Gazette - nameplay heavy verse. I didn't see that lexicon bar like everyone else...it's cool wordplay, but calling him a con isn't a hard punch, and it was worded poorly. Second bar wasn't good, just a statement, no real wit or creativity. A lec trick was forced, battery charge connection didn't make sense the way it was worded. The helium line was okay, a decent concept but bad execution. Closer was solid.
Lecture - nameplay to start, Gaz-L's I get but it was really forced, not too good. Roast bar wasn't a hard punch, especially cuz everyone gets roasted. Too simple. Atomic bar was simple too but worded well and funny to me. Battle hymens was decent. G-spot / pussy line back to back with hymens wasn't good, and not a creative concept.
Probably seems harsh, but if you're new you should be fine, atleast you both seem to be on the right track. Not a terrible battle just no fire concepts. Pretty close - I had Lecture with the edge for atomic and hymens, and generally better worded shit.
V/ Lecture
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