[brokenhal0]

This might be one the top battles this season these verses can be dissected into countless paragraphs in terms of who did what and how ....every written was great.... not only is this a very subjective vote-damn near 3 way tie- most likely this is gonna end in a controversial decision and im doing my best here to not have anything else sway me other then my heart felt opinion after reading each verse 3x over

Soule - Not only was this story fresh and compelling with beautiful character development smooth word play and bright imagery it was borderline
directorial in it's delivery my only complaint is at times i felt like i was reading
a story for real like a actual book but u never strayed and kept hiphop in the formula till the end
imma be that guy that actually awards a higher credit for completing this verse
a few days before the deadline respect impressive don't get brought up enough but w.e compared to last week verse you definitely took my critique in the right direction impressive respect

Deadman - True to your style i can tell soule motivated you cause your wordplay
in this was immaculate even tho the approach is typical yeah w.e lemme just drop my usual gem it was a morose heavy captivating verse speaking as the ocean or waters of creation speaking on the fall of humans who where created to walk with the gods but failed onto themselves i fk with it ..only critique its more of a statement with a story i also noticed some relation in your verse with other writtens dropped these past weeks was it done purposely or subconsciously regardless it adds more life to the verse respect also extra .019 points for dropping before the deadline!

Frank - The style you used this time was more direct then your usual approach all caps exclamation powerpoints line breaks wasnt needed and you knew it
i really enjoyed this verse playing on the story of Alexander and babar
was a bit safe as these characters have been subject to many experiences through out time but your take as always is influential personable and downright stylish a true writers writer this written was on the bleaker end of the spectrum I can feel each word good shit.
if i must critique you on this it's you repeat the same word alot sometimes (alexander) and while its the magic of spelling
and netcee 101 in terms of rhyming it was noticeable for me a bit of a easy way out but as i said before your a master at that technique its your style


MVGT - SOULE extra .123 points for completing before the deadline this was one of my favorite writtens of this season it came from your mind and just really is perfect example of what this tournaments about in terms of creative writing and unlike last weeks verse you took chances you added some soul'e' - pun intended and really just outshine two of the top writers that are still active on this site... respect ...
your story was original refreshing lighthearted with no flaws other then at times it reads like a chapter from a novel impressive