I’ve read the champ battle. Here’s the thing.
- There was no clear winner to me
- The verses are very long, so it would take me a long time to analyze them more thoroughly to determine who I really thought took it, but
- I honestly found both verses an absolute fucking chore to read through even once and I have no desire to reread either of them more closely
So, I don’t know what to do with that.
Both are great writers in general and certainly I consider both to be better than I am so I hope they don’t take this the wrong way, but it is what it is.
Frank was technically impressive as ever but the content was boring af to me this week. I have Z E R O interest in hair styling. And the ending was just like oh ok I’m at 60 lines now I guess I’m done?
NYC’s story was more engaging but still not exactly gripping. I struggled with keeping up with who’s POV he was writing from. Ending was weird? And rhymes seemed forced a lot of the time.
Overall, Frank’s writing was better, but NYC’s piece was more engaging. I don’t know what’s more important to me.
Vote = lower the line limits
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Last edited by Dominate; 08-11-2022 at 12:56 AM.
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