Favorite part was;
take these rhymes as they meant to be, fine intricate keys..
divine as da vinci unleashed, derived from the sickest of inks
Thought that was pretty smooth.
It got a bit hard to flow around 2/3rds of the way through but picked back up in the end. I think it was mainly the engines line that threw me off. I'm sure if I re-read it a few times I could understand your scheme a bit better for that part, I'm just basing off first read-through.
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