RAWN MD - Enjoyed this piece definitely a step in the right direction compared to last weeks while your story was engaging and your verse flowed smooth the use of the name Geoffry throws off the flow at times its such oddly worded name that it stunts the momentum of the rhyme scheme at least when i read it to myself that's my only complaint that stands out.
Masterrock - I enjoyed this while i think your opponent went more of straight line in terms of his story yours kinda drifted here and there but the emotional connection to the imagery and the wordplay kept me engaged i found it to be enjoyable.
MVGT - TIE I feel like both verses are equal no one really did better then the other
Last edited by brokenhal0; 07-29-2022 at 07:35 AM.
|