[brokenhal0]

This was one of the more bizarre battles of the week, with both artists showcasing their imagination in abstract yet masterfully crafted ways.

MR J - Your verse was good, but it felt more like a story in a book rather than a rhythmic and percussive flow. The deep concepts, hidden subliminal messages, and allegory were great takes on the picture. However, the flow seemed literally story-driven. It was an interesting piece to read with a beat a good story with strange emotion and imagery of a fever dream/throw back horror
world building overall on point personally i like if you show cased more writing technique but it was a fun read.

OBJ - Your verse also gave me a bizarre and abstract feeling, similar to MR J's. This style is something you seem to master a bit better. You kept the rhyme scheme on the edge of sparing abstractive wordplay for sacrifice of poetic narrative. This is definitely your strong suit, you kept the bars clean and structured in a more hip hop way if one wants to call it that.

Vote: OBJ