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Originally Posted by Advocate
Damn?! I gotta say that was a story I wasn't expecting. Lol the Jews strike back! It was a good drop, especially considering it was your first one on the site. I appreciate the feedback you had gave me on my latest post. It's always nice to get constructive advice, and I try to give that back to those who do so. Lol but back to your post, I wasn't sure if it was a rhyme or poetry. The only thing I'm gonna tell you is work on how you structure your post. Other than that, it was still a good read and you demonstrated good illustration wit your words. Keep it up!
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Thanks for words, I jotted it down and typed it up and I feel you on that peotry vibe. I didn't wanna edit it much cause I wanted to drop a quick one but you're right on the structure; needs some work.