Interesting... i don't really know how to feed this. was kindof a poetic style, not my cup a tea. hard for me to critique this or give props on... the rhyming was average but that wasn't what this was about. u had some interesting wordplays or puns on adam and eve and apples i guess.. idunno. it just left me feeling a little empty, like i don't really know what to think of it. its something im not used to style wize.
Do yourself a favor and read all of Vulgar's drops in this section. He has like 4 or 5 in the last 2 weeks . I think you will like all of them man.
sorry for the wack feed, check my piece in here right now and tell me what u think
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Last edited by CopyPat; 07-16-2013 at 12:03 AM.
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