Eviction - As much as your whining annoys me you cant be denied as one of this season's top writers or damn near close to it in my opinion this is another great written full of imagery reflection and lyricism..my only criticism is that you'r rhyme schemes are repetitive and you tend not delve into different aspects of storytelling ... but if its not ''Broken'' don't fix it (pun intended)..your style has been getting you W's and works for you , I personally enjoy it..
Nycspitz - Close to a tie tbh but since you blessed this forum with so many masterpieces this season im holding you to a higher tier , this felt rushed and while its shows your mastery as a man poet lyrically i think evictions tenacity and overall workload paid off this round
MVGT- Eviction
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