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after reading this over i can nitpick at the pseudo subconscious suggestion that can overplay in
world building in terms of how a writer establishs the story ...Dominate your opening was fire and it reads like edgar allen poe would have wrote that verse but then u establish a character named elle ..a character i used in a prior battle a few weeks back
its the little things you know found it odd and thought you was implying a overlapping reality ...your tension building was spot on the dialogue on point short simple
and stylish not your best work but still enjoyable as most everything u write

Mike wrecka i read your song to the necro beat and your flow was spot on you literally left no bar un connected i also thought your content was dope edgy class of 1999 vibes i seen the whole lab and the characters in my mind and i was reading along with the quick bpm the tension was faster then dominates but not as powerful in terms of its brooding i thought your flow was better but less abstract and thats just some subjective bullshit anyway and as close as this was u reminded me a bit of eviction at times how quickly the story became personal but still engaging.

i think DOMINATES opener was better and his slick word patterning got him a WIN here by a chin hair it wasn't doms most serious verse of the season but it still brought a little more to the table in terms of style and finesse where mike wrecka your flow was better at least in terms of how it read and your environment was dope too just lacking a little bit in depth in terms of the magnetism making it feel rushed .