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Old 12-04-2022, 07:51 PM   #5
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@Universe This was pretty nice. Mechanically, it was very sound. Smooth flow, solid scheme work. Thematically it works. It reads in my head as a 50s radio jockey. Checked all the boxes as far as tying into the topic. Would have loved to see a more linear approach to narration, but I can deny the broadcasted propoganda rant approach gave you the freedom to flex more scheme wise.
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