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Originally Posted by Void
I wholly agree. Been treading over the same themes and even wording for a while. Duly noted.
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yo
i can never force myself to use the same rhyme twice back to back like you do though
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Knows he's exhausted. Knows he should off him.
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shizz like that, i'd never use the 'knows' masculine rhyme twice back-to-back like that, ever
just a personal assholeish limit i put in place for myself
not knocking you for it, just putting it out there since i didnt actually comment about anything in the piece with my last post and wanted you to know i did read it
enjoy or endure!