Nycspitz:
Alot of energy alot of power
felt like a practice flex/battle piece still raw nasty stylish
i enjoy the violence needed more story or environment to die in
still a strong flex
Symetrik: This read like a song which is a good thing this a verse
that would sound good recorded it's tight direct to the point
it sticks to the topic at hand ,, IMO it was a perfect written
to the point of being a little to perfect
some added abstractions or internals would have added depth but that's subjective
MVGT -- TIE
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