Mvgt - Eviction
Adverse if your opening 6 bars where delivered sharper as the rest of the plot developed
I think this would have been a closer battle imo
example:
I’m all bone
Stripped of my humanity, hollow and brittle
All my regrets laid out like a table spread of holiday kibble
Ready to eat, bon appetite, the devil’s flicking the lighter
Smoke filling my lungs, like fattened lambs set to be slaughtered
lighter and slaughtered while making sense metaphorically did not rhyme
which through me off a bit those lines lost any momentum you built as a opener imo but you picked it back up and i thought the rest of the verse was on point you had a intricate rhyme structure going which I enjoyed but overall evictions consistent building of visceral impactful verbiage and slick internals gave him the W
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