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Originally Posted by Loast

I'm a pistol popper.. hit shit talkers, run ya mouth and i'll fuck up ya world
u eva see maine squeeze back on a nigga i bare hug his bitch as i'm fuckin his girl
just eh for me.. flip was cool, conneciiton was a little off
BarZ. is back that means bars are back, watch what u say or i'm bruisin ya jaw
n get stick in ya mouth with such precise ur dentist will thank me for doin his job
wording? typo? na... missed
Atomics cool but ur new alias should come with a homosexual clause
behind ya name mysteries involved n can only be solved with a hysterical pause
ok..
Fag! Mainespitz? nah, he gotta deep throat when he honestly tries
shit, u dick ride n lose so much it would be nuts if this fag didn't swallow his pride
again, cool concept.. the wording made the connection seem off tho
I seen ya battle with Metts and to beat me your gonna have to cheat to win
cuz Joe Jackson up so bad i wont be surprised if he bleached his skin
fresh, that wordplay was dope
my schemes is sick, I drop bombs on rats when these cats see me workin
Atomic bombs wouldn't harm a fly.. let alone spark fear in a japanese person
na... thought it could've been executed much better. Punch was weak
how the fuck do u exceed high expectations when your shits harmless and trash
I can make a lower case about everything u write that a educate a kindergarten class
eh...
Barz,




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Originally Posted by Atomic

this fagg0ts a dyke, backhand 'em & fracture his sight,
hit em w/ a lo blow <-- but that's just him on any saturday night!
na...
didn't believe me? I even said you'd get wrecked bitch,
kid won't LIVE UP to our expectations, lo will be dead in a second!
huh? oh.. like live "up"... lo(lows) dead in seconds. ok.... na.
u ghostwrite? nothing but wackness is what this herb will lend,
b/c theres no POINT to your TEXT, this isn't fucking words w/ friends.
seen it done way fresher, but I'll give u this one.
low tier is clearly where this fgt would rank,
so plz keep it 100, even though that's less than u have in ur bank.
I liked this, simple yet effective.. connection was easy to see
i read 1 line in ur verse & thought mannn thats enough, please..
cuz even OckSee's; he's goin down.. it's the only way BarZ will SuckSeed!
lol @ suckseed... props for effort, was a stretch tho... didn't hit w/ me
ur a shy little queer, u got no skill so stop hiding ur fear,
u spittin dope?!
i'd have to take 'em under my wing cuz that's NOT gonna fly around here!
could've been executed better, and the concept is played to death (under my wing)
my hands'll wrap around ur fuckin neck & i'll clench hard till u choke,
fucking ironic your NAME is BARS cuz i can't NAME a BAR that you've wrote.
I htink this could've been worded better to make this punch hit, the setup didn't compliment ur punch at all

gl

I enjoy'd reading Barz. verse... he seems a little rusty from what I remember, but MAINSPITZ came lazy here... and it show'd. I think this could've been way doper, but for what they brought Barz. edged this one.

mvgt: Barz.