Eviction - when you develop such a emotional connection with your readers
its kinda easy to ''feel''that you wasn't really trying hard with this verse
i still found it to be a enjoyable written but at times clunky
its dark emotional and personal one of your better styles going up against you I noticed you take a almost battle rapper approach in how you interweave your opponent into your story your good at it but this time somethings felt off
Dominate - You pretty much said alot with a little and I instantly LOL'd theres irony in writing and its all beautiful who knew ciggerates can have so much fun
this was almost a tie but evictions competitive and relentless spirit gave him just enough momentum to take it MVGT - EVICTION
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