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Old 07-11-2013, 09:01 PM   #7
Slowhands
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Karma is a bitch lines, but nothing could be more inconsiderate
cause Karma is such a nice person.. the pussy aint ever killed shit
what? simplistic
Open mics, topicals, battles, u name it & he aint smashin it
so its no surprise when I leave Kar wrecked like a traffic accident
ok
I spit state of the art shit - classics that be defining the grades
u spit state of the art, shit.. fucked up schemes w/ lines that be played
meh
Now karma is defined by what comes around goes around
this much is true
with that orbiting nature its proof ur battles dont revolve around u
concept ok wording sucked
I know where to put trash like urs, theres no need to get ill
week 16 only means your starting & ending with an L..
nah

not a great verse, kar line was typical and the other was worded bad. the rest was average

K

I cory gunz size as twice that dude, I aint joke'n ..
one bullet'll hit & leave his mugshot on the news like snowden
set up sucked ass
So watch how u step'n, Bcos u aint that hard to murk
I can aswell leave bootprint on ur face & I dont even have to walk
what?
Bitch my punchlines is gold, obviously people dug it
Oh gad, if people ever dig your shit is after I bury u faggit
nope
& that win last week was by a hair's breadth, u shud thank god rookie
Without him it coulda gone 'The other way' like that malcolm movie
ok concept but not worded well
Plus gurls don't have time for u, they see him as less worth
If a chick ever say 'Whatsapp' she's just refer'n to a social network ..
nope

your verse was pure shit. spelling bad and shit wording doesn't make you good. reading your verse was hard and makes me want to punch a fucking kitten in the face.


vote lecture for not being AS shitty
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