential but just sayin horseplay wasn't enough of a tie in to make it dope imo. Your opener was my fav line, the closer wasn't bad but lotto lines have been done to death on him so it's gotta be mad creative to hit.

Lotto takes it, a cpl more quotes and not as many misses.

[Allen Knight]

UPPPIN

[Tic]

I have lotto edging it. First 2 were pretty good. Although phish was wordy, I liked it. That's really it tho. Zelph idk I wasn't feeling much from you this week. Smirk is played and wasn't flipped well enough to give you credit. I actually thought CZ was was decent, but otherwise meh.

Lotto gets it

[Destroyer]

opener, go fish, catch z's

vs

closer

most of zelph's shit which would normally be good was played. smirk on the face for example has been done and better, a few times. rest just kinda fell flat, concepts were there I think it was mostly a wording issue.

v/ls